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Reviews for Their Phoenix

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - nekoyoka on July 29, 2009
    Hey, better late than never. Anyway, loved it, as usual. Forgot that they hadn't really looked into Colben's background. Especially with Swanfair not the most trustworthy of people. Gotta wonder if on of them is somehow behind the Ministry and urging them on. Can't what for Friday.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 29, 2009
    I enjoyed reading this chapter. I was afraid you might let le story end very soon without further complications, the three of them getting into bed and Colben ending up minister of magic :-)). But now I'm convinced you will give it it's time, and I'm glad.
    Should have known it, really. Very good. I think now that the bond is open Harry will probably lose his fear that Severus and Draco would hurt him when they bevcome lovers, and it will also confirm his knowledge that no one but them can give him what he really wants in a relationship.

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  • From on July 29, 2009
    YOUR KILLIN ME WITH THE CLIFFHANGERS. lol I really like this story. Keep up the great work and UPDATE SOON!
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  • From PanickedSerenity on July 28, 2009
    Thanks for the update. I am going to visit my sister out of state for a few weeks, so hopefully there will be lots of updates when I get back! I am glad Harry got over some of his fears and that BOTH Draco and Serverus are gaining ground with Harry. Again, thanks for the update!
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  • From on July 28, 2009
    WOW! This chapter was AMAZING! The best yet, in my opinion. The imagery during the Earthquake Tunnel scene was absolutely intoxicating. I could really see the great Phoenix, the bond shimmering all around them, and especially the tilting, shaking house. It was so clear in my head--I'm just dying to sit down and sketch out their crumbling home.

    I'm also as awed by my own forgetfulness as I am by the perfection of this chapter. How could I forget that there was still one more step to go in forming the bond?! I completely overlooked the fact that Harry still hadn't opened his side of the bond, becoming swept away in Draco's and Severus's happiness with hearing Harry and each other. But what a glorious way to be reminded! I simply can't wait to hear more about the fullness each must be feeling now with the bond entirely open. And I loved Harry's initial fears being broken down both by his bondmates' reassurances and his own hunger for what he feels when the bonds are open.

    Like I said, the best chapter yet. And I'm really looking forward to the next :)
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  • From ANON - Mia on July 28, 2009
    Gorgeous doesn't cover it, doesn't do it justice. I need bigger words, something more inticate and elegant to describe: best happy, warm, powerful, captivating, prickly tear feeling, heart jumping out of my throat, forgetting how to breathe, vibrating in my seat while I read this package of delicate strength and beauty. Sorry. I'm not the author. I don't have to be coherent. You, however, excell at it. Thank you. You are swaying my reading preferences.

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 28, 2009
    Awesome chapter! I'm so glad that Harry finally opened the bonds. I liked the reasons you gave for Harry's hesitation since they were very believable in the context of Harry's personality. Even though the bond is open, their relationship has much room to grow since they still don't /fully/ understand one another.
    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on July 28, 2009
    I just have to know: are you a student of practical politics? Because your grasp of it is absolutely marvelous. You have the rasp of levels within levels and intersecting but separate plans and goals that I only wish I could have, as well as being able to incorporate them into a fictional setting and give them a sense of immediacy my own writing lacks. (bowing repeatedly)I'm not worthy!
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  • From ANON - Joolia on July 28, 2009
    Amazing story! I am absolutely in love with it. Your writing is beautiful and I seriously cannot get enough of it. I'm glad I found it so late because I don't think I could've stood the suspense of not knowing whether or not the triad would ever be complete (in love that is). I can't wait for the next update! =)
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  • From wiccanmama on July 26, 2009
    Just finished reading this for the first time and I am really impressed. Usually triad fics don't have enough detail for me and all the characters kind of bleed together and don't have individual personalities. This fic is one of the exceptions. Very well done. Well detailed but not overly so and there is a storyline other than the relationship wich makes it so much easier to read. I can hardly wait for any update you might have!
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  • From ANON - allyroksmuch on July 25, 2009
    So I finally returned from vacation, and was able to catch up on the few chapters that I missed, and boy did I miss the best parts. Im so glad that Harry is trying the traid relationship. Can't wait to see how the relationship evolves, what Narcissa's book contains, what Kingsly is up to, and what will happen with the election for a new minister. Good job and Keep up the good work!
    Ally
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  • From on July 25, 2009
    This chapter had me smiling a lot. The way the three are getting along is so perfect! Each one has their doubts and struggles but they keep coming through for each other. They constantly say how well they work together when they're fighting or doing political things but it's nice to see that they work equally well together in the simple routines of life.

    I especially loved the scene at Dumbledore's graveside. Seeing Severus's soft side (a very uncharacteristic side for him) is inevitable in this story but it's nice to know that his soft side isn't much softer than the rest of him. You've written him so well!

    It looks like Kingsley is definitely working his way back into the picture. I wonder what he's hiding this time. Can't wait to find out!
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  • From ANON - tf on July 25, 2009
    I'm glad they're getting closer; Severus talking to Albus was good and I'm glad he and Harry spent time and that Harry was perceptive enough to pick up on what he needs too so hope Draco listens; thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2009
    Still longing for more. Still find this story very very good. Just go on. Nothing more to say today. :-)
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  • From ANON - nekoyoka on July 25, 2009
    OK, I know this is the first time I've reviewed, but that's only because I've been to busy going back and reading all your other work and I'm just barely half way through that. It would be an understatement to say that you are one of the best authors that I've read. I've been following Phoenix for about two weeks and I love the fact that you have regular updates.

    I was wondering if it wouldn't be presumptuous of me to make a small request-a birthday request-of you. OK, my birthday is on the 26th, tomorrow, and Harry's is on the 31st, so I was wondering if you could do a Harry/Draco birthday fic...? The only thing I ask is that it have a good ending, maybe be humorous. I have no idea if you already have one planned or if you've already done one, but I thought I'd put all my eggs in one basket and ask. Anyway, yeah, that's all I've got to say. Can't wait for your next update.

    -nekoyoka
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