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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on July 10, 2009
    As much as I dislike Skeeter, she does have her uses. Very, very well done chapter!
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  • From LydiasTravel on July 09, 2009
    Eak! They're going to have to tie Harry to the bed aren't they? That's a pretty picture. There I go again with the stuff inside my head and not in your story yet. Anyway, good job. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - baka.m3.l33t on July 08, 2009
    Hello! I love you story so far. It is very deep and draws you in almost immediately. I can't wait for the three to finally get together, and the emotions described for Draco and Severus are making me dislike Cadell. I was wondering if you could add me to the update list you send e-mails to so I can come and read more when you update! I would really appreciate it! Happy writing, and keep up the great work! ^_^
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  • From LiteraryBeauty on July 08, 2009
    Chapter 17-

    Aha! I was right about Harry going outside the bond for lurve. But I don't want to be right. *pouts*

    A lovely chapter! I was laughing throughout the Aurors' invasion and gasped aloud when that bitch slapped Harry. What a fool.

    I think Caesarion wants Harry for him fame; hopefully he picks up on that--he seems to be pretty clever in this, if a little self-deluded. Oh, your OC's name reminds me of cesarean section. Ew. LOL

    I liked Harry's confession to Severus about how he will never come between them. He is so deliciously naive and innocent. I hope Severus doesn't take his time disabusing Harry of his misapprehension. :)
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  • From LiteraryBeauty on July 08, 2009
    Chapter 16-

    I really liked this chapter. I loved Draco's excitement over his expermiment, which was really neat! I also liked the development of the bond between Severus and Draco, but I am feeling so sorry for Harry. I have a feeling he's going to try to date someone else, and then much angst and misery will ensue.

    I know everyone is getting anxious about when the threesome sex starts, but I think you are developing the story at a realistic pace. That isn't to say I'm not waiting with bated breath as well; just that you should take your time and write as you originally intended (which I'm sure you're doing--just offering my support!).

    Lovely, as always. On to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2009
    Good but evil cliffhanger ^^( I like those, though, of course, I want to continue reading that very second I'm left with them). Cesarion seems to be a nice guy. But I can't stop thinking maybe he's the one behind this attack? Not that Harry's lacking of other enemies that could be responisble for it... Yeah, Harry's right, Severus and Draco are complicated persons and expect a lot of him. So it's nice for him to spend time with someone who is more easy-goimg then them. I think it's good he makes his own first experiences with hompsexuality with someone outside the bond. So he can see for himself what works best for him, and if he is really attracted to men.
    I simply think so.
    Waiting for the next part and thanks for writing! ^^
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 07, 2009
    AHH! You can't leave it like that! Who would be ballsy enough to attack Harry right outside the Burrow? Who would know that he would be there at that specific time anyway?
    Great chapter! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - tf on July 07, 2009
    What a place to leave us! Hope you get to update soon since I'm curious about who the attackers are^_^
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on July 07, 2009
    Oh, cr*p, now someone's gone and done it. Ledbetter will be very angry when Severus kills and torures a few kidnappers. if this is a Ministry ploy, they're getting even dumber than usual. Harry will be ok, right?
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  • From spooksies on July 07, 2009
    NOOOOOOO!!! NOT HARRY!!! that is beyond evil!!!!! no fair!!



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  • From PanickedSerenity on July 07, 2009
    Evil Cliffhanger!!! Harry's new boyfriend better not have betrayed him! Aww man, I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Tiffani on July 07, 2009
    I love this story so far and I'm just dying for Harry to realize that Draco and Severus would accept him lol
    I'd appreciate it if you would add me to your mailing list so I can read more of this story when you update ^_^
    Great story
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  • From ANON - dana_aeryn on July 06, 2009
    Don't think that I've mentioned how much I'm loving this story, but I do. This last chapter is a gem . The whole scene with the Aurors and Harry's maybe? suitor was wonderful. Look forward to your update. Sorry i don't comment as much on lj- always too far behind on my flist.
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  • From ANON - Dani on July 06, 2009
    Incredible!!!! I liked the traps that they set! Good thinking! I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what happens! Do you know about how long you're going to make this story?Excellent chapter!
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  • From ANON - amy l on July 05, 2009
    AHHHH!!!!. harry is sooo stupid. i would have been in their bed in a heart beat. lol. love this story. cant wait for the next chapter. hope u had a great 4th of july.
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