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Reviews for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - Mia on July 03, 2009
    I love your Ginny. That isn't all I liked about it, but it's what stood out the most to me this time. Thank you. Extremely entertaining and diverting.

    ~Mia
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  • From ANON - ChaRang on July 03, 2009
    Love it.
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  • From ANON - ChaRang on July 03, 2009
    I hope there's a nice surprise coming from Susan to Lavender in the immediate future ,lol.
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  • From helenesnape on July 03, 2009
    OMG!!! You actually used the tidbit about the male orangutan's special ability. That was too funny for words.

    Lavender is such a mean, spiteful witch. I don't want to believe that she would deliberately hurt Susan's feelings like that, but given who she is, she would be the type to stop at nothing to get who she considers to be her man. I honestly hope Susan retains a bit of her rage at Ron and lets loose on Lavender when the truth comes out.

    Looking forward to your next update!
    MHS
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  • From ANON - Mia on July 03, 2009
    I am of two minds about this chapter. It was either the best, non grove, one yet, or my least favorite. This review might just be the biggest waste of space ever. I really loved the gay apes, the brawl between HP and RW, I want to peel Lav's eyelids from her face and I want to just hug poor Susan. And the things I want to doo to Snape... well, you write them pretty accurately. Thank you.

    ~Mia
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  • From Ms_Figg on July 02, 2009
    Hi Jayne. No, he won't be changing back. He has to age naturally.
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  • From JayneTrazom on July 02, 2009
    damn! lavender is a bitchhhhh! ack! i love it! ooooh i cannot wait for someone to knock her off that high horse of hers. bigger is better! =D

    also, is snape ever going to revert back to who he was? i mean, like, no longer a teenager but a potions master again? cuz that would be interesting (by that i mean so fucking hot)

    just wondering, keep up the good work!
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  • From pstibbons on July 02, 2009
    It would be fun if Hermione Hexed Lavender in a public display of support for Ron/Susan.
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  • From Tenar10r on July 02, 2009
    Eeeeevil Lavender!
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  • From Ms_Figg on July 02, 2009
    Hey MND: What's picking up the glove???
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  • From ANON - MND on July 02, 2009
    I really like your lavender... in a bad way.. you know what I mean. I like her bad form... :)

    Tahnks for picking up the glove by the way. And for making hermione so smart. (Please let her find she is Severus Mate... I can imagine her face XD)


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  • From pstibbons on July 02, 2009
    Fun duel :)
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  • From pstibbons on July 02, 2009
    best lines:


    ”Witches can be rather silly,” Hermione said softly.
    ”Especially when it comes to the wizards they choose to be with,” he muttered.

    ”You’re nothing but a big show off,” Hermione chuckled as he spread his wings dramatically. She quickly drew a sketch. She’d fill in the details later.

    What I think is ironic is that after being tormented by Gryffindors for years, I ended up protecting and nearly giving my life for them. The bottom line is, it took a Slytherin to watch over you lot. Cunning and resourcefulness mattered much more than just blind courage.”

    ”No, I really don’t need to examine those up close,” she told him. “I can get those sketchings from—from a book. You have the standard lion body after all.”
    The gryffin lowered its leg and let out a little line of chatter that Hermione was sure translated into something like, “What kind of researcher are you?”

    ”Stop aggravating me,” Snape hissed at her. “You are not going to parade me around for your NEWTS! I can’t believe you’re a Gryffindor. You are so—so self-promoting!”

    ”I’m not blackmailing anyone, Severus. You don’t have to help me,” she told him, turning back in her chair and pretending to leaf through her book.
    “Fine. If you will continue to accompany me while I learn to fly, I’ll stand in on your blasted NEWTS,” Snape muttered.
    Hermione immediately popped up.
    ”Well, let’s go then,” she said, heading for the wall and letting herself out, Snape staring after her.
    ”Damn manipulative Gryffindors,” he hissed, striding after her.

    Snape ran along the perimeter of the stadium and now was streaking back toward Hermione full speed, the witch gasping. He wasn’t slowing down as he drew nearer, his dark eyes focused on her as if she were prey. Hermione’s heart started pounding. How angry had she really made the wizard?

    ”I’ll—I’ll have a saddle made. We’ll go back to my quarters and you can take my measurements, he said enthusiastically. “And it will be charmed so the rider can’t fall off. That would work, wouldn’t it? Your fear is of falling, not flying. This way, you don’t have to worry. Show some courage. You are a Gryffindor, despite how Slytherin you act.”

    He was still gripping her hands, all excitement and exuberance. He could fly and he wanted to share that with Hermione. She had been there for it all. She just had to agree and see what it was like.

    ”You know, you never smiled when you were an adult. It’s nice to see,” she told him.
    ”I didn’t have much to smile about then, did I?” he replied. “I’m starting to think that—that life is going to be—better this time. It can’t possibly be worse.”
    ”No,” Hermione agreed with a soft smile. “It certainly can’t.”


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  • From pstibbons on July 02, 2009
    I liked the idea of the Pensieves... though some spies would consider that incriminating evidence. Still, I'm sure different spies worked differently... I know I'd want to keep records. And since it led to such a wonderful scene in this chapter...

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    ”Yes! Destroy them. You don’t need to see them, you don’t need to relive what you went through, what you lived through. Don’t you see you are free now to have a good life? Destroy every single one of them if you ever want to be happy!”

    ”Some of them are labeled ‘Torture.’ Did Voldemort torture people?”
    ”He tortured YOU! With Unforgivables and with whips and scourges. You were covered in scars as a professor. The marks of your ‘service.’ Do you really want to see yourself strung up by the wrists, your own blood pouring in down your body and pooling under your feet? No, you don’t. You don’t want to see that!”

    ”REDUCTO! REDUCTO!” she cried over and over,...Snape watching her with his mouth open. Tears streamed down her face as she demolished everything he used to be.

    “I’ve never had anyone so determined to protect me from myself—even—even Lily walked away from me the day I called her a Mudblood. I was—I was just angry at the world—at everyone. She left me to my fate

    ”I’ll wait as long as you like, Hermione Granger,” he replied softly.
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  • From pstibbons on July 02, 2009
    best lines:
    ”I’m not the one having impure thoughts, Headmistress. You are the one worried about what two young adults, who incidentally are both the age of consent, and one of which who has been through an entire war, are actually—learning. I resent being interrogated. You don’t have the right to do it. I am doing nothing wrong.”

    She had no idea Hermione wasn’t experiencing that much turmoil at all, if any.

    Hermione Granger is not a Lily Evans, and that, my dear, is a good thing,” the portrait replied. “Leave them alone, Minerva. Let the boy have a chance at happiness this time around. The gods know the first time was a bust.”

    ”This ought to have you running after students in no time, Mr. Filch,” Snape said softly as he retrieved a heavy glove, ladle and several jars.
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