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Reviews for Star Crossed

By : ranmouri
  • From ANON - Slashylicious on July 23, 2009
    Finally i have found a brilliant H/D story again!!!,it must have been a century since i last have read such a great story^^
    Im so exited XD i hope you gonna update the next chapter soon
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  • From sonykit on July 22, 2009
    this was just so twisted. the concept was fairly disturbing and the madness was almost overwhelming. i especially like the last part wherein they were revealing who they were in that past life. everyone's character was so unexpected and i can't wait for the revelation of who marcel was. while i have my guesses, i will stop thinking because you always surprise your readers anyway. this chapter was well-written - the suspense and intensity were well played out. i liked the part where both jean and xavier, both previously denying their love for each other, finally confessed in that climactic and insane moment. hoping for more real soon. :D
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  • From thrnbrooke on July 22, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 4!!! What a sad ending!
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  • From ANON - butterpie on July 22, 2009
    Wowsers, I am amazed at how each part of this tale is full of emotion and seems to loop over and over as it ends only to begin anew in another time and place. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - BennyPeace on July 21, 2009
    This is incredible; I love it. The plot is original and it's all very well written. . . brilliant.
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  • From ANON - bloodsoakedninja on July 21, 2009
    i love this story, i'm so glad that you updated. i cant wait for the next chapter. i wonder why the next life is going to be so intense? update soon.
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  • From sonykit on May 22, 2009
    that was so sad. i loved how light it seemed at first, what with the lack of blatant use of force to conquer etsuji. what made it dark was kyousuke always hiding in the shadows, always looking after etsuji. while this could be sweet in some world, your story line made it appear as what it really is: a growing dangerous obsession. the ending was so bittersweet. i especially felt harry's vulnerability with their return to the present and hermione screaming at him. i really liked how ron was able to pull them all back together. like in the previous chapter, i really liked how you tied together the past and the present. while you were creating an alternate universe, the original canon characters were not being lost. so excited to see the next one. thanks for sharing this with us. PS. you uploaded chapter two twice. :D
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  • From bloodsoakedninja on May 21, 2009
    omg i love this story. i hope that you will update soon. i wondered what the emergency scorpious had to attend to was. cant wait for the next update.
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  • From betelgeuse on May 21, 2009
    Ohh, I loooove this story. Great job changing Hermione and Ron's point of view, so they're learning to like and love the beautiful silver eyed boy. Ahh...who'll be the genius to understand the misterious boy is Draco? Poor, sweet Draco, I hope Scorpius was going to warn him. Just a little thing: you've posted chapter 2 twice...evil girl: I thought you posted two chapter!!! WANT CHAPTER 3. SOON. Kisses
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 21, 2009
    Soooo need chapter 3!!! Is Scorpius getting Draco? Does he see the entwined paths?
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  • From ANON - butterpie on May 14, 2009
    Amazing, how this began, and I can't wait to see what you have coming up next! So please continue to show more!
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  • From bloodsoakedninja on May 14, 2009
    i love this story so far. it has an intresting story line that most stories dont have. i love the direction that your taking having Draco Malfoy's son being Harry's psychologist. i cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From sonykit on May 14, 2009
    all i can say is amazing. this is a very unique plot and i really loved how you started light, almost funny, and ended up angsty and dark. i felt the savagery of harry's past life and how deep his obsession went. marcus was so well-written; like a different character altogether. the brutality with which he treated caedryn was brilliantly written as it was coupled with that irreverent admiration. i loved the complexity you introduced to each character. so looking forward to more. :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 13, 2009
    Silver eyes? Draco? Another Malfoy? I soooo need chapter 2!!
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  • From sikare on May 13, 2009
    Um, wow. I like how the fic starts off light, then goes into Harry's horrible past lives. And I'm definitely looking forward to more.
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