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Reviews for A Looping of the Scales ~ COMPLETED

By : Ms_Figg
  • From LadyZombie on September 12, 2009
    Here's another worry about Ron; if he continues to eat like that, it's very possible he could rupture his gastroesophageal junction which would cause internal bleedeing.

    Sorry. Old healthcare worker here (now in clinical research YAY). I actually have seen this happen a few times.
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  • From Ms_Figg on September 10, 2009
    LadyFireCrab: You are right. There were differences in the sins and virtues, but I decided to stick with the basic seven rather than nine since seven represents a more spiritual number than nine, which represents a more physical er following. Actually, neither here or there since it's all fiction if you get down to it. I stuck with the basic Catholic rendering. Either would have worked but I prefered seven.
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  • From stray523 on September 10, 2009
    Another great chappie luv. I think Wrath is one of Ron's sins as well though, and there are actually nine virtues. The two you missed are Prudence and Obedience. Also, since the demons basically said that Severus was a reborn soul and basically pure in an earlier chappie, he would be really useful in the banishing along with Harry and Susan. *shrug* Just ideas though. Write it how you like, I'll still read every word and ask for more. Can't wait to see what happens next.
    Astraea
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  • From Tenar10r on September 10, 2009
    Chapter was not too long-winded at all. Sensible conversation among the characters fit in nicely.
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  • From starstruck86 on September 10, 2009
    I loooove the conversation!

    Very nice detailing of all their sins.
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  • From ANON - MysticAngel on September 09, 2009
    Oh I'm so glad the arrogant hermione didn't last that long! I think that was pretty in character for one big outburst and then to have her realize something fishy was going on. Phew :) This is quite an adventure you've put together so far! I check at least 3 times a day to see if you've updated, haha. Goodluck with your writing, see you next chapter.
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  • From honeybee on September 09, 2009
    Whew..they finally know. I was wondering how long you would let them stew. It makes sense that Hermione figured it out; not because she is the smartest, bute because she always seemed introspective to me, someone who looks into her own actions. I'm glad that they know, I was starting to feel really bad about the whole thing. I'm eager to see how they are going to deal with the demons.
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  • From ANON - Grid on September 09, 2009
    Yes!! That`s Hermione. Such a smart girl really. Now the hard part.. is getting Ginny confess Lust hahaha.

    I`ve been wondering wich sins is for the rest of them... Blaise greed probably... anger is another but I don`t know for who... Maybe is better if I just wait. Awsome story.

    I`m sorry that I havn`t leave a review in.. ages...
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  • From Tenar10r on September 09, 2009
    what a wicked turn of events!
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  • From starstruck86 on September 09, 2009
    Ooooh so they're twigging.

    Can't wait to see if the demons get the chance to really set in to anybody before they can sort them out.


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  • From ANON - Audra on September 09, 2009
    Ben Weatherstaff.... isn't that the groundskeeper from The Secret Garden? Eagerly awaiting future chapters!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2009
    I absolutely love the Secret Garden reference! I swear I thought of him even before the Robin showed up, and then I was thinking "No way..."
    And then he said his name and I got really excited, haha.

    Nice job! :)
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  • From Ms_Figg on September 08, 2009
    Hi Samantha. First I have to say it's a little disturbing to know you've been reading my stories since you were 15 because I started out with sexually graphic stories. By now, you're an adult reader so . . . there's very little I can say about that now. I'm honored that my writing has inspired you. I only hope that you've been inspired to write stories that you personally enjoy. I think that's very important, more than anything else. If you write what you personally like, then you know you have at least one person who gets it. lol. Severus Snape is such an awesome character that he will always survive beyond the author who created him. As long as he is loved, he will live on. *** Peace, Understanding, and Blessings to you and yours as well.
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  • From Ms_Figg on September 08, 2009
    Hi yria,

    Snape will not age or regain his memories in this story. It's a true new start.
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  • From ANON - yria on September 08, 2009
    Hi Ms Figg !!!

    I need to ask you : is Snape going to stay forever young in this story? I dont`t know why, but I want to see him 40-thy years old... and how he is going to deal with his feelings for Hermione in sytuation, when his memory will be back. I just miss old Snape ;-]
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