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By : RynStar15
  • From dragongirl on June 10, 2009
    OK One question BABY????????????????? The lines in between left us with that idea......... Crazy yeah Intresting Hell Yeah!!!!! A baby brother for Draco Outch!!!!! Or it was Draco who did it? Ah, so many questions.... Hermione cannot perform magic that is the biggest one of all..... Oh well I have to wait until you get us more... Keep them coming.
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  • From Germania on June 10, 2009
    Oh my god! What happens now?
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  • From margaritama on June 10, 2009
    So she had a son? She's protecting a child? Hermione is completely dense and I barely recognize her -- that's a compliment -- when will she find herself? And she continues to hurt all those around her...enough! Find your inner Gryffindor.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2009
    That was just so traumatic and so scarily real (more real than I wanted it to be actually). Poor Hermione - to survive that - well I don't know how she went on from there or what she had to do to get to where she was even if it was just a hollowed out shell of her former self. As for your cliffy, not sure whether something actually happened then or she's gone back into her memories to think about what happened after Lucius left her alone. Hmmmmm.
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  • From dragongirl on June 10, 2009
    Ok I am intrigue and surprise.......... What kid? Abortion? Adoption or ??????????????? This is intresting but do not let the romance die.. He needs to fight for her and she needs to stand up!!!!!!!! The Hermione that we all love is the intelligent, independent and sassy girl. And our Draco is just simply adorable ....
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  • From Robs on June 09, 2009
    That is a cruel, cruel cliffie! I am kinda hanging on the edge of my seat now! At least they have finally admitted they have feelings for each other. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From LittleMissPrincess on June 08, 2009
    Ahh my god I loved it!

    And boy was I excited to see TWO chapters waiting to be read!
    What a treat!

    I can't wait until the next update :D
    It's amazing so far.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 07, 2009
    Another action filled chapter. Now that the 'dark side' knows that Hermione and Draco are together I hate to think what they're going to dish out next. I'm surprised Draco didn't try to take him out or at least confuddle him into thinking he hadn't seen them but of course when you're on the run and protecting someone else you don't necessarily stop to think about such things. Their lovemaking was wild and passionate as sex that begins out of frustration and anger always is. I'm very curious about the state of her innocence that's not necessarily so innocent and as for Lucius - oh that wizard's days are numbered. And I don't think you've made Draco OoC at all. War changes people, I find the way he reacts totally acceptable and well within what I imagine Draco could be. :)
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  • From dragongirl on June 07, 2009
    Please keep them coming but hey I love the little romance there..
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  • From Robs on June 07, 2009
    Wow, brilliant chapter! I didn't think it would be long before someone was following them. But at least Draco has his head screwed on and realised in time to get rid of him! And we reached some smut! I guess Hermione has finally realised that she does trust him a fair bit. Poor Draco! For him to find that out about his father must have been pretty upsetting. I have no doubt that vengeance will come. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2009
    OH Barvo!! The regret, the 'what if's' and 'if onlys', they were perfect for both of them. 'If only' Hermione still had her time turner and they could back and fix everything. Their wishful thinking was so heartfelt I just wanted to cry. I really hate to think what they've been through to get to this state and to be so sick and tired of it all. Having said that, they better realise in a hurry that they've got to start working together to find Harry and not constantly be at each other's throats. A bloody good shag should take care of that. LOL ;) (ok so it could complicate things further but I'm sure they'll get there in the end). Well done!!
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  • From Robs on June 06, 2009
    Another great chapter! Gods, do they argue a lot! Though I reckon Draco seems to have changed his attitude a lot since the beginning. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From margaritama on June 06, 2009
    Well, this was just to show us how broken they both are, huh? And they are - very very broken. My god. I didn't realize the extent of Hermione's shattered psyche. And what is up with those dreams? It looks like they are linked to Lucius. But isn't he dead? And why is she being guarded? Alot of sublte machinations. Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 05, 2009
    Damn girl, you gotta learn to handle your alcohol better. LOL So why was Draco so surprised to learn her parents were dead - he seems to know so much about her, you think he'd know that??? He certainly got aggressive with that jerk over the use of the phone so something's going on there. Not necessarily guilt either. Cracked up laughing when in her drunken state she reverted back to her native British accent. I have a friend like that who speaks with great Aussie slang when sober and speaks with a proper South African accent when sozzled and he's lived here for years. LOL And damn, what a pity they were both too drunk to have any real fun but ah the potential - loved it. :)

    And don't you just hate the morning after - I don't blame him for getting angry when she accused him of taking advantage of her because I really don't think he did. They both got carried away but he doesn't come across as the type to force the issue and he resents her for making it sound like he did. And that John fellow, damn if Draco didn't deck him I would have. Scary how easily someone can take advantage of someone else and it really shows just how far gone Hermione is. The old Hermione would never have got herself into such a situation. I'm even more curious to know what happened to her before Draco found her and of course I want to know how Draco got to be where he is too. Awesome chapters. :)
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  • From wingslikeeagles on June 05, 2009
    I loved your last story, and I am loving this one so far! Can wait to keep reading!
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