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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From Nevermore11 on August 08, 2009
    Beautifully done. This story has become one of my favorites out of your many, many successes. I adore Severus, Draco, and Harry together, and I think you've done a masterful job at getting inside their heads, bringing their ever-so-complicated personalities and subtle quirks to life. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 07, 2009
    I found it hilarious that Ron automatically knew that Harry got laid.
    Great chapter. I'm glad that we found out more about Colben.
    Keep going!
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  • From spyderlunacy09 on August 07, 2009
    Absolutely fantastic! I'm so happy that fights between them still happen but unlike before, they can resolve them quickly.
    I love in this chapter how Severus had his own series of thoughts and the feeling of a filled life he has finally acquired. I can't wait to see more from this couple and of the wizarding world as this story progresses. (Almost forgot, Ron seems to be growing up a bit. His sour stomach was bound to happen when he found out about Harry's new relationship but I'm glad that he identified what had changed in his best mate's life and is happy for him.)
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  • From on August 07, 2009
    I did love Hermione in this one :) I especially loved her interaction with Ron. It really wasn't much but that's what makes it good. The way they are together is so easy and sweet that it's too common to really draw much attention.

    Colben continues to surprise me as she does Severus and Draco. She seems honest enough and I think she'll make a good minister if she can get into office. I'm anxious to see where you'll take her and what conflict you might use her to stir up, if any. I love the plans she has for Hermione as well. I could really see those two interacting--I think it would be amusing!

    I'm still coiled tight as a spring waiting for Kingsley or anyone else to cause problems. Severus is feeling entirely too happy with his lot in life, which I'm sure means trouble is on it's way xD Can't wait for the next update :)
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  • From pattaguero on August 07, 2009
    OMG!!! I love your story!!

    Coul you please add me to your mailing list; phantosma@ gmail.com

    Great Job!!!

    Take care, Phantosma

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  • From ANON - Tiffani on August 07, 2009
    Oh so sweet
    I love this so much

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2009
    That was beautiful. Harry's admission he's in love with them.
    They are still quite competitive in their bevhaviour - especially regarding sex. But the competition factor will probabaly be there for a long time - a decade at least, I guess - for there's too much dark history between them, and with Draco and Harry both being young men who are still searching for their own destination, not quite settled in their personalities.
    I'd like to know what the bond will be like when the boys have become older - maybe fourty - and more mature: under which conditions do they live, how do they feel? For example, do they still sleep with each other, are there any children for one of them, hich kind of jobs do they have? I dont't think you intend to write a "20 years later"-epilogue once the story is finished, or do you? *begs with big puppy eyes*.
    For now it's nice they share a bed. Good, too, Harry "came out" to Hermione and Ron. I'd like to read about a meeting at the burrows including his bondmates to see Molly's and other Weasleys' reactions to them being lovers.
    I'm still curious - what kind of profession will Harry take on once Colben is minister and he and his bondmates are safe?


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  • From starstruck86 on August 07, 2009
    Dear Lord, did they just avert an argument? *blinks* I'm surprised at them! But, obviously, there has to be some kind of honeymoon period, I trust that at some point they will fall out and argue? Plus, if two fall out and one is in the middle, that'd also be interesting. Not to mention the make-up sex. *whistle*

    *grins* Another great chapter.
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  • From MyaMalfoy on August 06, 2009
    Bravo!! That was a GREAT chapter! I loved the way you brought them all together! Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
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  • From lipstick3516 on August 04, 2009
    Very hot new chapter, thanks for the update!
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  • From on August 04, 2009
    Okay that was a lot of hot! I loved when Severus and Draco tackled Harry. And I especially loved the bit about Harry expecting not to recieve anything from the whole interaction. He can be so dim at times xD Of course Severus and Draco would want to reciprocate! But it was still nice that he fully intended for it to be all about them.

    The bit with Hermione at the beginning was really nice :) I love a Hermione that's been put in her place as much as an embarrassed Hermione confronting personal relationship-based topics and that scene had both! Gosh, I just love Hermione so much! (But mostly as a really well written supporting character--which is exactly what you have in this story.)

    I can't wait for more! Both of Kingsley and the impending doom I'm sure the triad is facing, and the continuation of their sexual explorations :D
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on August 04, 2009
    i don't think i can truly express how frustrating it was too wait for today. that's how good this story is. just wondering... when voldie died did harry lose his parseltongue gift... or does he still have it? cause if he does i'm sure two slytherins would appreciate it. if not well there loss. can't wait til friday. viva la vida!
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  • From ANON - Tiffani on August 04, 2009
    Very very nice chapter
    I think everyone enjoyed Harry's idea for a present. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mia on August 04, 2009
    Guh...and also? whimper. That;s all you get. Because the rest of me short circuited. Beautidul and sexy and mmmm. Thank you.

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - qwerty on August 04, 2009
    YES! That was very hot! I'm so glad that all 3 came together (no pun intended).
    Great chapter! Keep going!
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