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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From on August 18, 2009
    Another excellent chapter!

    The bit with Narcissa was great. I especially loved when Harry embarassed Draco by referencing their sexual relationship in his conversation with her xD I can't wait to find out more about this Swanfair mystery!

    I hope your move went smoothly and I'm glad you're back :D
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  • From ANON - Mia on August 18, 2009
    Because I am female and have never known that point of view in intimacy, I often wonder about slash, and the truth or myth of its coupling. Yours felt both realistic and infinitely, delicately beautiful. You displayed aspects of fear and lust and uncertainty that really are present in a first time. As always, your story rings true and is a wondrous thing to watch unfold. It is like watching quicksilver molding in unexpected patterns without being influenced by anything but its own natural order of things. That is what reading you is like. Thank you.

    ~Mia
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  • From starstruck86 on August 18, 2009
    Yay *gets out the cheering squad for Harry* I want to send him a congratulatory cake or something!

    Hmm, so. Now, as Severus so rightly pointed out, Harry has had his turn at being looked after, and so has Draco... so I'm hoping it will be Severus' turn soon? ;)

    They are so beautifully written together. x
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2009
    Nice chapter!
    I like it that you chose Severus' POV when writing their sexual encounter, with Harry taking Draco. My personal guess was that Severus would be the first one bottoming for Harry, don't know why.
    Still, it's so much about competition, will they at some time be able just to have lazy and comforting sex without worrying so much about being embarassed or being weak?
    These days without your updates were hell :-)) Glad you're back.

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  • From lipstick3516 on August 18, 2009
    Amazing new chapter, very hot ;) Thanks!
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  • From ANON - amy l on August 18, 2009
    once again a really great chapter... it always makes me sad to see the bar on the side of the page getting closer to the bottom of the screen cause then i know ill have to wait to see what happens next. lol.
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  • From RikoneShade on August 14, 2009
    Awes. -Sniffles.- That was so incredibly sweet! I also loved how they finally got that bitch Huxley! >D -Cackles.- I have soooo been waiting for her to go down. Can't wait to read more. =]
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  • From spyderlunacy09 on August 12, 2009
    Super high-flying speeds of thought. I like this newly revealed side of the bond!
    *cheers in excitement for Huxley going down* W00t W00t! *does dance* *trips and falls over flailing limbs*
    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From starstruck86 on August 12, 2009
    Yes, of course, silly me, the bond would make everything easily resolvable. Doh! *smacks head*

    I look forward to the updates on this so much, just so you know. Even more so now I read your promise about not killing any of the main three off.

    And, three cheers for Huxley finally getting her comeuppance. I hope she *is* a problem well and truly solved now.
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on August 12, 2009
    before i say anything else these last three chapters have been absolutely delicious. i am VERY appreciative of the fact that u don't sacrifice plot for smut. i will say though that the smut scene in chapter 26 didn't make sense at first and i had to reread it a few times before i got the whole mechanics right. not ur fault i just miss details at times. i'm curious. u've mentioned harry's past a few times. is that just draco's and severus' way of reminding themselves that harry hasn't had the easiest life or are u gointo have the address it later on. n thank god huxley's out of the picture. can't stand narrow-minded people. anxiously awaitin ur next update. viva la vida!
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  • From MaskedLily on August 12, 2009
    So sorry I have been away for so long. I have been having serious issues with my computer. But they are gone and I am back. These chapters have been absolutely fabulously fantastic!!!! I am extatic that the Huxley issue has finally been resolved lol. And that Harry has come to his senses. This story is one of my personal favorites. The detail and passion one can feel while reading it is brilliant. Not many people can do that well, but you can and for that you get a serious round of applause from me!!!!! As always I can't wait for the next chapter. Now that I have a computer again I will be looking for updates often. Congrats and much love =)
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on August 11, 2009
    Ah, they gave him a viable political solution, one that a more experienced spin doctor would have seen after her attack on Harry, I think. Calling her mad is an excellent aolution and not far off the mark, really. That's how they imprisoned the Marquis de Sade after the French Revolution, did you know? At the time it was the equivalent of going after a gangster for tax evasion.
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  • From ANON - nekoyoka on August 11, 2009
    I was gone all day and didn't get to read this until just now! Finally, something is being done about Huxley! I wish you luck with moving, although I am depressed that you won't be posting the next chapter for another week; I should have waited until after I came back from vacation to read this. Anyway, looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - EarlyDawn on August 11, 2009
    Hey, uaed to be LoBaR624, just wanted to let you know that I haven't forgotten or given up on this story. I thought it was cool to read how Harry would take control in a situation like that. I LOVED seeing Draco being so emotional(in a way) that he allowed himself to be ruffled and not look perfect. It was great and I can't wait for the next chapter and have fun moving.
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  • From ANON - Terri on August 08, 2009
    eyes...burning, been up all night-reading... couldn't stop. Gah! Now my eyes are bllodshot and im out off coffee. Yet-, im am so glad that ive found this story- talk about a great read at 2am.
    I want to know what clever swanfair is up to, she's too quiet, and that can only mean she's up to something. I beg of you, please do not kill off HP, DM, or SS; being the triad and all. Deathfic's are over done and this amazingly well done romance should have a big bang at the end that leaves us happy, not tearful. Justice!
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