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Reviews for Penance

By : RynStar15
  • From SheWolf4025 on July 17, 2017

    Ok....just got done.  Amazing, per usual!  I love your writer's voice and you deal well in suspense!   

    Cheers!

    Carolyn


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  • From SheWolf4025 on July 16, 2017

    I enjoy your stories immensely so please take the following for the loving manner in which it's intended. You really do need to work on diction.  Some of it may be typos and I understand that, but sometimes you clearly just don't know what words mean and it's distracting for the reader.  The phrase is to "wreak havoc", rather than to "wreck havoc".

    http://blog.oxforddictionaries.com/2016/01/wreak-havoc-wreck-havoc/

    Cheers!

    Carolyn


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  • From JadedFate on March 08, 2017

    I only have 1 word for this story. Intense. What a roller coaster! I laughed. I cried. I bit my tongue reading the last few chapters without stopping. Think you could spare Draco for a few minutes so he can kiss it better? Haha. Love your stories! On to the next one!


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  • From ANON - MzPearlz on September 28, 2014
    Vest.Story.Angst. and all that shiz. EVER. you had me GOING. Oh my goodness if this would have been halfway finished when I started reading it I would be raging. Epic ending. I bet you could make an epic epilogue thougggghhh!!! :D :D thanks for writing!!

    MzPearlz
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  • From hhait on August 18, 2013
    Good plot with enough smut to keep us all happy!

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  • From sarahkay502 on May 05, 2013
    This was a really imaginative story. I enjoyed it alot!! I only have one question. How do you give birth to a baby and still have your hymen intact? I liked how you gave Hermione her innocence back...but the baby thing didn't make any sense. Anyway...GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Jordan on April 13, 2013
    This was a very good story and plot. I found very very few typos and my only greivance is i was raped a little over 6months ago please put a warning in the summary, "WARNING:contains rape scenes"
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  • From ANON - Ysi on March 27, 2013
    That a very good story. You had me hooked from page one. Loved it and I trully thought the ending would have been bad. Well done!
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  • From kazfeist on July 20, 2009
    Very nicely done! I particularly liked your reasoning on why Hermione survived the killing curse. Vey inventive. :D
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  • From blondpierogi on July 12, 2009
    ooh wow! this story rocks!!!! i just read it straight thru and i loved it! great job!!
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  • From evedarkheart on July 11, 2009
    that was great i loved it. when are you going to do the wedding?
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  • From shelagh on July 10, 2009
    Execellent job!!!!!!
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  • From DragonHeartstring on July 10, 2009
    Beautiful
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  • From emmibubbles07 on July 10, 2009
    Love the ending! And yes, an epilogue does sound nice,lol =]
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  • From dragongirl on July 10, 2009
    BRAVO!!!!!!!!! A happy ending, and no tissues need it!!!!!!! Beautiful!!!
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