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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Mysterious Egg

By : Hedwigseyes
  • From BratGirl83 on September 15, 2021

    I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update 😃


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  • From SpeckyClarke on February 25, 2017

    Pretty good story even if the language used is a little simplistic.  Please inform me of updates.

    Specky Clarke.


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  • From DawnRinger on February 19, 2017

    I tried to give you one more chapter, but I couldn't. Where is all of Harry's knowledge coming from? He suddenly knows about goblin etiquette and house elf rituals. There seems to be zero concern about Hedwig. Last chapter you tell us she's been gone for a week, but Harry barely bats an eye. She suddenly shows up at the beginning of this chapter with no explanation, and again, Harry barely seems to care about where she was or what happened to her. And he's at the Dursley's, what fire is he putting the egg into? Sorry, but this story just isn't good enough for me to keep reading. There are way too many plot holes.

    I know there's another story similar to this one, I think on this site, I'm going to go look for it.


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  • From DawnRinger on February 19, 2017

    Sorry, should have finished the chapter before posting my previous review. The bank meeting took place at 9am, why is Griphook greeting Harry by saying 'afternoon'? The story also seems to be quite rushed. No reaction from ANYONE after the will reading? Really? It feels like you could have filled in a little more detail in a few places.


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  • From DawnRinger on February 19, 2017

    6 hours to read two, very short, notes? When the story starts, Harry is counting down until midnight. He sees the owl and gets the package and two notes shortly after that. Then, when he's done reading the notes, it's suddenly 6 am. Why not just have him fall back asleep instead of having this very unrealistic time jump?

    There are also a few grammar mistakes, but nothing bad enough to make me stop reading just yet.


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  • From GodOfAll on January 08, 2013
    Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
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  • From snichol98 on September 14, 2011
    Love the story would really like to read the continuation of this and your other stories. If you need BETA help just lemme know..
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  • From tigerchica36 on August 31, 2009
    You are a really good writer. For real.
    I personally enjoy how in tune the characters are with how they are in canon.
    I enjoy the same type of characters just in different situations you know what I mean?
    Anyway I just wanted to say that you really are doing a good job and I enjoy all of your work.

    PS of you would like I would be willing to be your 'stand-in' beta? E-mail me at tigerchica36@aol.com of you agree...
    Thanks either way!
    =]=]
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  • From shadows77769 on June 02, 2009
    haha great chapter =] keep up the good work
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  • From angelnomiko on June 01, 2009
    lol that was great what they did to ron and ginny .. please please update soon i would would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From gahzor on May 29, 2009
    Not a bad story, but i think you need to slow things down like the other person says and maybe add abit more story, currently its just BAM this happens BAM this happened BAM BAM BAM all this stuff just happens with no story with it.
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  • From shadows77769 on May 24, 2009
    ooh you could also use banshees =]
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  • From shadows77769 on May 16, 2009
    as for some of the creatures you could use, lets see
    there are the merpeople, the giants,( u could use hagrid to help with that) ghosts. (can't think of any more =p) ^ ^ can't wait to see the new chapters
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  • From shadows77769 on May 16, 2009
    I like this story =]
    the plot is very well thought up. only criticism i have would be to kind of slow it down a bit

    the story seems very rushed to me. slow it down, add some details. add more concerning the main bits of informations, like the birth of apollo the sex scenes the marriage, and such

    don't get me wrong i really like it it just seems rushed =] keep the chapters coming however =]
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  • From ameliasneed on May 11, 2009
    wow this is going good i can't wait till their is more of it please keep me posted, thank you. ameliarose23
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