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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - SP777 on May 12, 2009
    about 3...

    I'm not sure if I mentioned this but,..how..in..the..HELL..are you going
    to get Harry & Draco together in this??? O_o

    I mean, the relationship is already VOLATILE!

    Another thing, don't know why this popped in my head, but for some reason
    a community with only Vampires & their Long Desired, where they'd live
    peacefully and not suffer persecution, ever thought of that or that wouldn't
    be possible?
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  • From ANON - acr on May 11, 2009
    Great Chapter! This Draco is very creepy. He's more like the original Dracula than the modern angsty/sexpot vampire. He feels very inhuman. I also like your intense, driven Harry. He's a bit creepy himself. Will we ever get the full story of what happened to Ginny? I like the way you're feeding us bits and pieces over time.
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  • From orpiment99 on May 10, 2009
    I can't help but want Draco to end up winning this contest.

    I like the take that you have on vampires in this story. It has been a while since I've seen a story where the vampires are...not so nice.
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on May 10, 2009
    oh man my favorite combo. harry/draco and one is a vamp. *shivers* yumm
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 09, 2009
    Can they make this work? I soooo need chapter 3!!!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 09, 2009
    about #2...

    First, once more with feeling...Wooohooo!!! :-o

    Second, The web would cause death to undeath

    -Death to Undeath??? ....as opposed to death to the 'undead'???

    *looks sideways to the authoress* are you TRYing to be difficult or different?

    Third, I like how this Harry has more tricks up his sleeves than Houdini. Makes
    me wonder what else you've got planned.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 06, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 2!!!
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  • From ANON - acr on May 06, 2009
    Great chapter! I loved "Mongoose" and I'm so glad to see the sequel. As I've said in other reviews, I love the way you reinvent Draco and Harry in each of your stories. Each is very IC, given the circumstances you set up in your story, but each is different. I like this fic because it's got a more active (for lack of a better term) plot. I enjoyed "Providence" also, but it was very internal. It was mostly about what was going on inside Draco and Harry's heads. This one has more of an external focus, which makes it very interesting.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on May 06, 2009
    about the story...

    First Reaction:

    Woohooo!!! Yayyyy!!! and Alright!!!! :-D You started it, I was wondering when
    you would get to this! :-)

    I thought for sure you were waiting until it got close to October. Oh yeah, this
    is definitely going to my story.

    Second Reaction:

    It's off to a good start, it's going to be interesting how you get these two
    together considering the STRONG opposition from Harry's side. Something tells
    me there WILL be some unwillingness in the coming together, especially once
    Draco figures out how to use his powers.

    By the way, how long will this be?
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