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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From starstruck86 on September 01, 2009
    What a wonderful shining moment for Draco! So proud of him and you can tell that it radiates from Severus and Harry too.

    But... really... that cliffhanger is just...! *sulks*

    *but will, of course, still come back for more ;)*
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  • From MaskedLily on August 31, 2009
    Absolutely fabulous as usual!!!! I am seriously looking forward to seeing that wretched woman get what she deserves!!!! And of course all the hppy-dappy lovey stuff with Harry Severus and Draco. Keep it up!!!! Congrats and much love =)
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  • From helga1967 on August 31, 2009
    Beautiful piece!
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  • From ANON - Blood on the Water on August 31, 2009
    Me again! I feel the distinct urge to shower you with flowery words that I probably don't know how to use correctly. Instead of waxing poetic, I'll just express my enjoyment over your work~! I really do hope you write a book of your own at some point. I'd buy it, doubtless.
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  • From lipstick3516 on August 30, 2009
    You tease! Will it be in the next chapter? Thanks for the update :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2009
    Only two chapters left... I'm secretly crying at night. ^^
    Now I'm longing to know how their plan regarding Colben will turn out. And I hope Swanfair will suffer. She deserves it.
    I also hope Severus will be the first to take Harry while Draco simply holds him and takes care of him, allowing Harry to simply feel without any need to worry about Draco's pleasure for once... I'm curious what you've planned for that scene.
    Why do you so often put scenes with penetration at the end of your stories, by the way? It was that way with "Eyes That Can See In Ihe Dark" and "Long-Desired" and I think with many other stories, too. Your relationships build slowly most of the time. I'd like to read something from you where the sex is at the beginning. I'm not sure, maybe you've written that kind of story somewhere, but I can't remember one, to be honest. Except for a few of your one-shots ("Leader of Men" is one of them, which I found pretty good, just so that you know :-)), your characters act so deliberately with their sexual encounters. There's so much thinking about giving in and dominance and being able to trust... Your're doing that pretty good, but sometimes I'd like to read less about people's thoughts and more about what's acutally happening, and even more about the coricumstances, more description of places and people. You use a quite personal third person POV for writing. Do you experiment with other styles, such as first person, or simply more distanced from your characters? I'm sorry I don't know the terms that are used to explain this in English. But I think you know what I mean?







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  • From ANON - k lave demo on August 29, 2009
    ahhhh....mmmm.. that was gooood... k. now that i've basked in the pleasure of plot i want to mention how i appreciate the fact that u don't forget a character is not one dimensional. i hate it when an author only writes one side of a character and takes away from them as a whole. (also why i hate bashing) neways i say this cause u've finally given up that last and final reason for harry's fear.
    i am now anxiously anticipating swanfair's demise and that lovely sense of irony i'm sure ur goin to use when she realizes she's just been slammed. XD also can't wait for the smut afterwards. sigh... mayhap there will be a sequel when this is finished. (kitty cat eyes.) viva la vida!
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  • From ANON - sable_silverrain on August 28, 2009
    That was great! Please update soon!
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  • From spyderlunacy09 on August 26, 2009
    CLIFF HANGER?! I'm super excited that Harry's well again. And Draco's plan sounds great, can't wait to see it.

    Speaking of Draco, his performance with the pure bloods was amazing. I loved how the purebloods moved away from the one guy who insisted on screwing himself
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  • From starstruck86 on August 26, 2009
    I just get overprotective. I did find it amusing until my brain worked overtime, I promise!

    And then Harry went and copped it from someone else. What a cow Swanfair is.

    Wonderfully written, as ever.
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  • From ANON - Mia on August 25, 2009
    I love your characters. Thay have become a set of my most favorite versions. You are ingenius in the unfolding of their strengths and depths and relationships. You have made this so much more than the smutty little voyeuristic bit of shallowness that I am ashamed to say is what I initially expected from this story. You are luminescent, love. Absolutely on fire with it. Thank you.

    ~Mia
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  • From Nevermore11 on August 25, 2009
    Oh, poor Harry! What a nasty thing to have suffered. I rather like Draco's idea, however. Vengeance is sweet and pleasantly fulfilling. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Well done. As an aside, I thought Severus was incredible.
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  • From Makovaso on August 25, 2009
    Good story, please update soon.
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  • From spyderlunacy09 on August 23, 2009
    Haha, I find it quite funny that the two charms collided and now Severus has to clean it all up. I also find the waiter's reaction was priceless. I think anyone would have acted the same way.

    I hope to read more in the near future.
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on August 22, 2009
    heh, i really like colben as a politician and i like how u've shown that harry makes a good politician. does he practice or is it his honesty that allows him to be a natural. i wanted to mention that i could actually see this as a definite alternative to the real ending. it's interesting to read this and actually see some of the images moving as if it were on television (just not as detailed in the smut part). til tuesday. viva la vida!
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