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Reviews for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From neelix on June 19, 2009
    Does this mean we get some lemons soon? I find their growing awareness of each other very touching, actually, and the slow move towards this has been great!
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  • From DracoLover69 on June 18, 2009
    C'mon... it's the big 4.0. They have to get together soooooon!!!!!!! Please, please, please continue this fantabulous work and make sure there is some real, real, real lemony smut (a.k.a hot sex) in the next chapter --- well, SS/HG, that is.
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 18, 2009
    polka dot: Well, in Severus' mind, he's been young a lot longer than two weeks, and Hermione is the first accessible witch he's encountered, and he has been kissing her . . . and wants to do more, sooo yeah he's wanking off.

    Hermione's infatuated by him and sexually attracted to him. Sexual feelings need to be relieved. Naturally they'd think about each other. It would be strange if they didn't.

    And in case you think it odd that they feel like this so soon, keep in mind that there are people who meet and have sex the same day. And they are both young adults, and emotions run high most of the time. It's been about 3 or 4 weeks . . . but desire has no timeline. lol.

    Hermione is having a harder time with her feelings than Severus. She wants to, but she's having issues with it.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on June 18, 2009
    I might be off on the timeline but I think SS has only been young for a couple of weeks now and they're already wanking off to each other?
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  • From ANON - Robin on June 18, 2009
    Ooooooh... YES! Nice one, this chapter. I pretty like the direction Hermione's - and Severus' - thoughts are going.
    One of the best stories I've read so far. Awesome.
    Please more - I'll give you a chocolate cookie if that helps ;-)
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  • From pinkslytherin on June 18, 2009
    loved the chapter!!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 16, 2009
    Interesting take on Blaise. I think they should obliviate him before he gets even nastier. Loved the exit when she bolted.
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  • From ANON - lemontwist on June 16, 2009
    Brilliant writing as usual. This last chapter has been my favorite by far. I love the langlock jinx... there are days when I wish I could use that one at work ;)
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  • From pinkslytherin on June 16, 2009
    loved it!! snape is such a gentelman to hermione!!
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 16, 2009
    polka dot: Harry did all right, and he didn't save the wizarding world alone. He had a lot of help, not to mention the powerful Elder Wand. So he had "magical aids" as well as people behind him. :)
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  • From ANON - polka dot on June 16, 2009
    gotta say I'm disappointed in Harry. How did he manage to save the world?
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  • From ANON - Ashley on June 16, 2009
    Hello Miss Figg, I finally discovered that we could actually send you reviews! I've been reading your stories for what seems like forever, half the time not even realizing they were by the same author. I read fanfiction, burningpen, and adultfanfiction on a regular basis, and I have to say you're by far the most talented author on those sites that I've read. You keep in line with the true characters, and you make me laugh constantly. I've only read your HG/SS stories, but I think you're talent really shows through when you take a more serious tone with your stories. Ever since I've discovered this story I've checked everyday, and I'm very happy to say that I haven't been dissapointed. Keep on doing your amazing work, I look forward to more of your stories :)
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  • From use2b2t2 on June 16, 2009
    As always Mrs Figg, I enjoy your stories. This one is interesting and you are building up everything nicely. Keep it up. And um, I was not keeping track with the jewels though I agree withyou that Snape is ahead. I hope SS and HG have an awesome showdown at the end of their review!

    Mare
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  • From ANON - L on June 15, 2009
    hahaha so funny

    great chappie lady
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 15, 2009
    polka dot: According to the HP lexicon, it seems the age line makes everyone sprout a beard. lol. I think that's the punishment part of the spell.
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