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Reviews for False Pretense

By : ricerabbit
  • From Robs on May 07, 2009
    So you posted another one? I thought I might read it, since it is currently only 3 chapters. I am saving the nicest thing until after exams have finished. Well, that was certainly an entertaining start. I love how Draco toys with her. He knows she wants it. She knows, deep down, she wants it, she just won't admit it. Can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From Coipje on May 07, 2009
    oooh my god another hot chapter Girl
    I am still sitting on the edge of my seat :D
    keep up the good work
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  • From dragongirl on May 07, 2009
    Glorious!!!!!!! Keep them coming... This promise to be fun....
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  • From on May 07, 2009
    I like it!! More please... I would like more!!!! As soon as possible!!!! Like Now!!! Aww come one just a little more with no big cliffs.... please please pretty please with a naked Draco on top????
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  • From DracosSlave on May 07, 2009
    “What is up with you and torturing your food?” Draco asked, leaning unusually close to her, “It hasn’t done anything to you.”

    “I’m just visualizing what I want to do to an annoying git sitting beside me,” Hermione snapped, flashing wicked eyes at him.

    “Oh honesty,” Draco sighed with faux emphasis, “Professor Snape isn’t that bad.”

    LMAO, I was laughing my arse off when I read that.

    I absolutely love your story! You Draco is so freaking sexy I want to be Hermione right now... Keep up with the chapters, cause the story is amazing!
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  • From margaritama on May 06, 2009
    He's so deliciously naughty....thanks for the response RR babe...you know I love you.
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  • From SpinLily on May 06, 2009
    I'm really enjoying this story so far. It seems a little more lighthearted... and I mean that as a compliment! Every now and again I like to read a D/Hr story that's not absolutely dripping with angst; it's refreshing. And I love that you update so often! So far this story and 'Nothing Like You and I' are two stories that I check up on daily. And didn't you say you are a graduate student? Where do you find the time?! I'm doing my final push to get my B.A. in English, and I hardly have time to breathe!

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From trixiedust on May 06, 2009
    He rather pisses me off, but I'm wondering if he's operating on always having been attracted to her, or if he's got something more nasty up his sleeve!

    Thanks for putting up 2 more chapters so quickly!
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  • From HighViscosity on May 06, 2009
    Yikes!
    Mmm... pressed up against a wall.
    I can't believe you've got three stories going at the same time! Wait... FIVE? Wow!
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  • From margaritama on May 06, 2009
    great second chapter..so will we be privvy to Draco's POV? I hope so...sounds like he likes her.
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  • From margaritama on May 06, 2009
    Well, aren't you on a writing frenzy...gosh, I'm going to have post and repost chapters with a single word in order to not have my fic pushed down! LOL - I like this darling. Sounds like fun. :-)
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  • From Coipje on May 06, 2009
    please continue
    because darling this is very hot
    I am sitting on the edge of my seat
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  • From HighViscosity on May 06, 2009
    Lovely beginning. I always like Hermione as a teacher! She said she wanted to do something important, and I can't think of anything better!

    Close talking, he he.
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  • From prayspivey on May 06, 2009
    I love it the way it is. I can really see myself reading this.
    I can't wait to see how the year unfolds for the two. Really looking forward to read
    the next CH.
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  • From kazfeist on May 06, 2009
    A very lovely beginning! I love postwar Hogwarts Professor stories! One small quibble: I think the school year in England starts September 1 and goes almost all the way through June. They have a longer break at Christmas and 'round Easter, I think. So Hermione would not have nine months at the school, but ten. You might want to check somewhere....I remember some forum, maybe FF.net, having the school year length as a subject and a British poster putting in the answer. Can't wait for the rest of the story, though! Your Draco sounds yummy! :D
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