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Reviews for Crap! #2

By : blastendedskrewt

From KJmom827 on October 27, 2011
Ok, I'm only a few chapters in, but WOW! I am not easily squicked (in fact the only thing I've ever read that bothered me was a graphic fic involving Hagrid *shudders* but I've read more Hagrid since that hasn't bothered me). I've never found scat squicky, but I've never found it erotic either - until now. I'm going to finish this, I swear, but I wanted to leave you a little (or large) hug for being brave enough, and talented it enough to put this out there, and do it so WELL!

I usually require a little emotion with kinks (especially out of the box ones) and this story has that in spades. Huge kudos to you! I want to keep on gushing (pun intended), but I need to go read some more.

Thanks for sharing!
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From vampirekisses on July 28, 2011
Oh, this was brilliant and a roller coaster of emotions. I loved everything about it. Especially your description of the triplets and their differences. (Triplets! Wow.) I especially like how you tied everything up together in a neat little package. I hope you write more stories, because this one was fascinating to experience. I know I shall be revisiting this again in the future. Your description of the boys showing off their number 2s to one another reminded me of my young nephews. That definitely sounds like something they would do. I know that was probably more than you needed to know, but I said it to illustrate just how real this story felt, even with magic involved. You blend elements of realism into the magical world very well. I am really sad to know this is the last installment, but it was very beautifully done. Thank you again for your kind dedication, and for writing so well that it makes me forget reality for the space of a chapter. Bless you for that. I wish there was some way I could repay that gift. I sincerely hope that you continue writing. You have a prodigious talent.
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From vampirekisses on July 28, 2011
I'm reviewing the chapter "Unexpected" here. Thank you so much for dedicating it partially to me. I'm sorry I didn't get to read this sooner, but my father recently passed away after a battle with cancer, so fandom-related pursuits have taken a backseat for awhile. I love your attention to details here, with the description of the bonding and their activities following. I may never be able to look at mashed potatoes or ice cream the same way again, but this was well worth it. I just love how obviously connected and in tune Harry and Draco are with one another's needs and desires. I simply adored Luna, as always in this. Thank you for giving me something so brilliantly written to take me away from my painful reality for a few minutes. I really liked reading this chapter very much, and I apologize again for not being able to review sooner. I'm off to read the next(and last!) part now. I'm sure it will be as fantastic as the rest of this has been.
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From redeyedemon on June 06, 2011
So, I can't find it in myself to regret that his chapter took on a mind of its own, and became a proper chapter. I love it, and seein the boys lose control wiith each other is always a pleasure. I love this parin in general, but this story really brins out hte best in both of them, and they're so happy together. I adore it. I would love to someday find someone else who can write this kink so well, without it being impossibly disturbing. They cared about each other, and everyone enjoyed their play, and that's what it made it such a wonderful series to read. I'm allways so happy to see more, even though I know it's coming to a close.

Until Next time!
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From vampirekisses on June 04, 2011
Yet another lovely chapter. I loved all the interactions here. Harry's bonding gift for Draco was very inventive and interesting to read about. I liked the fact that you mention the table is an eyesore before going on to describe their play. It just illustrated how well Harry knows Draco. I'm guessing that was an intentional decision on Harry's part to make sure that neither of them would object to defecating on it. I also loved the whole debate between Hermione and Draco. It showed that some aspects don't necessarily change completely, even when they've evolved. This whole chapter demonstrates that concept so well. Harry and Draco seem to perfectly balance each other out. Even when they do tease and bicker, there's an undercurrent of need for one another in it. I sense that Harry was perhaps feeling a bit insecure/worried after Draco's comments about life's worth in correlation to excitement. I hope he doesn't get too scared and end up misconstruing something. Then again, I could be over-reading things, as usual. Thank you for this chapter. I really enjoyed reading it.
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From redeyedemon on May 16, 2011
Those boys are just so damn sweet... I really do love this series. It is by far one of the most creative I've ever read. No doubt it's a very unusual kink. When I first started reading, I didn't know if I would keep coming back, but I just can't resist. Serious respect, because while I can read, and continue to be entertained by this kink, I really don't think I could ever actually write it on my own. Thank you, so much, for gifting the fanfiction community with this series.

