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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Last Moon Queen

By : kyuubifreak
  • From LadySesshoumaru on May 19, 2009
    another good chapter!
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  • From arenhashan on May 19, 2009
    Hmmm...I wouldn't mind reading the unbeta version. Besides, you could always go back and change it. Ahaha. I like your dedication. I truly can't wait to read the rest of your story!
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  • From arenhashan on May 19, 2009
    Wow. Seems really interesting right now!!! Uwahh! What's going to happen?! And darn them for putting Harry in Azkaban!! TT___TT And he's only 14!! I can't wait to see how your story will unfold!!
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  • From HotaruPeaecraft on May 19, 2009
    This could be a great story, but I think you should try to be more descriptive on the appearance of people, their personalities and places where they are, this helps (at least I think) the reader imagine better the character and were they are. You said that your queen serenity it's not form sailor moon.. but the moment I read the name it was her face that I see in your queen... Well... enough of critique... I love Draco/Harry fanfics! I think they are so cute together!! I think this fanfic has great potential and I hope Harry get his revenge on Dumbledore and all Weasleys ... (minus the twins ... I like them ...) I want to read more of this story! Update soon!!
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  • From nekoleopard on May 19, 2009
    i could beta if you want and personally i would love to see a harry/draco pairing for some reason its been mostly draco/harry for a while anyway my email is ainsmacd@gmail.com
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  • From thrnbrooke on May 18, 2009
    Oh I sooo can't wait for more! Who's murder was he framed for? How was Dumbledore able to access his accounts? Is he still about to? Chapter 2 please!
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  • From Dezra on May 18, 2009
    This sounds like an interesting story. I've never been a beta before, but I could try if you couldn't find anyone else. I love the idea of a vengeful Harry. Are all the Weasleys going to be Harry's enemies, including the twins, Bill and Charlie?

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  • From fanficmom on May 18, 2009
    The story sounds like it might be a good one but i could not get past the first paragraph because of all the typos and misuse of words, and tenses. You really need to get a beta before continuing on with this story!
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on May 18, 2009
    hey really like the story but you might want to watch out by using lines like "By the name of Moon I will punish them" is to closly related to sailor moon. and they might just pull your story although i hope they don't just be careful. hope to be reading more from you soon.
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