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Reviews for Fancy Time with the Beautiful People?

By : numbsickfuck
  • From redeyedemon on August 15, 2012
    This was dark, brutal, violent, and just fantastic. I really enjoyed it. Evil and dark Draco and Lucious make me happy.
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  • From numbsickfuck on May 12, 2009
    Still not going to review my own story. I just want to thank you for your reviews.

    for both hieisdragoness and moiramctaggart:

    Thank you very much. *bows*
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  • From moiramctaggart on May 11, 2009
    Wow, that's hot. Looking forward to the update.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on May 10, 2009
    wow
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  • From numbsickfuck on May 07, 2009
    for Wynja:

    Thank you very much for feedback and I'm very happy that you liked the story this far ...and I take a certain pride if I get someone hooked:D *bows*

    About the "This is what I say." (And this is what I think.)-way of dealing discussions... Of course I appreciate outsider's feedback. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.

    I *do* have my reasons for that style, though. As I tend to write in third person, I find it the easiest (and rather fun) way to add more point of views in the story, to tell what is happening inside all participants' minds, it would be rather difficult otherwise if there happens to be discussion a-going. I'm just (rather impatiently) waiting for the rest of the story from my beta, so that style is there ...and changing the style in the middle of the story is IMO rather bad writing.

    Personally I like it (umm... if I didn't, I wouldn't be writing that way.) so I guess I will continue that way, though I like to experiment with new styles, it just does no good to stuck in one format. (Except writing about Malfoys ...and especially Malfoycest:D)

    No, of course I don't think you are stupid if you find that confusing.

    However, my humble opinion is that if you skip the (thoughts) all the way, I think you lose an important part of the whole picture and characterization. (Argh, I'm going to sound patronizing, sorry.) Do what thou wilt, of course and absolute thanks for your opinions and taking your time to write a long, detailed feedback post.
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  • From wynja on May 07, 2009
    Hi you! I've only read one story from you before, I think: "The Forest Whispers Secrets Left Untold", which was just great... I loved this too, it was very smexy, but I DIDN'T love the thoughts, that is; (thoughts)... I didn't feel they added to the story and it made the text a bit difficult to read... I DO respect that everyone has a different style, and likes to try different things, but I thought you might appriciate an outsider feedback on it... I WILL continue to read the story though, cause... well... I'm hooked, and I understand if you decide to continue this style through it, but I kinda found myself skipping the thougts... it was all three of them, and yeah... as I said, it got confusing... ;o) YOu are free to claim that I'm just too stupid, if you want... ;o)
    All the best!
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  • From numbsickfuck on May 07, 2009
    (No, I am definitely not going to review my own story, I really *hate* the fact that there is no "answer review" button.)

    For DTDY:

    Ah, thank you. Next chapter (rest of the story) probably incoming today.
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  • From ANON - DTDY on May 06, 2009
    wow...that is...just awesome
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