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Reviews for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Ms_Figg on June 08, 2009
    polka dot: I'd just like to say some people do in fact enjoy the scent of others, or their own scent, and men often enjoy the scent of women, and vice versa. If people didn't like to be "smelled" they wouldn't wear perfumes. Some people enjoy natural scents as well, and find them a turn on. So, although not "everybody" likes being "smelled", there are a few people in this world that actually do. :)
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 08, 2009
    polka dot: lol. Yes, he does have a bird's head when he's transformed. But his human senses have been heightened. A gryffin is a hunter and a magical crossbreed. More than likely it has both a powerful sense of smell like a lion, and sharp eyesight like a raptor.
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  • From ANON - polka dot on June 08, 2009
    eech no one wants to be smelled. Besides I don't know if birds can smell well and he does have bird head...wierd
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  • From Callisto426 on June 08, 2009
    Wooh! Thanks for updating!
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  • From JayneTrazom on June 08, 2009
    mmmkay, i take back my comment about ron. if you writing about ron makes great chapters like this then please continue.

    oh, and you want to know what else stopped while I was reading this? my heart! ack!! they are each others yin & yang, which is why I love hg/ss so much.

    do you have facebook? or like a fan page?
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  • From Tenar10r on June 08, 2009
    I am very much enjoying this story and am so glad you did not throw Ron under the bus on the Animagus issue. Yes and Orangutan is kinda funny and matches his colouring but pointing out the tool use and intelligence of the creature doesn't make Ron a buffoon. *bad pun*
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 08, 2009
    smurphy: LOL! I'd forgotten all about that! Too funny!! :)))
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  • From smmz79 on June 08, 2009
    HA HA HA omg ron is an ape!!!!!! ok so i am reading one of your other stories called yuleride and therer is a part in there where ron is getting help with his sex life from bill and he tells bill he likes banana and bill says an ape like you would ha ha thats great and here you made his animagus form an ape oh thats good
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 08, 2009
    Hi Jayne Elizabeth: It's not that I'm losing my focus. I prefer stories that are three dimensional, and unless the characters are stranded on an island or imprisoned together in some manner, there should be interaction with others. Not boring interaction either. Let's face it, Ron was important in Hermione's life, and he's not just going to disappear and he's going to have feelings about what's happening with her and Snape. So, in my opinion, what's going on with him is not only interesting, but intergral to a well rounded story. It works into the storyline well, and has the potential to provide some great comedy relief while our fav couple gets their stuff together. Basically, I write what I personally enjoy, and I like a bit of character interaction, especially when I've been divisive with them. It humanizes the situation. It's not that I've lost my focus, reality dictates that people have lives, and those lives should be reflected if you're trying to write about life, even if it's fantasy. It make it so much better in my opinion. Thank you for your honest comments. They are appreciated. ***
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 08, 2009
    Hi elladee: You know, I really was hesitant to have Ron find his form so quickly . . . until I figured out what it was going to be and imagined all the fun scenarios, and I just couldn't help myself. I think I locked on to something when rage had something to do with Severus' transformation, so I just ran with it, trying to draw it out with suspense within the chapter, then doing the big REVEAL, which really, just leaves laughter and more questions. Ron as an Orangutan is funny, but you know, it's not that bad a form for an ordinary animal. And there's something about a primate that can really be funny, especially with how close it is to human anatomy. lololol. Need I say more? I probably will in the story, but thanks so much for commenting. I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. ***
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  • From JayneTrazom on June 08, 2009
    I feel like your loosing focus. what does ron have to do with the plot? it would be interesting to continue exploring this topic, but maybe as a separate fic.
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  • From elladee on June 08, 2009
    hahahah great twist! At first I was a little bit disappointed that Ron found his Animagus form already, it seemed too easy... but you made me love it as soon as you revealed his form haha!!

    Anyway, I've been reading this story since you posted the first chapter last month, but it was all read-and-run up to now so this is my first review! ;P Great premise, engaging dialogue, and interesting developments! While I'm also a fan of WIKTT-type SS/HG fics, as well as fics that take place after Hermione has graduated from Hogwarts, I very much like this concept of matching a young Snape with Hermione. The way you've written him is great!

    I'm looking forward to the next chapters (your daily updates are awesome btw)! Thanks for a great story~ :D
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  • From pinkslytherin on June 07, 2009
    LOL!!! loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - Dana on June 07, 2009
    Love it. Ron's form just kind of fit his personality.
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  • From lilashannah on June 07, 2009
    I think I peed my pants..Ron an Orangutan.That has to be one of the funny things I have ever read.I love how Hermione and Snape are getting on.Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next chappy!


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