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By : RynStar15
  • From dragongirl on June 13, 2009
    Bring it on!!!!!!!! LOL!
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  • From caseyjarryn on June 13, 2009
    yay!! they are almost together!! *happy*
    I was going to say this in an earlyier review but I forgot:
    I am guessing that Hermione got an abortion when she realised she was pregnant?
    and lucius didn't know, but he obviously knew she was pregnant, because he sent someone after her asking about the child.
    why would lucius want to know where the child was??
    update soon!!!
    xxx
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  • From emmibubbles07 on June 13, 2009
    love it! amazing chapter!! can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From LittleMissPrincess on June 12, 2009
    I WANT COOKIES

    But also to tell you how much I love it :D
    I really think Hermione ought to tell Draco about "the boy" ;)
    But I suppose that could wait, lols.

    This is coming along very nicely, and even though I'm not normally one to review lots until the story is finished I think you might be getting more love from me later if you keep this updating speed up. :D
    Basically I love the plot line and you're an amazing writer :)

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  • From Robs on June 12, 2009
    Damn Lucius to hell! He is such a bastard. I hope Hermione does get her magic back. Draco really is quite the benevolent soul, ain't he? He appears all rufty tufty, but underneath is vulnerable. That's how I perceive him anyway. I hope Lucius isn't wreaking too much havoc around in the next chapter...I look forward to it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 12, 2009
    You did it to me again. LOL Once again I was wrong with my guessing. I was sure Hermione was back in the past but no, Mulciber was right there in the room with her. Thank goodness Draco clued in that something was wrong and sorted him out. But goodness, all that physical punishment - how does she keep going? I can understand Ginny's reaction at seeing Hermione again too - that must have been such a shock and Ginny grieved for her for so long - all the anger for what she perceived had happened to her. But she will forgive her, I'm sure she will. Going on my guesswork lately I could be wrong. ;)

    Everyone else seemed to take it rather well, except for our fianter, I suppose but jeez, the last person they needed to see was Rita Skeeter. With any luck she'll turn back into a bug and we can squash her. And I can just imagine her reactions to finding out about Draco's parents and aunt, there's so much for her to catch up on. And second of all, I hope she gets her magic back - you know what I want first - more deliciousness with Draco. LOL
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  • From margaritama on June 11, 2009
    Hi - sorry for not reviewing Explanations - I felt it was a transitional chappie and was waiting for the next...not cause I don't love the story still, certainly.

    This one was a plot mover, huh? I don't know if Lucius is Lucius. The fact that he took Narcissa's life force by drinking her blood and then taking Bellatrix as his wife means Voldemort didn't leave, at least to me. But what's up with Hermione's child? And she needs to tell her friends what's going on.
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  • From distinctlyME on June 11, 2009
    This is intense. Its an emotional roller coaster every chapter, one really needs to prepare oneself before delving into this story.

    I like that even in hardest of chapters you always have a moment or two of comic relief. Its refreshing and I find in fanfic, not at all common.
    This plot of the continuing war has been done before, but there's something so unique with your twist to it.
    I'm sincerely enjoying the humor, violence, raw emotions, and budding romance that has been entwined so geniously together.

    Always looking forward to your updates.

    xo
    dM
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  • From caseyjarryn on June 11, 2009
    why wont she tell them about Lucius??
    great chapter, keep it up!!
    xxx
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  • From DragonHeartstring on June 11, 2009
    I like how it is not progressing too fast but in the same thought I hate it. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From dragongirl on June 11, 2009
    This still intriguing.. Hermione not able to use her magic? Wow that is something.. Well as I always say keep them coming and Let's the games begin.
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  • From Robs on June 11, 2009
    Cool, cool. So is Ginny going to start talking to her again then? I hope so, she's going to need a friend. So what is actually happening with the war and stuff? I think what I have gathered is that the war is over, and Voldemort is dead, but there are still loads of death eaters around that want revenge? I really like your Draco. He's caring and nice, without being fluffy and poncy with it. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From kazfeist on June 11, 2009
    So, where did she hide Lucius' son? :D
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  • From DragonHeartstring on June 10, 2009
    I love it so far I cannot wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Robs on June 10, 2009
    Oooh, Ginny is a bit pissed off! So where are they now then? Headquarters? I hope Hermione does tell them what really happened, otherwise she is being a little bit hypocritical. I'm currently deliberating the ways in which this could possibly get more interesting...
    Look forward to the next chapter!
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