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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Black Padfoot on June 01, 2009
    Wow... I'm really truly loving this story! I don't know when the last time you updated it was but I hope the next time is soon! =)
    Stef
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  • From ColdWaterFairy on May 31, 2009
    P.S.
    You take your sweet time getting to the smut. Your story would be good without it, it's just the icing on the cake. I wish people would quit asking authors when they are getting to the smut. I think it's rude!
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  • From ColdWaterFairy on May 31, 2009
    You deserve lots of cookies. That chapter was gripping. I liked how you had Severus weighing the pro's and con's of showing Harry his jealousy. I think it's very unique that you have Snape's and Draco's emotion as colors and Harry's as pictures. I'm very curious to know what they got Harry for Christmas. I could seriously go scene by scene and tell you everything I loved about this chapter but it's late and I should go to bed. Until next time.
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  • From BoundnHurt on May 31, 2009
    i believe that i have read almost all your stories. I find them interesting and very well thought out. but ...this one by far has to be my favorite. A denial!harry. I have read some stories but this one is a bit more believable andd especially how he comes to terms with it. *nodding* please could you send me an email when you update. I really would like to be notify so i won't have to search ever day to see if you have updated. Cheers!!

    unbelievable.nyj@gmail.com
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  • From alleycat88 on May 30, 2009
    thanks for the update! It was interesting to see Ginny's interaction with Draco and Snape. I think Harry should just give up...Hermione knows, Drco and Snape know, and now Ginny? When will he finally understand?!
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  • From ANON - BloodLust 777 on May 30, 2009
    Awwwwwwww!!!!!! I hope Harry gets better and can we find some way to get Ginny and hang her by her ankles in Mr.Filch's office.
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  • From ANON - tf on May 29, 2009
    I liked the gifts chosen for each... I wonder if there's something more to Ginny's distance... hope Harry's ok and that they come up with a way to protect each other from future attacks; thanks for the update!
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  • From emilywaters on May 29, 2009
    ch 7: my goodness. I'm aching for Harry so much here. He's really having a tough time, navigating between Draco, Snape and Ginny... but he's so strong, and so Harry. Beautiful chapter as always.
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  • From emilywaters on May 29, 2009
    The moment when Snape - Seveurs called Harry by name was nothing short of glorious. I'm loving it. I'm LOVING it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2009
    Review for the story so far:
    A quite fascinating constellation between the characters, lots of existing and possible conflicts.
    I like the way you write, during the last weeks I've been reading most of your stories, even your One-Shots, though I don't really like the genre. But I think this story is espicially promising and I long for more...
    I certeinly can't critizise Harry's attempt to keep his independence. Don't forget: the two people he's bonded to are his worst remaining enemies and have been for the past seven years. He doesn't know enough about the two of them to trust them, so I can completely understand his reluctance to become close to them. Really, everything else would be stupid for him, at least during the first months and maybe even years after the bonding, regarding the way both of them treated him when he was at school.
    Of the three men, every one has to find a unique position inside this bond, has to become somehow necessary for the others to establish true friendship and love.
    If Severus and Harry can ever sort the issues between them out, Severus may become something very essential for Harry, can maybe ground him, as a mentor, an older friend with lots of experiences and wisdom, actually, and insights in the nature of life, that neither Dumbledore nor Sirius ever were. But Severus has to accept Harry as an equal, has to accept his feelings and not only tolerate, but understand them in full, and to show and trust his own feelings as well, something he hasn't done for years.

    Chapter 6:
    It seems as if the three bondmates get along a little better, based on some kind of companionship between Draco and Harry. I find it most likely that Draco can build a bridge between Severus and Harry, but probably only up to a special point. Of course the relationship between S. and H. has to be grounded on something more solid.
    What Hermione said about bringing the two pieces of his life together: it's probably a little early for that, as Harry is just starting to accept the facts and consequences of the bond. Severus and Draco have to gain his trust before he is going to make a connection between them and the Weasleys, for example.
    I find it quite interesting that Hermione is already starting to give hints regarding a possible sexual relationship. I would like you to give some information from Harry's point of view: what does he think about homsexuality generally? If he is embarassed about Draco and Severus showing their affection in the open, is it because Severus is involved (as the former teacher, much older than Draco) or because the issue of sex between men? What does he think of the fact that his bondmates can feel his emotions during sex? Is he really aware of that fact and what it means (their physical reaction). Is Ginny aware of that, too? And I wonder if he couldn't at least during those moments close the bond without endangering his bondmates. Surely some minutes - or maybe hours - wouldn't kill them?
    I'm really looking forward to reading the next parts.

    Alli (sorry if my review is unclear in some parts, English is still a foreing language for me)







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  • From pontaloon on May 27, 2009
    i love how you're characterizing snape as inexperienced with kissing and uncomfortable showing affection in public! Draco is also adorable! i just hope that when the three get together, Draco stays the one who needs protecting and Harry doesnt automatically become the bottom for both of them (that happens too often in fics of this kind).
    can't wait for an update!
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  • From pontaloon on May 27, 2009
    you start alot of sentences with 'but' or 'and' which 1) is repetitive and 2) is grammatically incorrect. you also make far too many paragraphs. when Harry is thinking, it shouldn't be italicized, it should be put withing single quotation marks 'like this'.
    anyway, appart from that it was an awesome continuation and i really want to know what happens next!!! (yes i intend to review after i read each chapter, call me obsessive)
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  • From ColdWaterFairy on May 26, 2009
    This story gets better and better. I'm really liked the internal thought process Harry had. You're giving great depth to your characters. The moment between Snape and Harry was perfect in its subtlety. I also thought where Ginny asks would he still go even if she did say no was sad.
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  • From pontaloon on May 26, 2009
    i love the way you write! you describe things in such minute detail! at some times theres too much information though and i can't really understand what you're describing, or how something is suposed to look. like when Harry killed Voldemort. i couldn't picture the scene in my mind at all because you mix descriptions of feelings with physical descriptions. i can't tell if its in his mind, what he's thinking or if it's really happening outside of him.
    i also don't get the fires Harry sees. do Malfoy and Snape look like fire to him? are the flames on the side of his vision? (like how you can see the rims of your glasses in the corner of your eye) or are the flames something he senses and he can just tell that they are coloured?
    anyway, i also love the characterisation!

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  • From SilverLion on May 26, 2009
    Well, it's progress. It's going to take a lot more work on Sev's part than on Draco's, but if I know Snape, it's gonna sneak up on Harry before he's even realized what's happened. P.S. Everyone check out my profile for a fun challenge.
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