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Reviews for Deliver us to evil, for ours is the kingdom

By : MelodyofChaos
  • From ANON - BVB on July 21, 2015
    Good so far, but you may want to avoid swearing, it is a Harry Potter fic after all.
    Hogwarts probably doesn't have a drive, and Snape probably wouldn't call muggles mudbloods, if only because they wouldn't understand it.
    Apart from a couple of tiny issues, it's a good start.
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  • From ANON - bundysarah on July 29, 2014
    Love it! Update soon!

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  • From ANON - Diana on May 03, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From jujukitty on January 29, 2011
    okay, this has really grabbed my interest! i hope you get the motivation to work on this some more, it sounds like it could get really twisty and stuff lol. keep up the good work :)
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  • From angelicangel on November 04, 2010
    more please!!!
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  • From anniea on March 07, 2010
    Wow i didn't realize exactly how anal retentive my review sounded! i honestly cannot wait to read more of this story. so here's me apologizing for pretending to be Simon Cowell! update soon *kisses*
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  • From anniea on March 07, 2010

    i really like this story, however i do have to say this......find a better way to switch to the other characters, even if you have to put a line through the page and label it Harry POV! in the first chapter you went from the first paragraph-Harry, second-Harry, third-Severus, eight-poppy........you get the idea! but the way you jump from paragraph makes me think that I'm still reading a harry paragraph but I'm actually reading a draco paragraph! now keep in mind I LIKE THIS STORY, it's interesting and i'd like to see more of it. BTW who is Severus' lover? update soon *kisses*
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  • From mrequecky on March 04, 2010
    Enjoyed :D
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  • From ANON - LoveLee on March 03, 2010
    I love this story. The plot is really well written and enjoyable. Please update soon :)
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  • From ANON - darkwind3 on December 09, 2009
    This story is one of my favorites! I'm going into withdraw!! LOL I check for updates everyday :) Thank you for writing it.
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  • From angelwarrior1 on September 29, 2009
    Very interesting so far. I can't wait until Tom and Harry meet.


    Angelwarrior1
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  • From NoodleZombie on September 23, 2009
    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWESOME! Can't wait for your next update!
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on August 11, 2009
    i like it i hope you finish it
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  • From mrequecky on May 29, 2009
    Loved :D
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 29, 2009
    Very nice Harry already has a certain attraction to the Dark Lord and I didnt expect Draco to act like that, its more childlike than expected but its nice
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