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By : RynStar15
  • From Robs on June 04, 2009
    Great chapter! I knew Hermione would try to blame Draco for last night, but he's right. She didn't have to do any of that stuff. I hope they manage to finish their journey without killing each other, LOL. Look forward to more!
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  • From margaritama on June 04, 2009
    I love dark, smexy, slightly-obsessed-with-Hermione Draco. He is RAWR!

    He is just her dark knight in grimy armor isn't he? And she really is DENSE! WOW, open your eyes Hermione. I was actually happy he told her off about taking advantage of her. I thought that speech was wonderful.

    Sigh, I'm really praying for a Draco/Hermione ending to this one and the UST is killing me by the way. It's killing me.

    PS: love the idea of Crooks being an animagus...LOL
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  • From dragongirl on June 04, 2009
    Hey this is getting intresting so keep them coming...
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  • From Robs on June 03, 2009
    Great chapter! I loved their little drunken escapade! LOL at her chucking up though. Does every bar check ID in the states then? It doesn't always get checked in the UK. How awkward will Hermione make things when she wakes up and remembers that? xD Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From dragongirl on June 03, 2009
    This was cool and unexpected... nice move..
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  • From Germania on June 03, 2009
    I like your story, but where is crookshanks now?
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  • From margaritama on June 03, 2009
    That was HOT...phew...*fans self*. I love how unsure Draco is in the Muggle world and yet here is the sweet Hermione unveiling the simple magic of the Muggle way of life and people. Okay, so he doesn't see the magic but that scene in the lift was HILARIOUS. He desperately wants her and I want him to just lose control with her....she needs it.

    I hope she doesn't wake up all harpish! LOL
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  • From kazfeist on May 31, 2009
    Liked the third chapter, too! Trying to figure out what kind of stake bed truck the man was driving...and International, maybe? :D
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  • From HighViscosity on May 30, 2009
    I likes it so far! While I know it just started and all, I hope you give more explanation for why she left the magic world.

    My fave little bit is that Hermione knows stuff about cars too.

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  • From Robs on May 30, 2009
    Great chapter! Draco has more than one agenda with finding her, doesn't he? I just haven't worked out what it is yet...

    Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From caseyjarryn on May 30, 2009
    oooh cant wait for more!
    update soon!
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  • From margaritama on May 30, 2009
    Draco likes Hermione...Draco likes Hermione...na na na na na!

    LOL - love the MI-6 feel of this fic. Love Draco's loner attitude as well and how it contrasts with Hermione's ever present energy and smarts.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2009
    "Don't touch a woman's stereo"! LMAO Ain't that the truth? Great to see Hermione still has her backbone and won't take any notice of Draco's tendecies to still belittle her. I bet it's driving him crazy to discover he's finding her more and more attractive too. Laughed at her thoughts of thinking he was good looking when he wasn't talking too. I'm really intrigued to discover exactly what Draco's been up to all this time and what his plan is for rescuing Harry. I want more (NOW) just so you know. LMAO Another awesome chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2009
    It's all so intriguing. Who's carrying on with the battle? Who helped the death eaters escape and who really has Harry captive? I have so many questions. I love it. Bring on the next piece of the puzzle please. :)
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  • From DragonHeartstring on May 28, 2009
    I love the twist of this story. I can't wait to see what happens next! I am totally hooked.

    P.S. Are you going to finish Breaking the Chain and when?
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