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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - qwerty on July 05, 2009
    I loved all thr traps that Harry, Severus, and Draco set for the Aurors. It was hilarious!
    Great chapter! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Sasha on July 05, 2009
    "He was committed to survival, no matter how the world changed, no matter what he had to do to gain it. He never seemed to consider that there might be higher goals than mere survival, the maintaining of one
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  • From ANON - Sasha on July 05, 2009
    "He was committed to survival, no matter how the world changed, no matter what he had to do to gain it. He never seemed to consider that there might be higher goals than mere survival, the maintaining of one
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  • From ANON - PanickedSerenity on July 05, 2009
    That was an awesome chapter! I loved all the traps! It was great. Thanks for updating.
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  • From FemFatale on July 04, 2009
    Ah!

    I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!

    This story is progressing really well, and you have such a way with characters. I'm currently stalking this and a number of Harry/Draco and Harry/Severus stories haha.
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  • From LydiasTravel on July 04, 2009
    I've been following your story for a while now and have never reviewed. I felt like it was time. I LOVE THIS STORY. It's very intriguing, lots of action and suspense, and I think you're building the relationship between the three very nicely indeed (perhaps a little slowly for my tastes, but yours is much more believable than what's going on in my head). Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read the next installment!
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  • From ANON - catnona on July 04, 2009
    I've just spent the last three day reading this from the start....a wonderful story, great plot, interesting character development and interaction between them, so I really want to read more, due to the fact that from the very beginning I've been saying to my self 'gees Harry get a clue already!' I really want to read that chapter when it happens.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2009
    lol. Very cool traps and spells. But I personally think Harry's speach to the female auror was a little too much drama - but the wizarding world as we know it will probably give him it's sympathy for it. Some of the aurors seemed impressed.
    Though I ask mysel if it hadn't been better if they simply had acted as if they didn't know the raid was coming. Of course, neither of them is known for their ability to endure silently.
    Oh, this will be hard for Severus and Draco, watch him date another man. But they can't intervene or will loose his trust. I think it comes down to Harry himself noticing that any outsider can not give him what his bondmates can.

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  • From BoundnHurt on July 03, 2009
    dun dun dun...enters a new male character with a charming smile...and lots of chocolate *grins*

    it's been a while since i last reviewed so her it is. This story is progressing nicely. I do enjoy that Ginny and harry are still friends even though shit happened. I like the way harry is maturing in this fic. It's slow and on going but its very deep and insightful in a way Harry never thinks. So i love it. keep up the good writings adn i can't wait till the next chapter.

    matte ne
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on July 03, 2009
    Intricately done and just hilarious! I absolutely loved this. You've even given it a certain reality since I've seen politicians who simply cannot back down from an opinion or a course of action no matter how disastrous. More, please.
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  • From brasilkat on July 02, 2009
    You're doing a great job with this! can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - Dani on July 02, 2009
    Ah!!!! Your story is so good! I really enjoy reading it! I really like how they didn't immediately jump together! Sometimes I like a nice and long, envolved story!!! That doesn't mean that I'm not anxiously awaiting that very lovely scene! I can't wait for more! Thanks for the update!
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  • From PanickedSerenity on July 01, 2009
    Thanks for the update! ANd that's fine! No problem.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2009
    The ministry is really offending me. :-) Could strangle Kingsley! ^^
    About the bond: now Harry is heading in the wrong direction, thinking he should date someone else. At least he can admit now he's jealous. But this knowledge will probably keep him from opening the bond the other way, so that he doesn't have to feel teir intense feelings which might only fuel his jealousy.
    Though it would probabaly be the most effective way to make him realize that they have feelings for him, too. I think at this point Severus and Draco are too overwhelmed with the bond developing between them to notice Harry's inner conflict, but when the bond between them is complete and settled (though I know it can change further) they will come around and see that Harry is - as I see it - in some way returning to a martyr's position by trying not to disturb them. That's the problem with Harry: he tries to be noble and suffer silently. he still has to overcome his opinion that a sexual or romantic relationship can be shared only by two people.
    For me the story updates at midnight from Tuesday to Wednesday, so at Wednesday morning, I really hurry up to get to read the latest chapter! Saves my day.



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  • From ANON - tf on June 30, 2009
    I liked this chapter... I liked that Severus got to Swanfair? and that they have a new allies... Draco's progress and comment about Severus not sharing are interesting... Harry's jealousy is almost cute b/c it's so unnecessary since he could join them and I hope he realizes it soon; thanks for the update!
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