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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - qwerty on July 25, 2009
    I really REALLY LOVED this chapter! I'm so glad that we got a more in-depth look at Severus and his needs. The need for compliments was hinted at before but...wow. I adore all the emotional development that's going on.
    There were several lines in this chapter that I loved. "The [sullied] tomb was now more a representation of the soul of the man who lay buried beneath it" is the perfect one-liner for describing how Dumbledore truly was. Everyone wanted to believe in the benevolent Headmaster but he definitely had some unsavory aspects to him.

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  • From ANON - Jen on July 25, 2009
    Thanks, I loved the new chapter! I love the first and last parts...what a surprise, lol. I really thought that the part with Snape and Harry was really hot. I do think that this is one of my fave chapters :) Update again soon!
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  • From ANON - DigitalAristocrat on July 25, 2009
    I have spent the past couple of days reading nothing but this fanfiction in my spare time and I have found it to be truly amazing. You really put your heart (and knowledge of the Hp characters) into this. I've gotten many emotional reactions out of this story and that makes your story soar above the rest of the fanfctions ive read lately. Your work is brilliant AND you update on regular intervals. I will be waiting for the next chapter with as much patience as i can muster. Truly, you are doing one hellof a job.
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  • From FemFatale on July 24, 2009
    Ah!

    Brilliant chapter! I've been stalking this story and a few others waiting for updates all day and when I saw this one with a new chapter I was ecstatic.

    I love how you portray Sev, especially with him wanting the same human comforts that anyone would want. Marvelous job so far, can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Mia on July 24, 2009
    I honestly can not think of a single thing that has even the minute potential to put me off your story. It is all kinds of realistic (for the realm it is in, afterall) and feels so genuine. You have a depth and an insight into relationships in your writing that feels like no one could ever have thought of this before you. It is what draws me back eagerly into your story every time. You, love, know how to tell quite a story. How is it that you manage to write about magic and bonds anf phoenixes and the like, yet you leave me feeling as though you never wrote a single word that was anything but the most absolute truth. Thank you.

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - Tiffani on July 24, 2009
    Aw so sweet how Severus reacted to receiving a compliment. I loved when Harry told Draco to also compliment Severus. This chapter sorted out many issues that were bothering Harry about his relationship with Severus and Draco. It was an amazing chapter and you addressed Harry's fears very well and sorted them out well. ^_^
    Lovely chapter and I'm very excited about the next one
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  • From jonesrl08 on July 24, 2009
    please please please PLEASE update soon! i absolutely LOVE this story, it has the perfect blend of plot & smut =) i'm really impressed with the way you have carefully developed the relationship between harry, draco, & snape. too many authors have the three of them jump straight into bed (which i can't stand!) your plot line is AMAZING, and your characterization is spot on. i can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From MaskedLily on July 23, 2009
    YES YES YES YES YES!!!!!!!! Finally the stubborn bastard hasseen the light!!!! I'm so freakin happy I could go outsde and dance a jig in the street. Please tell me there will be more. Yes I want the smut and all that his decision implies, but I also want to see what happens with the ministy and all of that stuff going n outside of them. Keep it up, awesome job, lots of love and all that jazz. And once more Congrats on another successful chapter. I have to admit its hard waiting for the new chapters. The equivalent of waiting for a new book to come out in a series or something like that. Christmas and birthdays pale in comparison to the feeling of wanting a new book lol. So that should give u some idea of how much I like ur story. =)
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  • From ANON - amyl on July 22, 2009
    I hate the end of chapters when there's not one rite after...lol... this is such a great story. I just love what u have done with the people. Thank u.
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  • From MyaMalfoy on July 22, 2009
    OMFG! OMFG! OMFG!!! It happened!!! It's here! Oh, I LOVED the little show Draco instigated with the fiery phoenix, or Harry's break-up (bye, loser.) and then there's Harry's realization (FINALLY!!!) that he wants to be with Draco and Severus!! YAY!!! Now time for the GOOD stuff!!! Can't wait for the next chappie, keep up the great work!
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  • From LydiasTravel on July 22, 2009
    Yea! Finally! Well, almost finally. I'm waiting on "the scene" as you well know. Are you actually going to write the smut or just gloss over it? My mouth is watering in eager anticipation of the next chapter! (PS. If I accidently reviewed the same chapter twice and said practically the same thing, it's because I had a small fight with someone, maybe aff maybe my internet provider, not entirely certain, I just know a fight went down, and my review lost)
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  • From ANON - Mia on July 22, 2009
    You have a fantastically graceful way of incorporating a slow, searing burn of flame into your story. I can't get enough of your words now. They are mind crack. They leave me dizzy and breathless with awe and indescribable jittery, fluttery things. You leave me brokenly wordless and with the desire to be profoundly articulate all at once. How am I supposed to survive this kind of writing?

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 22, 2009
    I was reading this fic on FF.net but now that its getting good...lol. Please please please update again soon, its amazing. HP/SS/DM is like one of my fave pairings. Thanks so much for the hot new chapter.

    The whole process of having sex is so often rushed in fics but the buildup you've made had me getting excited over a first kiss. Keep up the amazing work.


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  • From ANON - dana_aeryn on July 21, 2009
    I feel bad for Cadell, but hell, this is the best cahpter ever. Yay for Draco and Severus. Harry said within a month! Here's hoping all goes well until then. Wonder if we'll be seeing more of Kinsley soon. He can't be pleased about the new candidate.
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  • From PanickedSerenity on July 21, 2009
    Yes! I hope everything goes well. I feel bad for Cadell though. Oh well, such is life. Thanks for the new chapter.
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