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By : Lomonaaeren

From ANON - qwerty on July 21, 2009
They're together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *happy dance* Hopefully they can work things out between them so that they're comfortable with one another.
I wonder if Cadell is going to be petty about this and start something...
Great chapter!

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From on July 21, 2009
WOO! 22 chapters later and they've all finally realized what they want! I think all your readers (myself included) are as happy as Draco and Severus in this moment xD You are the queen of suspense. Now I'll be twitching in anticipation for the rest. I've waited this long so less than a month (as time goes in the story) will be nothing :D That is...if all goes right. I might cry if anything else happens to seperate the three D:

Hmm, I do worry about Cadell. Angry ex's are always something to watch out for. As are those people who don't side with Harry's political views and/or are still untrusting of his bond/bond mates. Kingsley and his lot seem mostly tamed but one never knows.... GAH too many variables! They should just run away to a private island so they can't be inturrupted on their path to forming a triad xD

Like always, I can hardly wait for the next chapter! :)
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From ANON - Tiffani on July 21, 2009
YAY!!!!!
I'm doing my happy dance right now
I feel a little bad for the guy Harry had been dating, but he was really just being used so he didn't need to stay with Harry.
That was awesome when Harry finally did get back and say he wanted to be with Draco and Severus.
Oh I loved this chapter. I'm very excited about the next one
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From ANON - Tiffani on July 19, 2009
Yay Draco finally got to kiss Harry and I'm happy that he told Harry the simple truth lol
I'm excited about more of this story ^_^
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From spyderlunacy09 on July 19, 2009
I like this story a lot. I wish that there were more updates so that I could find out what happened because its very addictive.
Keep up the great work!
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From alleycat88 on July 19, 2009
Ah Harry. I did enjoy Colben. She seems like she will be a very interesting character!! Poor Draco and Severus though...Harry is just so daft sometimes. I loved how Narcissa was spot on about Harry, and shes not even his bondmate! Excellent chapter can't wait for more! And I anticipate when Harry will finally be with Snape and Draco!
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From fantasypainter on July 18, 2009
I can see where Draco and Severus are both coming from, but they've spent many years perfecting tormenting Harry and making him feel "less than" in numerous ways that they themselves feel superior; whereas Severus and Draco have always been at least fond of each other. It really isn't fair to expect Harry to instantly adjust his vision to see them the way they want him to. The least they can do is attempt to communicate with him in the manner he feels most comfortable (like Draco finally did when he came right out and stated what they wanted from him, even if he did equate it to leading Harry by the hand like a child). Their mental comparisons to Harry of being simple sound as though they still have an underlying opinion of him being "less than" or not quite good enough and I think Harry feels this, just as he did when he lived with the Dursleys. Harry just wants to be loved and accepted for himself, not because of who he is, what he's done - to be good enough NOW, not after he's been molded into what his bondmates want him to be. They've also done a good job of making him feel like they can get along just fine without Harry, personally, and who doesn't wish to feel needed, not just wanted? As far as Draco and Severus go, Draco really needs to start building up Severus in the manner that Severus does Draco - realizing that he's not the only one who could use some confidence and a few compliments. In other words, a little give along with the take would be great. That could be what Harry means, in part, with the selfish issue he has with Draco. I find it interesting that Narcissa can see the situation fairly clearly. She seems to have a firm handle on what Harry's like and how he looks at his relationships. Definitely looking forward to more chapters.
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From PanickedSerenity on July 18, 2009
Thanks for the new chapter! I look forward to the next!
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From on July 17, 2009
Oh my! Harry's denial is really driving me up a wall! Every time Draco and Severus do something that I'm sure will convince him to form a triad with them, he comes back with some reason why they won't work. And the most frustrating part of it is that all his reasons are valid! Or at least mostly valid. Sometimes I feel like Harry's being a bit of a hypocrite. But of course, that's just Harry. Always too stubborn. Hopefully Severus and Draco can get through to him soon! I'm craving the moment he opens the bond the other way.

The political plot is full steam ahead! I bet Kingsley is really biting those nails now, eh? What has he gotten himself into, the poor man. And Narcissa is absolutely brilliant! You've made her the perfect mix of intuition and superiority without allowing her ego to get too out of check. I wonder what that book is that she won't let Draco see.

I'll be here, on the edge of my seat, until the next chapter :)
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From ANON - qwerty on July 17, 2009
Awesome chapter. I know how you write the different ways Severus and Draco are attacking the barrier between them and Harry.
Keep going!
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From LiteraryBeauty on July 17, 2009
Nice new chapter! I like how both Draco and Severus are making efforts to change. I hope that Harry soon realizes that he is not exactly perfect himself, and expecting his bondmates to change without offering any sort of change in return is unrealistic. He needs to give them a chance and stop judging them by past actions; that is, after all, what he's been telling everyone ELSE for the year they've been bonded. Sheesh.

I can't wait for more! Oh, and I thought the new figurehead (can't remember her name now! So horrible with names) was a very interesting and unique character.
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From ANON - Katrina on July 17, 2009
I have to come out of my shadow hiding and admit that this story has me constantly dashing over to my computer every Tuesday and Friday to see if the next chapter has been posted yet.

Never before have I found a Harry Potter fanfiction threesome done so seamlessly while also keeping me hanging on for 20+ chapters. I truly enjoy your writing style and this story has certainly become one of my most favorites.

Also, chapter 20 was a great surprise to me, with Draco's jealousy finally boiling over enough to confront Harry. The confrontation was executed splendidly, allowing Draco to get his point across while at the same time neither alienating Harry or pushing him away for any incredibly long length of time. And of course, Draco got a kiss out of the ordeal as well.
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From LiteraryBeauty on July 16, 2009
*sigh* I loved this chapter. I can't wait to hear Harry's thoughts on Draco's "revelation." I'm sure it will be groundbreaking.

Severus talking with Draco about how they share something that Harry can't made me feel sad. Though I know triads aren't always equal, I hope they can include Harry fairly, despite the distance between them.

I loved the kiss! I think your readers all over the world heaved a sigh of, "Finally!" LOL Myself included, of course.

Excellent writing, as always, and I look forward to your update!
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From spooksies on July 15, 2009
ooohhhhhh..........do i sense a threesome coming?? i saw the way Hermione was licking her lips, like she just knew what was gonna happen next!!!

HEHEHEHE.

laters!

miko ~_^
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From on July 15, 2009
I've finally caught up with Their Phoenix and WOW! It's amazing the way you've created the three characters, Harry, Draco and Severus, and then twined their lives and personalities and problems together into one perfect web. It's very complex but easily comprehendable and of course, deeply addicting. I was talking to another of your readers about it the other day and I think we've come up with the easiest way to describe it:

"I am ADDICTED to Their Phoenix. Snape is so... *gushes* and Draco is so... *swoons* and Harry is so... *squeals*!!!"

Rofl!

I wish there was more I could say! Swanfair is an excellent character, as is Cadell. They're almost like foils for each other aren't they? I love that :D Your Ron and Hermione are refreshingly accurate (but then they always are :)). Hmm, what else, what else? My thoughts keep drawing back to the web you've weaved with Harry, Draco and Severus but I don't have the words to describe how jittery and happy it makes me every time one of those three interact with one or both of the others.

This is, without doubt, the best bond story I've read yet and I'll be impatiently staring at my inbox for the email from your yahoo group that will tell me you've updated!
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