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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From PanickedSerenity on June 19, 2009
    Thank you for the update! I am still loving this story. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 19, 2009
    I had a long review for the last chapter written, but it got lost and I didn't want to write it all again, sorry :-)
    This chapter impressed me most by giving Draco some space to show his emotions. Showing him as vulnerable and full of passion. Those things make this story really special: the way they all have their moments, their weaknesseschange, times when they need reassurance and care. Last chapter Harry was the one who was so herat-wrenching lost and vulnerable, this time it was Draco, but slowly, slowly, all of them begin to get along and get to know each other. They can even handle minor conflicts. Give then time, just as you've done so far. I would really like it if you kept skipping through months and weeks as you did at the beginning of the story. Time is what the bond needs most, I guess.
    Have you considered what Harry will do when completely healed? I mean as it seems unlikely he will return to his auror apprenticeship... I really like stories where he gets into wandmaking. But maybe this isn't the right one. Could I inspire your to write one? :-))



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  • From ANON - Mia on June 19, 2009
    That was incredibly erotic and very appealing. I loved the cautiousness of this chapter and the way you portray Harry as trying to manage everyone in his life. But especially how much care he takes for those he cares about. Kingsley's blindness to Harry and to Severus I think, is going to cost him in more than just ulcers and public opinion. Thank you, once again.

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - dana_aeryn on June 18, 2009
    Enjoying this very much. As I have enjoyed all your work. Look forward to seeing the bond progress.
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  • From Jan on June 18, 2009
    OMG! I absolutely love this story!

    Please update chapter 13 soon ^_^

    Jan
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  • From wynja on June 18, 2009
    I think I have been a bad reader, because I don't think I have reviewed this yet, and I have been reading from the start... BAD me! I blame my eyes... I really can't read on screen for very long, so I usually print longer stories, and that often leads to me forgetting ro review... *sigh* well... BAD reader, I told you! Aaaanyway, here goes... I think this is one of the best HP fanfics out there right now! When I first saw it I though "oh, another 'forced bond' story" but I started reading, because they are kinda my guilty pleasure (and three-somes are another, but please don't tell anyone... ;o) ) but this didn't turn ouyt to be a "oh, damn, we bonded, let's have sex" smut-fest (not that I don't like those, but...;o) ), it's actually a REAL story, with an intelligent plot and interesting developments that feels REAL to read, and I love it! You even let Harry have an "normal" (forgive me for that word, I'm Swedish, and I couldn't find the right one) relationship with Ginny first... THe ONLY objection I have has nothing to do with the story at all, it has to do with the formatting... I'm having trouble with the doubble spacing-thing... I actually have to paste the text into my HTML-editor and remove the spacing before printing, because with them it's hard to read (and wastes paper, but that's more my problem)... I've tried reading a bit on the screen, but with the big spaces I kinda find it difficult for the text to "flow", if you know what I mean... I don't know if anyone else has problems with it, though, and you have to forgive me if you have adressed this in review-replys or something, I generally never copy them (I'm just greedy and after the story... ;o))
    Aaaannnyway, please continue this wonderful story, I'm looking forward to every update!
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  • From ANON - Mia on June 17, 2009
    Everything that is gorgeous and searing, strong and delicately beautiful, stubborn and hopeful and everything at once. I feel the desperate need for more like SS and DM in this story. How is it that this entrancement you have written managed to fold us into a bond to your story just as fast? Thank you. It is more beautiful than I could have imagined. (And I prided myself on my outrageous imagination.) You are a gem among peddlers of plastic.

    ~Mia
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  • From PanickedSerenity on June 16, 2009
    Yay! Big development!!! I hope Harry realizes how much Draco and Severus actually care about him. I loved this chapter! Thanks for the update!!!
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  • From ANON - Blood Lust 777 on June 16, 2009
    I can't really say anything except I can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From brasilkat on June 15, 2009
    ooh, I like this story and the new developments. Can't wait for the next installment!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 15, 2009
    Harry has been manipulated his entire life, it is not surprising that he would ignore his own pain to get the job done, no matter what it might be. He has, after all, been given the subconscious message that he is less imortant than the task at hand.
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  • From ANON - Pine on June 15, 2009
    wow, this story is compelling! I like the delicate intricacy with which you're exploring all their emotions, and the way the relationship between them - and with others - is clearly evolving constantly, as it naturally would. I like your Draco. I'm admiring your Harry very much. And I'm hoping that some day soon, some appreciation will be given by both of them to Severus, who is not just the greatest hero of them all but who has endured so much, which has made him so wary of accepting his own emotions.

    I'm also hoping that this will be updated again soon, and often! Not to whine, LOL. I don't usually start WIPs because they so often never get finished (or worse, never end, hee). But this was so strongly recommended ... and is every bit as good as reported. In fact, better! I applaud your gentle but honest resolution with Ginny; I think it was a very realistic first affair for both Harry & Ginny, and very IC for her. I love that Ron and Hermione are involved, can't wait to see who else is! Your characters are all very well delineated. (Although I'm sorry that Kingsley is being a bad cross between a tyrant and a bureaucrat! I usually think of him as a bit smarter than that. But anyone who dislikes Snape - well, no sympathy from me!)

    I've been enjoying all the details very much - Harry's training, the spell details, the History potion (3 yowls of approval!), and their new house. Severus's new potions lab, especially, with its multi-material shelving and careful storage and transfiguring Table, is pure win. Also, I can't wait to find out who and what Brynhildr Swanfair is... But at the same time, I hope they won't continue to have to be on permanent danger alert!

    Total bliss, this story! Many thanks for writing it and sharing with us! I look forward to much more.
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  • From ANON - McTabby on June 14, 2009
    Just read the first 11 chapters this evening, with much pleasure. I really appreciate how you're taking it slow, exploring the characters and the threats they face. Snape's outstanding - I like how he has doubts and gets things wrong sometimes. Thanks for not bashing Ginny, too. Will keep an eye on this fic for future reading.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 13, 2009
    I'm so glad that Harry told Huxley where to shove it. He suffered and sacrificed way more than anyone else and people still expect so much of him. Go Harry!
    Swanfair showed up in person! Whoa. Next chapter will be interesting!
    Great chapter. Keep going!
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  • From ANON - tf on June 13, 2009
    I hope the public comes to its senses soon; thanks for the update!
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