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Reviews for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From ANON - polka dot on June 15, 2009
    should hermoine be sprouting a beard. That's a bit unusual. Very cute chapter
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  • From ANON - Embir_lily on June 15, 2009
    You write the best snape/hermione fics i cant wait to read this
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 15, 2009
    Robin: Big error on the nature of Boggarts, there. Sigh. But, I'm going to leave it for now. Now that I think about it I do remember either reading something or hearing something about a Boggart becoming confused and changing shapes when facing more than one opponent. Drat. But thank you for pointing it out. It will help Boggart-kind in the future. :)
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  • From ANON - Robin on June 15, 2009
    Hi!
    First of all - GREAT story. I love it. That's just a turn to the story - your imagination is absolutely awesome. And your speed! Gods help me if I have ever seen an author as quick as you.
    Please write on. Oh, and congratulations to your new grandchildren.

    I just noticed something about the Boggart: it turns into Fred because it sees/senses Ron. Yes. But all the people around - Harry as well - also see Fred. Only when the Boggart is after Harry does it turn into Voldemort. That's also how you can ridicule/craze a Boggart: don't try to fight all on your own. Maybe you're lucky and it can't decide which form to take and tries to be both at the same time. If you don't know what I mean, read it up in HP III.

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  • From pinkslytherin on June 15, 2009
    loved it!! thanks for the update!!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 15, 2009
    Hmm, static trap spells--this could get nasty. Loving it, the age line was great!
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  • From lisamarie on June 14, 2009
    Ahhhhhhhhahahaha I can't stop laughing.
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  • From lilashannah on June 14, 2009
    So it's all out war! I love it.I should have know Snape would be the first to cast a Unforgivable.I would love it if Ginny won. She's a bit player and everybody eles is reather full of themselves.Poor Ron running around in his knickers.lol.Still it wasn't a nice way for Ron to find out that Hermione is sort of seeing Snape.Poor Harry,How did he ever win against volddy?He seems kind of clueless.Love the story and can't wait for the next chappy.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on June 14, 2009
    oh no Harry's getting his butt kicked. He needs to step it up, it's embarrassing.
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  • From ANON - englsih on June 14, 2009
    sounds just like snape to lose something but however gained in a better way. HMMMMMM
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  • From pinkslytherin on June 14, 2009
    loved the snape hermione action! cant wait to see who wins!!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 14, 2009
    that's fun, a seven-way magical brawl! But wouldn't that tend to bring on flashbacks? PTSD would have to be a factor after war, wouldn't it?
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  • From ANON - MND on June 14, 2009
    Ble... Probably is my fault because I didn
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 13, 2009
    MND: I agree with you that the comments were honest, and indeed welcome. However, one thing a writer has to do, at least in my estimation, is be honest to her story. While input from readers is welcome, if you change your direction because of pressure, you aren't writing honestly. Now, in your next story, you might take "what the people want" into consideration and write something to soothe that savage breast, but the story you are currently working on should remain true to what you envision or you lose it. That's the way I feel anyway. I appreciate every comment and thought, but I have yet to change my approach to suit readers. I write because I enjoy it, and it really entertains ME. Not plotting them out adds to the enjoymeht, because I never know exactly what's going to happen chapter to chapter. Everything is based on what's gone before. And I have a love of exploring interactions, whether or not they are "appealing." Many real life interactions aren't and I try to reflect that, depending on the story. This story is full of erroneous assumptions on the part of all the characters, which is why I'm enjoying writing it so much. A brilliant witch like Hermione is going to get it from all sides. Jealousy, misunderstandings should abound and do. We see Hermione's errors blatantly because she is so integral It's something rarely seen with her, another reason I like it. I received a glowing review saying the story had everything " humor, snark, sarcasm, jealousy, romances, drama, and so much more! i love all of it." That's really what I want to portray overall, and some people see it. I don't want black and white. I want all shades. And I'm pretty satisfied with how this particular story is going, and when you get down to it, that's what really matters in the end. I don't think JKR would have changed a thing because of reviews. If she had, she would have been dishonest. As someone else said, if they want a perfect Hermione (paraphrased) they'd write her themself. More power to her. :)
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  • From ANON - MND on June 13, 2009
    Just for the record... I don
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