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Reviews for False Pretense

By : ricerabbit
  • From margaritama on May 16, 2009
    drunken, uninhibted sex; drunken, uninhibted sex; drunken, uninhibted sex; drunken, uninhibted sex!!!!!!!

    Come on, everybody; chant with me! LMAO! I think I want to smack Hermione, stop fighting him and just have a good time. Draco seems like an okay bloke who can shag you into oblivious nirvana...why fight it? I think Draco really likes her, why else would he put up with the abuse.

    Now, everybody - with me, on the count of three: 1, 2, 3:

    drunken, uninhibted sex; drunken, uninhibted sex; drunken, uninhibted sex; drunken, uninhibted sex!!!!!!

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  • From Robs on May 16, 2009
    ooo, there's nothing like a challenge is there? I hope she knows what she's doing, because I reckon Draco will turn out to be the better player in this game they're playing. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Coipje on May 16, 2009
    Go Hermie ;)
    show that man
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  • From kazfeist on May 16, 2009
    I can see this is not going to end well! :D
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  • From QuicksilverEyes on May 15, 2009
    Hahaha, can't wait to see drunk Hermione. This story isn't boring at all!
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  • From dragongirl on May 15, 2009
    Love this Hermione, so out of her waters just a hint... lol..
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  • From HighViscosity on May 15, 2009
    Yay! They're gonna get sloshed! I'm excited!

    Thanks for updating so frequently!!
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  • From dragongirl on May 11, 2009
    I love this games of cat and mouse, specially with this two.. Keep them coming...
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  • From HighViscosity on May 11, 2009
    She's jes' so silly!

    I liked the student-teacher interaction, very appropriate.
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  • From Robs on May 11, 2009
    Love it! Ahhh, why can't Hermione just admit she wants him, LOL. It will be interesting to see what happens on their 'date' to Hogsmeade. Look forward to the next update!
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  • From margaritama on May 11, 2009
    I am laughing so hard...I love the unexpected smut in each chapter...just when you think one is leaving, the other breaks. They are both pretending and it's so much fun to watch. I can't wait for them to just admit how they feel. Oh, a date. Oh, public places! HAAAA HAAA HAA
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  • From Coipje on May 11, 2009
    wel Hermione is one evil girl
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  • From margaritama on May 10, 2009
    LMAO - you go Hermione...now THAT'S how you trap a Slytherin. I adore her....LOL. Very clever indeed.
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  • From Eilisbelle on May 10, 2009
    good chapter!!!
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on May 10, 2009
    it is hot and i am loving the banter and i have to say go hermione
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