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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - amy l on June 30, 2009
    I am loving this story. is there any way to get an email when the story is updated. ive taken to just leaving the story up on my comp. and hitting refresh on the page a couple of times a day. lol
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  • From ANON - dana_aeryn on June 29, 2009
    I really enjoyed this part. very much looking forward to the next.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 27, 2009
    Shared thoughts and blended dreams? Sounds exciting! ;)
    Of course Swanfair would do something like that but I'm glad that Harry fought it off without the help of Draco or Severus. It shows that he's powerful in his own right.
    Great chapter! Keep going!
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  • From PanickedSerenity on June 27, 2009
    Wow! I loved all the decriptive colors in this chapter. And I kinda like Swanfair in this chapter. She's fiesty. I'll probably regret saying that later, but oh well. I am so glad that Draco and Severus can connect like that now. The bond isn't all leaning on Harry now. I am glad you updated! I wish I had as much commitment to my stories as you did. Maybe then I would actually finish one. Thanks for the update.

    P.S- I was wondering if your could do some advertising for a fic that I am reading. I am enjoying it alot and I think you know the author, or she knows you or something.

    The Price of Valour by WeasleyWench. Medic Draco/Patient Harry.

    I just like it alot ad wanna get it out there. Don't feel obligated :P
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  • From ANON - Alex on June 26, 2009
    Really good, still addicted but a little annoyed. How can you not want to speed up the relationship between Severus, Draco and Harry?!?!? Its killing me!! Well not really but a little. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 24, 2009
    Nice one, just go on that way.
    But I think they should also have a little more fun along the way. They're in a quite serious conflict with parts of the wizarding world, I know, dealing with their complicated feelings and still with the aftermaths of war and so on... it's not a good time to simply relax, everyone is very tense right now. But still, let them play a little more. An orgy of firewhisky? Maybe just Draco and Harry having some fun doing something innocent like cleaning the kitchen? Something that turns out the comical way. Nothing completely ridiculous or undignified. But there is nothing that can push relationships in the right direction as good as a little shared laughter. I imagine both boys dueling for fun and/or getting drunk with the Weasley twins and Severus horrified and really pissed off by it. By the way, how does is affect the bond when Harry is drunk? I would really really like a description of Harry's feelings while beeing drugged.

    I wonder how you can keep on your awesome writing schedule. How many words do you a day in average?




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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 23, 2009
    I didn't mean it in a controlling sense, more in the sense of a consort giving their support and advice. I hope you weren't offended by the comment, it was merely what I could see Sev's role evolving into as his wealth of experience was put to use. Draco, on the other hand, would make a great front man for the new face of pureblood equality.
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  • From ANON - Mia on June 23, 2009
    Indeed it does. It is one of the reasons I so like the Slytherin party. They know how to do revenge. And do it well; with style. Another gem of a chapter. Thank you, once more.

    ~Mia
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  • From PanickedSerenity on June 23, 2009
    Good chapter. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 23, 2009
    Great chapter!
    That was a good move on Harry's part to give the speech by himself so that he's not seen as dependent on others.
    I liked how Severus handled Draco's confession. Severus knew exactly what to say and what to do afterward.
    I like this slow build-up towards the eventually triad. Severus is "interesting" indeed. ;)
    It's interesting that, at a max, one of the bondmates is on good comfortable terms with Harry at a particular time (generally speaking), not both at the same time. First Harry wanted both at a distance. Then Harry was okay with Draco but distant with Severus due to Severus' inability to open up. Now Draco's in the toilet because of past bad feelings... it's a rollercoaster with these three! But that's what makes this story so engaging!
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Jc BLACK on June 21, 2009
    OK now we are getting somewhere.I like the way you wrote Draco in this chapter going for mad to quit and how he beganing to see life with Snape will be ok if Harry stay away .We know that not going to happen.I love it when Harry at the door and they just look at each other.Keep up the good work .3 cheer for you now that Ginny gone.
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  • From ANON - elipses on June 20, 2009
    im off on holiday this week and will have to wait a whole ten days for more, im not sure if i can handle it.
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  • From MyaMalfoy on June 20, 2009
    AHHHHHHHHH!!! OMG OMG OMG!!! When will Harry finally SEE???I love the way he's starting to come around to the idea, now that Ginny's outta the picture! Xp I can't WAIT until he finally realizes what he's got sitting right in front of him and finally releases it all!

    This is a great story, can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Blood Lust 777 on June 19, 2009
    The pieces are coming together...

    Anxious to have more....
    -Moonlit Sanctity-
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 19, 2009
    I like the character developement you are creating. Potter has got to learn to control his world, it's been controlling him for too long. He already has a basic staff of advisors, now he has to learn to work the media, and Hermione and Draco have enough moxie to do that for him. I see Sev as becoming very much the power behind the throne, a role he would be excellent in and is eminently qualifed for. Very nice work!
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