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By : RynStar15
  • From distinctlyME on June 15, 2009
    I am going to take one wild guess and say that Hermione has her magic back because of Draco. Because her emotion gave it back to her? She needed it to save him and so it was there for her.

    Tricky tricky though. It could be anything.

    I love this story fully. Every chapter has ben at the edge of my seat. Your style of writing is intoxicating.
    Looking forward to the next update.

    xo
    dM
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  • From margaritama on June 15, 2009
    WHAT???? Cliffie is baaaad! Naughty, you are naughty. Her powers were jolted back by a combination of her fear for Draco and her love for him...at least that's my theory.
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  • From rainsokooshie on June 15, 2009
    Love this story! I'm absolutely hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2009
    I'm glad Ginny came around. I thought she would. Might be the only thing I've been right about so far. LOL How's she going to react when she finds out about Harry though and how will that affect her relationship with Luna????

    Thank goodness she made Hermione go to Draco and well, talk didn't really happen now, did it? LOL And damn that coitus interuptus!!!! How rude! I wonder what raid they're planning. And finally they got to be together in the biblical sense - wonderful. And okay, to step back a bit. Was she pregnant to Lucius or not? I can't imagine he'd want a half blood bastard child so what happened to that baby if the pregnancy actually came to fruition???? That enough questions for you? LOL
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  • From kocicka55 on June 14, 2009
    Wow. I'm not sure if I'll ever be able to give you a good enough review. Between 'Breaking the Chain' and 'Penance' I am speechless. I absolutely adored 'B the C' just the concept that they traveled back in time and all of the hardships Hermione and Draco encountered, oh my. I was saddened when it ended, but I truly enjoyed your portrayal of how everything had to tie together. And now, Penance is bloody magnificent! I enjoy how she alienated herself from the wizarding world, but at the same time, something is nagging me, but I can't quite put my finger on it. I feel as though Hermione is getting off too easy or something. But then I'm conflicted because she had the choice to choose whether or not to leave in the first place. Hmm. And this whole rescue mission regarding Harry. It seems to me as though something is definitely not right there... And if Hermione did in fact either give birth to satanic spawn or else she rid herself of the evil, would it not have occurred to her to attempt to gain revenge on the person who forced her to endure the that hell in the first place?? Or did it warp her mind so much that she underwent a complete personality change and opted for that brave little gryffindor who had defeated so much vileness to just dissipate into nothingness?? Oh well. Regardless of my random ranting, thank you SOOO much for your stories!! And I look forward to the rest of Penance and many more Harry Potter fics in the future!!!!
    ~A devoted fan.
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  • From Robs on June 14, 2009
    loved that chapter! Maybe it was a bit of a cheese-fest, but it fit in well with the rest of the story. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From LittleMissPrincess on June 14, 2009
    AHHH
    I loved it
    That was fucking amazing.

    They're completely adorable together, and I CAN'T WAIT for more!

    I'm also very glad Ginny and Hermione made up, even though there wasn't much focus on them the point was still made.

    I can't wait until the next update!
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  • From DragonHeartstring on June 14, 2009
    It was cheesy but in a good way:) I just can't wait to see how she gets her magic back. I have an idea but I will just see how it plays out. Update soon!
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  • From dragongirl on June 13, 2009
    Why I am suspecting that very soon you will give us a tissue alert!!! O my dear God!!! Please I beg you a happy ending for this two. Does he really know what happened to her? I meant Draco? Is there a baby anywhere or and abortion of some kind? You brought many questions, but that is good, that tells us that the plot is working and our imagination fly on different directiosn and you will be like a captain that put us back on track.
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  • From margaritama on June 13, 2009
    OMG - he LOVES her so much. I adore how you've really fought to keep him as canon as possible yet matured him and all the while completely and utterly in love with her. I'm bawling and will beat you (just kidding....well, maybe not...okay, no I'm kidding)...if they don't end up together....LOL..sniff sniff.
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  • From ExperienceMyDreams on June 13, 2009
    I no sooner review this story and head out to look for others and you had it updated man I could not ask for better timing!! I'm hoping whne this review is done that it will updated again... maybe not but a girl can hope!! Great chapter!!
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  • From ExperienceMyDreams on June 13, 2009
    I like where this one is going!!!! I'm hoping the end of this one doesn't make me cry!!! Hope you update soon!!!! I'm just on love with story... I'm just wondering and thinking that Hermoine's child is the key to getting though the wards.... only what did she do with the child????? Gave it up maybe? If so then what will happen... Will she and Draco have to go back to the States to to get him or her and if so can you have Draco stop by Bryson City, North Carolina and see me for about a day I think that I can get out all of my needs in a day! Maybe... Update soon!!
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  • From distinctlyME on June 13, 2009
    Ow Ow!!! *wolf whistles*

    Obviously she had Lucius Malfoy's baby...but why won't she tell anyone?
    I mean I can see her pride being damaged, but she did fight it sounds like. I don't understand why she won't tell everyone except Draco and McGonagall why she left. SO confuzzled with Hermione's mind frame. I loveee it!!!

    Terribly excited for your next update.

    *heart*
    xo
    dM
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  • From margaritama on June 13, 2009
    I adore that man....he wears his heart on his sleeve. And Hermione just take the happiness. It's a beacon of light admist the darkness. He loves you - surely she can see it. Stop being afraid. The only way she'll conquer her past is stop being afraid. This step with Draco was huge. They both need each other so desperately.

    Now, her pregnancy. I can't tell if she just aborted - which I can see her doing. I can't imagine she would have given a magical child up for adoption. More more more. *chomps on virtual cookie*
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  • From Robs on June 13, 2009
    So she's finally admitted to herself that she likes him! I hope he continues to be Draco now, not Malfoy. So he and Minerva are the only two that know of the reason she really left? Interesting...xD I hope she manages to get her magic back. It would be a bitch if she didn't. I'm intrigued as to how things are going to get yet more interesting....look forward to the next chapter!

    p.s. This is the second review I have written for this chapter, but my internet went mental the first time and I lost it...it may or may not have posted it, so sorry if it did. Actually that's a lie. I'm not sorry, because your story deserves to have many reviews. But, yeah. I'll shut up now.
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