Always,
Alena
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From heartshappedsunglasses on May 15, 2011
i do love this story so. In the beginning you mentioned that you have other stories under a different name, can I know what name you use because I would love to read your other stories ^_^
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From vampirekisses on April 27, 2011
Yay! New chapter. I was obscenely excited when I saw that you'd posted again. I'm sorry you've been having rough patches in RL, but I'm glad if my reviews helped you to feel a bit better. My own RL has been less-than-ideal lately, and this story helps to take me out of that for a little while. Thank you for that. There was so much to love in this chapter, starting with Luna. She is one of my favorite characters ever, in canon or in fiction. She's quirky, but smart. I love her intuition about Harry, even when he's disguised. Every time Harry mentioned the words "crap" or "shit" when he was talking to Luna, I couldn't help giggling just thinking about the scat aspects of this fic. I love how comfortable the two of them are with one another now. It really shows their progression as a couple. I really like that they can be comfortable enough with one another to know what each other need, and to give it without fear. That's really sweet. I always thought I'd wind up disgusted by scat-play. I have to confess, I've never read much of it till I ran across the first "Crap" story, which I found interesting. This is even more so. I can't seem to help falling into your characters' heads when I'm reading this one. Sometimes it's like being pulled into their thoughts. It makes a nice change from the mundane. I will be sad to see this draw to a close, but I do hope you continue with your writing. You have a talent for it.
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From redeyedemon on March 29, 2011
I love this story. I pains me to hear that it's ending. Like, really depresses me. I'm so hooked on this story. Harry and Draco just make me so happy, and for some reason this kink... I still don't know what to make of it. I can't wait for more.
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From ANON - Balingo on February 27, 2011
I really enjoy reading this shit! ;)
Well anyway, have you ever heard of air enemas?
If not, it's basically just filling your guts with air using some kind of pump.
I thought Harry might really enjoy this as you can let out some quite phenomenal farts.
Believe it or not, the first time I stumbled upon this fetish was on youtube.... *snort*

Keep up the good work! *salut*

Balingo
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From redeyedemon on February 21, 2011
I'm so glad you get my reviews. I know personally I'm horrible about acknowledging when someone reviews consistantly.

I do love this story. I feel a really undignified amount of glee when I see an update. I really do. I get a little giddy...

So! I can't wait until I see more! I'm beyond excited just waiting for it.

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From vampirekisses on February 20, 2011
Oh, wow. This was a very nice chapter. I loved the bit with Harry using Draco's lotion in his play, and Draco watching without Harry realizing it. That was such a purely Slytherin move on Draco's part. And Harry calling out Draco's name during orgasm made it that much more brilliant. And that whole scene in Draco's office was very well done. I can't even imagine what Dean would say to the two of them as a couple. As usual, I laughed in some places here, cringed a little at others, and found it all completely fascinating. Your characters are just so real that it's hard not to get swept into their mindsets, including the little quirks and kinks they each have. I love your alliterations in this one, as well. Your writing is very engaging. Needless to say, I am looking forward to continued installments. Thank you so much for your kind words, and for writing a story that makes me want to leave in-depth reviews. For some reason, I believe reading about scat forces me to think in a way that other kinks don't. Maybe because most people would likely find it repugnant on the surface, but your story goes deeper than just displaying the kink. You go into the whys and hows of the situation, and I really like that. I'll stop fangirling over this now, before I end up writing you a novel, but you handle this kink really well. I generally avoid scat fics, but I'm drawn in by this one to the point that I can begin to understand why some people would have this particular kink. And I'm fairly certain I will end up reading this story multiple times. Great addition to a great story.
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From ANON - seraphiccandy on January 28, 2011
I've been reading this story over teh last few days as I read the original "crap" some time ago and was interested in how it would continue. Although this particular fetish is not really my cup of tea I remain true to the old adage of " try anything once" . I find your writing style excellent and particularly enjoy the fact that you have somehow managed to construct an actual story around the idea of " sex with poop". As a psychology major I particularly enjoy the mental processes that each character goes through to get to a certain frame of mind. The only thing I have to point out is that when you wrote the chapter with the champagne you used Fahrenheit body temperature( 98.6) instead of Celsius (37) which they would use in England. This did annoy me a bit because I am not American and one of my pet peeves is authors who use American measurements such as feet, pounds and Fahrenheit. I know it is easiest to think in the measurement that you are used to but plz remember that our boys are English!
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From vampirekisses on January 27, 2011
This was perfect! I loved it from beginning to end. I felt so bad for Harry though, what with his accident and them not letting Draco in his room. That would be really humiliating, especially for Harry. Poor man. Boo on those stupid rules. You made me laugh out loud in places with this one, as well as nearly cry. I was so worried for Harry when he was hurt, but I couldn't help but laugh at Draco polyjuicing into Hermione. So sweet, especially considering how vain Draco can be. I enjoyed getting the unguarded look at what Draco does when he's on his own, almost as much as Harry did. I laugh-grimaced at the image of him using a banana as a dildo. That would take a lot of stretching. I love the inventiveness of that, though. Yet another chapter that made me feel a mix of emotions. Great work!
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