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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Robs on June 19, 2009
    Draco and Elias make an amazing pair! So are they all moving to the manor now then? I can't wait to see what pranks Draco and Elias are going to pull on everyone. You can have so much fun writing those two! I look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From margaritama on June 19, 2009
    "In the first half hour he called me a dildo, outed you and dad, said he wanted to eat a whore and asked a house elf to play trains. The kid is a riot!" Dear goodness, I nearly peed myself in reading this chapter...the whole penis thing is so true. I say that to my 4-yr old ALL THE TIME! I'm in love with Draco and Elias - so perfect....and yes, Elias will be in Slytherin.

    Jessa is a little witch...and I want to know more. I really think she and Draco would make a great couple. I can't wait for more.

    OOOOOHHHH - smut...yummy. :-)

    Thank you for the new chapter...nicely done!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 18, 2009
    I am officially really, really sad that you aren't independently wealthy. It's for completely selfish reasons, though, unfortunately. lol If you were, you could write for me all day. :-) I actually just laughed so loud that I scared both of my dogs. LMAO Draco and Elias together = smashing, hysterical success! I look forward to seeing them together more. Plus, add in Ron, Harry and George and Hermione is going to be fully gray before her time. ha ha ha I loved Lucius' nervousness, wonder, and love for his whole family. Just lovely. And, now, I'm ready. I've got the cheese and wine and all I need is you and the next update. Wonderful, as always. Thank you.

    Your fan,
    HG4eva
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  • From ANON - nightqueen on June 18, 2009
    Best chapter ever! I mean I laughed from the minute Elias Called Draco dildo Malfoy to the naughty limerick for peeing! You are a master at work each story is a true treasure to unwrap and enjoy. Thank you for the gift of your storytelling!
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  • From mageemi on June 18, 2009
    OMG! This chapter is gold! I loved the interaction between Elias and Draco. That kid is a hoot, 'Dildo Malfoy' *snerk* and 'you should keep your penis to yourself' LMAO. I can't wait for the next chappie, lemons are good!!!
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  • From liagiba84 on June 18, 2009
    Oh, my gosh! Elias has completely stolen my heart. The way he missays stuff is just so cute. And yay for smut coming soon!
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  • From trixiedust on June 18, 2009
    Ah, so her work mate is magical too!

    Beauxbatons?
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  • From lilashannah on June 18, 2009
    Oh no you didn't,Yes you did..A cliffy?Your evil! Elias and Draco together at last.I love Draco's reaction to him.The kid is loveable I wonder if Hermione would want to trade..you see I have a 14 year old son going on 50...
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  • From ANON - annmarie on June 18, 2009
    best chapter yet i laughed so hard i cried
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  • From alecto on June 18, 2009
    ARGH!

    i'm so torn - i laughed my PANTS off during this chapter. your best chapter for dialogue and banter so far, bar none. dildo malfoy was probably my favourite, but the bit about the penis was a close second

    but i am DYING for a good sex scene here. i know it's just around the bend, i can smell the lemon rind from here!
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  • From ANON - daisychain on June 18, 2009
    I am absolutely loving this fic! You have managed to paint a rather sweet little family, giving lucius a chance at redemption and hermione another chance at a romance! I will be so sad to part with these characters! Oh and loving the jessa mystery! Keep up the great work! You are amazing!
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  • From bournespeed on June 18, 2009
    Brilliant, loving the interaction between Draco and Elias, they're hilarious. More soon please.
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  • From LadyofClunn on June 18, 2009
    I love Draco. Lucky the witch able to hold his attention. Why do I get a feeling that Jessa might be that witch? Elias is as adorable as ever and I'm glad Hermione and Lucius seem to get some alone time in the very near future. Don't I know that little ones have a sense of timing that never fails...
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  • From Laurakkc on June 18, 2009
    What fun! I'm glad Draco is so taken with Elias. Lucius was pleased with their interaction--although I'm sure the watering of the bushes horrified him! lol

    This is a sort of honeymoon period with Elias, I wonder how Hermione is going to react the first time Lucius has to correct his behavior for something? Obviously the house is not childproofed. I'm sure Draco would not have even thought to touch anything, but Elias is far more adventurous. Actually, coming to the dining room table barefooted wasn't acceptable in our/my house--and we're certainly not blue-bloods. I'm surprised Lucius didn't say anything about that.

    I love your note at the end--I can't wait for Lucius and Hermione to finally get together. "Knock and get permission before you enter"! lol This is such a fun story. I like the kinder/gentler Malfoys. Hurry back, please.

    --laura

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  • From smmz79 on June 18, 2009
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! ok so first jessa totally almost slipped and saisd that her father was a pureblood... i think that jessa knows hermione is a witch but does not want to mention it or maybe she is trying to not be a part of that world??? who is her father i am thinking it could be lucius because of some of the things that hermione said when she was thinking about jessa like she never asks questions about lucius well that could be bc she knows him??? i am not sure but i am really interested now... ok so i love love love draco as a big brother i knew this part was going to be good when elias and draco met they were so funny together and i love that they bonded i laughed so hard at some of their antics... ok so we are getting to the good stuff... woo hooo... i can not wait my jose and salt is waiting... great job as always i just love your stories
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