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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2009
    "In the end, he had to lean back in his chair and spend some time becoming reacquainted with his body and his mind in the wake of Harry
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  • From spyderlunacy09 on August 04, 2009
    *gasps for oxygen*
    Just when I thought that a threesome couldn't be hotter, the bonds added an extra sex kink that blew my mind over the edge and into the lusty abyss.
    Happy Birthday Draco!

    *can't want for the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - LoBaR624 on August 04, 2009
    Every time I see 'Their Phoenix' in the lastest area I squeal like a little child and rush to read it imediatly. And I am never disappointed, this was AMAZING!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep writing.
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  • From starstruck86 on August 04, 2009
    Oh most definitely getting the love he deserves there! Beautifully written chapter.

    I'm so pleased Harry decided to make it a first for all of them. Excluding one for 'the first time' would have hurt feelings.
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  • From starstruck86 on August 03, 2009
    I hardly know what to write in this! I've spent the last few days reading through this story.

    Suitably blown away is the only way to describe it, I think.

    You have an amazing flair and talent for writing, especially in something like this with such a strong political current.

    My favourite scene, I think, looking back, is as Harry shows Severus the memory and they are together. Just beautiful. I love the way Harry and Draco are represented here but Severus really takes the biscuit. He's just so... I sensed his inability to accept compliments and believe praise might be an issue as I started to read, and think you deal with it beautifully, the subtle nuances, like Harry advising Draco to pay him a compliment once in a while.

    Really, really amazing -and I can't wait for the next chapter now. You just get the sense when they finally do share a bed, there won't be words for it -I don't envy you the task, but am sure it will be brilliant.

    xx
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  • From ANON - Cassandra on August 02, 2009
    Hey its alright, I was just saying because I love this story. hehe
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  • From ANON - k lave demo on August 02, 2009
    mmm... really good story. i love the plot the tension and the character development. my plot demon is in ecstasy and yet frustrated at the same time. harry is so naive at times and i can definitely understand the other two's frustration. i'm glad their relationship is finally working towards a romantic relationship between the three. i'm also thoroughly curious bout the draco b-day surprise. again love the story and am in the process of readin it a second time. impatiently waitin for the next update. viva la vida!
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  • From yellow22 on August 01, 2009
    I just finished reading chapters 1-25. Very entertaining story! I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From spyderlunacy09 on July 31, 2009
    I love this! Its so amazing and I can't wait to see what Harry and Severus do for Draco's birthday!
    *squeals with excitement*
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  • From on July 31, 2009
    Hmm, despite all of Kingsley's apologies and pleas for reconciliation I'm still suspicious of him. Partly because of all he's done so far but mostly because of that air of enjoyment as he confronted Dominus. I have the sneaking suspicion that he somehow knew about or even inadvertantly set up the attack on Harry's house. Of course, I'm probably way off base because as of yet, I haven't been able to accurately predict any part of this story ;)

    As for the interactions through the bond in this chapter--perfection, as always. I love the way the bond works, how the boys are able to move together and away at will, creating a stronger and weaker connection accordingly. It's not only convenient, but also more pleasant. It would be more complicated to read if I had to keep in mind that each thought I read about was heard by three different minds and interpreted and reacted to in three different ways. Not to mention it would probably be a great pain for you to write xD

    I'm very excited to find out what Harry and Severus plan to do for Draco's birthday, and just as excited to see more of Harry's and Draco's kind gestures slowly melt Severus. It's so sweet the way they continue to go out of their way to consider and help each other. Anxiously awaiting more!
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  • From ANON - leila on July 31, 2009
    great story
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  • From ANON - Mia on July 31, 2009
    I don't quite have the words right in my head but, this is one of the most attractive stories I have ever read. I love that the bond didn't open up, they shag like magically enhanced bunnies and become perfect and unstoppable, understanding every little nuance about each other automatically, having no privacy and being fine with that. This is the most realistically portrayed relationships I have ever senn. Forgive me for my repetitions there.

    I feel like crowing for every time they learn, every thing they succeed in, every happy little step they take towards sexy. This is gorgeous, and I can't see myself doing anything but continuing to enjoy it.

    Do you know that the reason I have not devoured every one of your other stories yet is because I am afraid that they won't be as good as this one. That I will miss the lack of one of the characters. Silly, I know. But I am still occassionally enjoying the hell out of them one by one.



    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2009
    No!! Your're not serious, are you? *lol* Sex as a birthday present? Brilliant idea, though. If that's what Harry's last words were about.
    Now I'm really longing for the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Kiroko on July 30, 2009
    This story is turning out to be one of my favorites. I was surprised when I first starting reading it since your stories tend to focus more on Draco and Harry. Also, thank you for having regular updates. It's nice to know when to look for a new chapter. Quick question, how do you italicize words in your stories?
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  • From spyderlunacy09 on July 30, 2009
    Yay! The bonds are finally open. I'm so happy that the three of them are changing and that these past few chapters have shown their growth (both individual growth and as a whole). Now with the bonds open, what else can they achieve in their relationship?

    Can't wait to read more!
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