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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ColdWaterFairy on May 25, 2009
    I understood why they were behaving the way they were but I didn't stop be from being annoyed with them. I'm glad to see the evolving viewpoints. I think when someone is writing a story using these three characters, power is an important aspect. All three want it just in different degrees. I had already figured out why he let Snape into his rooms but I liked how Snape worked it out. Great work. Update soon!
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  • From emilywaters on May 23, 2009
    ch 4, mmmm, very interesting development with Draco and Harry. Snape is so lonely - even if he is very self-contained.... gah,, Harry! get on with it! slash sex!
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  • From emilywaters on May 23, 2009
    chapter 3: absolutely awesome. I loved the sly, sneaky, manipulative, all-too-slytherin Snape here, and him playing Draco... they are both so ... I don't know, enchanting in their flawed perfection.
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  • From SilverLion on May 23, 2009
    I like that Severus is willing to acknowledge his shortcomings, especially where Harry is concerned. Still and all, as it stands right now, only Draco has any chance with Harry, and even then it's a slim chance.
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  • From Nikte on May 23, 2009
    LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!! About time they all started acting as adults, which means, about time they tried to understand each other; I
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  • From ANON - Yami Bakura (too lazy to log in) on May 22, 2009
    Part 5

    ONOES. I certainly HOPE you can keep up this pace of updating (without killing yourself in the process) This fanfic is the center of my fan-life right now, with Viper on the outskirts, especially now that things are starting to look up in both fics. And even if it's just a little bump before things plummet back down to horrible (from their point of view) I'm still enthralled by these two. Particularly this one. Watching the interplay of power and who's figuring who out first and how they're all starting to work together - it just makes me squee.

    ... The captcha for this is comrade loo. XDDDDD
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  • From LiteraryBeauty on May 22, 2009
    A very promising story! I'm really enjoying it. I can't decide if I like or dislike how utterly selfish Severus is being--on the one hand, you've establish his absolute need for survival at all costs, but I feel like he's using Draco (who seems more vulnerable in this fic than many others), though that will change as the story grows, I suspect.

    Not a criticism, merely an observation! I do like the story and your style is nearly perfect. Hopefully Harry will come around soon enough, and all three men will get what they really want (but don't know it).
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  • From Nikte on May 21, 2009
    Wow, that was so much more than what I expected between Draco and Severus, and I think it was great that cute moment you added when Severus returns to the room after talking with Harry, THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! Think this was a great chapter, and you kind of answered the question of why I think Harry is being selfish, I mean, he isn
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  • From ColdWaterFairy on May 20, 2009
    I'm beginning to feel like Draco and Snape are bastards. And that is not a criticism, I really enjoy this story. You've done a fantastic job of portraying the feelings and thoughts of the three characters. I'm not seeing how they're going to get together. I eagerly await a new update.
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  • From YamiBakura on May 20, 2009
    Part 4

    The captcha for this is 'of rabies'. I'm not sure if that should be funny in some way, because it seems like it should be, but I'm too tired to connect it to anything at the moment.

    Anyway, I think I saw you mention somewhere that updates for this are going to be sporadic, and it's already making me feel wild. It was Mongoose and Viper that drew me back to your stories, but this is keeping me going. Every time I check my email, I'm hoping to see this has been updated.

    The scene between Snape and Draco was masterfully accomplished, and I absolutely cannot wait for Ginny to disappear (as a character, she's probably my least favourite, second only to Dumbledore.) even if Harry doesn't start getting closer to the other two because of it.
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  • From chantalmalfoy on May 18, 2009
    This is a really good fic! Poor Harry doesn't even have a clue... lol. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Nikte on May 17, 2009
    Hi, I
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  • From Dezra on May 17, 2009
    Interesting story. Unfortunately, I can barely read a story where Harry is the bottom, now it looks like he'll be the bottom for both. I love all your other stories and am looking forward to reading them. I'm absolutely amazed at the amount of work you have written since I've first read your story, I've enjoyed it all.
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  • From graversparadise on May 16, 2009
    I like your story. Very good pacing
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  • From ANON - tf on May 16, 2009
    I love Severus's approach and glad Harry is bending since he was being very selfish in risking their health... it'll be fun to see how far Severus and Draco get w/Harry; can't wait for more!
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