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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Last Moon Queen

By : kyuubifreak
  • From thrnbrooke on December 08, 2009
    Can't wait for chapter 4!!!
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on May 23, 2009
    Okay I'll review please not screaming 3 year olds!! Very good I'm looking forward to the history please hurry
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on May 23, 2009
    THE HYBRID OF DRAGON AND ELF.

    GREAT STORY SO FAR!
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  • From SilverLion on May 23, 2009
    There are still quite a few spelling and other errors in this. Your concept is good, but the spelling and set-up ruin it. When you switch speakers, start a new paragraph, even if it's only a sentence. Also, check and double-check your spelling. In chapter three, you use 'hogswarts' which should be 'Hogwarts'. I vote for either fairy or dragon for Draco, but not a combo. You don't want to get yourself confused.
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  • From knj4k4 on May 22, 2009
    yea i like the hybrid Draco
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 22, 2009
    Sooooo need chapter 4!!! Dragon/fairy hybrid? Interesting. Though an elven/dragon hybrid would be more draconian. An elven/fairy hybrid sounds interesting. Especially if he gets the wings.
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  • From knj4k4 on May 21, 2009
    to bold something you need to put thing around it. here is the site for html that works on this site.
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=3724
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  • From Sakya on May 20, 2009
    Don't let this disencorage you from writing, but you need a new beta for chapter one and chapter two needs some serious work.

    If my english was any good I would volunteer, but my grammar and my spelling are horrible.

    Best of luck.
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  • From neverfallx3 on May 20, 2009
    i want draco to be bottom!

    nice story. update soon!
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on May 20, 2009
    love it!

    I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From knj4k4 on May 20, 2009
    I always love Top Harry. so I vote bottom Draco. I hope you get your chapters beta'd before you update. Your imagery is beautiful but your grammar is hard to make out or read around. The first chapter was wonderful. I'm excited about where you will go with this. Was Harry's crescent moon mark warped by dumbledore into a lightning bolt?
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on May 20, 2009
    I like he idea. Yet the spelling and grammer is so hard to follow. Fix that and this will be awesome.
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  • From SilverLion on May 20, 2009
    I can beta for you, if you haven't chosen anyone else. Find me at cassidy_lord_of_sound@yahoo.com. I already beta for one other author in here (Hedwigseyes). I think that Draco should either be fey-born (part fairy or similar creature: nixie, dryad, naiad, nereid, sylph, satyr, faun, leprechaun, grig, atomie, brownie, etc.) or part-moon dragon.
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 20, 2009
    Dumbledore's sadness of course was fake! He's about to lose Harry's money! Maybe Draco could be elven. Soooo need chapter 3!!!
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  • From wickedwiccanofthemiddwest on May 19, 2009
    Absolutly loved it, What about Fairy for draco's creature?
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