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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on May 28, 2009
    about #7...

    Now that was interesting...the Birth of a Vampire Hunter. Hmmm, sounds like
    a story that could be written. Oh wait...you ARE writing it! :-)

    Okay..okay, I'll stop. :-]

    You know, you come up with some interesting torture...uhh..Rooms. I'm curious
    to see what you can do with a Glass Room.

    Let's see what else....oh yeah!

    About your crack fic, you're starting to get the hang of it, too bad that
    DtCL ISN'T an actual story, I think at this point you can pull it off, if
    you let yourself be confident enough to do it...and have someone beta it
    to see if it flows.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 26, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 8! Here might be part of Harry's fight!
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  • From ANON - SP777, with lots of 7's on May 22, 2009
    about #6...

    Hmm, ''making a way out of no way''.

    At least, we're starting to get some leeway here between the two, I was
    wondering how you were going to make it possible. Now comes the hard
    part of breaking through Harry's steel walls.

    So, will we see through Harry any changes in how he fights, because of this
    brief giving of...uhh...fluids?

    Damn, first the drool in the last story, now blood in this one. As long as you
    don't do golden showers we're alright. :-)
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  • From orpiment99 on May 22, 2009
    I liked the twist you gave that. Poor Harry! He doesn't like it when things aren't what he expects, does he?

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on May 22, 2009
    oh damn. man i want more!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 22, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 7!!! The bond is changing between them? Will Harry give in?
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 20, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From ANON - Purple-er on May 19, 2009
    sounds like they will have to work more 'closely' to survive the next chapter...hehehe

    waiting for the next chapter *happy reader* ^_^
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 16, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 5!!! I hope Hermione cast a tracking spell or Harry figures out a way out!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 15, 2009
    Hmm...I meant to say ''I gotta admit it's almost funny how Draco WANTS to get a taste of Harry so bad.''
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 15, 2009
    about #4...

    Man, talk about being stuck between a rock & a hard place!

    I gotta admit it's almost funny how Draco waits to get a taste of Harry
    SO bad...and he won't give Draco any 'play'. :-)

    Also, that was very smarta-...err...I mean SMART of you to make the master
    vampire a...woman. It was unexpected. :-)

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  • From ANON - Purple-er on May 15, 2009
    hey this is awesome...
    when will harry get more human? ;)


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  • From orpiment99 on May 15, 2009
    Well, I have faith that by the end of the story, Harry won't want to kill Draco anymore. :)

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From orpiment99 on May 13, 2009
    Another lovely chapter.

    I think Harry is more unstable, more dangerous than Draco. Because of that, I see Draco more likely to be the one who compromises and I feel that would "make him more human", I suppose. I feel that if Harry wins, he will eventually destroy himself and in a very painful way. However, that may change as you write the story.

    Looking forward to the next installment!
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 12, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 4!!! Draco is going to have to change his way of thinking if he wants to seduce Harry. He's not a pet or a slave. And it'll be a battle to keep Harry from killing him.
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