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Reviews for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From pinkslytherin on June 06, 2009
    happy that severus is seeing her in a new light!
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 06, 2009
    Bonny: Lol. I hadn't realized I used her full name twice in that manner. :) I write so quickly sometimes I lose the flow because I'm feeling the conversation. The comment that she was special should have been followed just by her first name. The final statement, her full name. I'll fix that. Thanks for pointing it out. ***
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  • From ANON - annie on June 06, 2009
    ooohhhhh Hermione is gonna get hers! hehehe great as always my dear!
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  • From ANON - Bonny on June 06, 2009
    Maybe he could... stop... using her full name all the time? I'm hearing it oddly in my head. "You're a special witch, Hermione Granger. I'll wait as long as you'd like, Hermione Granger. Please let me renovate this hidden room and make it a shrine to you... Hermione Granger."

    Excellent bombardment of chapters, keep going at this pace and I'll just keep hitting the refresh button until a new one pops up.
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  • From Given2Fly on June 05, 2009
    "I'll wait as long as you like, Hermione Granger."



    *SWOON*
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 05, 2009
    Hi Snapes_Goddess: As long as something I've written makes you think, it's all good. I'm so sorry to hear what happened to your ex-husband. It's terrible. :(
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on June 05, 2009
    Hi! i read, but I dont review alot....I was reading your comment about spies keeping their own records for their protection and it made me think about how so much of it was done in code how perhaps the concept of arithmancy could be used to decipher code...I wouldnt be a very good person to write such a thing because I am mathmatically illiterate =). it also got me thinking about how spies and undercover agents were mentally capable of compartmentalizing their lives, blocking out certain actions and events, shoving them into their own little 'files' in their brains. Its something Ive dealt with recently, issues of PTSD thanks to our government sending my now ex-husband to Iraq and destroying him. Anyhow, now Im rambling, see why I dont review? =) I just wanted to let you know that it got me thinking =)


    Happy Writing,
    S_G
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 05, 2009
    Wow. I can see him keeping private records as well, just in case. Also it would make it easier to deal with if he could literally 'get it out of his head' to allow him th emotional distance to keep spying. Perhaps young Severus might not want to have those memories back, he's got enough to deal with. Or he may need a long chat with Lucius for his sanity's sake.
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  • From pinkslytherin on June 05, 2009
    thanks for the update!
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  • From pinkslytherin on June 05, 2009
    thanks for the chapter!
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 05, 2009
    Zilla: lol. I don't Hermione has the time to devote to discovering her Animagus form at this point in time. Maybe after she takes the NEWTS. She has a lot on her plate right now.
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  • From ANON - ripewickedplum12 on June 05, 2009
    I really like this story. I was wondering do you think Hermione will have an animagus form as well? It may help her test her theory from her point of view.
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  • From ANON - Zilla on June 05, 2009
    Hmmm, I always wondered why Hermione didn't bother discovering her animagus form, I mean she is always desperate to learn new things, to challenge herself. Is that her next step? Maybe as an aside to her studying? Or an expansion/application/test of her theories, justified since this is for her Transfiguration NEWT? Could she also become something amazing, a dragon, perhaps?

    All that "wondering out loud" can be translated plainly as: Oooooh! I'm so into this damn story. Please please please please please PLEASE let Hermione become a really cool animagus too! A dragon! Foreshadowing! Oh PLEEEAASE!!!

    It's not exactly mature, but that was my immediate reaction that I then tried to subtly work into your developing plot.

    ... PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - AnneMarie on June 05, 2009
    I love it! More please!
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  • From Tenar10r on June 05, 2009
    I love the fact that Severus is making the ointment for Mr. Filch. I always felt rather sorry for Filch.
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