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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - FyreChyld82 on August 22, 2009
    I'm absolutely addicted to this story. You have an amazing way with story telling and I hope you continue with it soon. I'm so looking forward to what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2009
    Well, I certainly never liked Swanfair. She's a bitch.
    Harry's thought about the three of them making their own business by training people against the Dark Arts - very promising. I hope you'll write some more about it.
    I'm doomed. Your're about to finish the story. Only four more chapters to go, what shall I do when it's finished?
    The answer is simple: start to read it all over again. :-) And, of course, there are your other stories...
    This chapter made me laugh some times. I probably liked the scene with Harry training in the garden in the morning best. It was peaceful and showes some of their routine. It's not always about politics...
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  • From SDrarrysLover on August 22, 2009
    i have to much time for that, i cant wait for the snape focus either so ill live.

    i wont have internet for a while, so i will review as soon as possible okay? by which poin there would have been at least 10 more, if you plan that many of course, on which i will have to read and review, i am looking forward to it.


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  • From ANON - sable_silverrain on August 22, 2009
    LOL. Poor Snape. All that hard work for nothing. This is getting REALLY good, and I would have reviewed earlier, but never had anything to say. I just thought it was about time you heard just how much I'm enjoying this, so I'm letting you know that this is the FIRST story I check when I'm looking for updates, and it's always great to see a new chapter! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us, and keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Mia on August 21, 2009
    Your Draco is delighting me more and more. Particularly the comment about how he SHOULD be the center of attention. I love Severus' new assurity. Harry's comfort. It is beautiful and graceful and vastly entertaining. Thank you.

    ~Mia
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  • From starstruck86 on August 21, 2009
    ....... *paces nervously* Severus is alright, isn't he? *more pacing*

    Also, Swanfair is a pain in the backside. It's too much to hope she's just going to slope away, eh? ;)

    And *cheers* yay for agendas. I really cannot wait to read that scene.

    xx
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  • From LydiasTravel on August 21, 2009
    Now that's what I'm talking about! That only thing that could possibly make it better would be for Severus to top Harry... Please tell that's going to happen soon! I'm begging and drooling for that!
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  • From ANON - Terri on August 20, 2009
    BOO-YAY!
    I dont know if you'll understand or relate to this, but when i write fics with sex i find it soooo hard to really get the reader to feel the true amount of passion in each character. You do a wonderful job, and im glad you 'work-it' but not over do it. You leave enough room to really think instead of creating a wham-bam kinda feel to the entire romance. I love it!-LOVE IT!
    I'm hooked!
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  • From ANON - Blood on the Water on August 19, 2009
    I was going to save this review for the end, but I changed my mind.

    Out of everything you have posted on this site, Their Phoenix is my favourite. The way you've described the emotions at play is just incredible, the way that you've kept all the characters in character while putting them in a situation that is completely un-canonical (I think I just invented a word) is even more incredible. It's odd though. I've never been able to properly articulate an appropriate review, even if this is my absolute favourite piece of literature by you.

    Keep being awesome!
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  • From Juana13 on August 19, 2009
    awwww!!! loved this chapter! finally!!! they all three are in bed together. but now i look forward to harry and severus... : )
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  • From romanticfae on August 19, 2009
    wonderful very hot
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  • From ANON - EarlyDawn on August 19, 2009
    This chapter was amazing! Even thi=ough I was ready to go to bed, I stayed up because I know that if I had gone to sleep without reading the lastest chapter I would've been unable to sleep and thought about it all night. Only to eventually get back and read. I loved getting surprised when reading or have a character react in away you didn't evpect or anticipate, and your are amoung the royalty at doing in this. AND we also got to see a complete full on sex scene, YEAH!!
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  • From ANON - Tiffani on August 18, 2009
    Oh this is an awesome chapter lol
    I love it
    Great job
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on August 18, 2009
    missed u friday. good to see ur back. as usual absolutely loving the story. i like how u consistently progress with the story instead of speeding through it. u make sure that each chapter leads up to something that mey be addressed in the next chapter or future chapters. i very much appreciate it. good smut scene. i take it harry's fear of hurting his bondmates and insecurity in whether he's worthy of them are only part of the problem and that they may have some smex problems in the future before it smooths out? wonder what they'll do to severus during his turn. as always lookin forward to next time and already dreading the finale to this wonderful story. viva la vida!
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  • From SDrarrysLover on August 18, 2009
    oooo i love it so very much!

    cant await more.

    do you reckon you cuold do me a favour, i got some new fics out, needed and hidden secrets wanna check em out let us knw whats gd or bad or whatevr have you. your so good at writing id be honored if you did.

    want more im anamoured with you fic.

    thing is though after fris update itll be a while before i get to read this again as internet coverage will be non existant lol

    loves SDL
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