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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - ZukoRocks30 on June 18, 2009
    Oh, man! This chapter was so hilarious, I kept cracking up! LOL x many! Dildo Malfoy, indeed! :-> Where do you come up with this stuff? :-)

    Really looking forward to the next chapter, though. About time they got it on... ;-)
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  • From ANON - Sygnus on June 18, 2009
    Oh you had tears welling in my eyes.. The boys bonding was so touching and funny!
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  • From ANON - shechosedown on June 18, 2009
    I am enjoying this fic oh-so-much but I gotta say that this is my favourite chapter. I love the the "brother-bonding". And, as always, I am a complete sucker for the way you write Draco.

    (I know it's not appropriate, and maybe even bad form, to beg you to write another Draco fic while you are in the midst of this Lucious Lucius tale, but keep it in mind. Please? I'm willing to bribe...)
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  • From KellyJCR on June 18, 2009
    So Jessa is a halfblood. Is she related to Lucius maybe a halfsister or a distant relative. Interesting how your mind works I obviously didn't go down that road. I love the relationship Draco and Elias have in such a short time. Draco is reliving the childhood he should have had and Elias is unknowingly along for the ride. The whore comment had me in hysterics! My oldest is now 7 but couldn't pronounce her "s" until she was 5 we had quite a few shore conversations as they are her favorite animals. Can't wait to see where that takes them. Well done!!!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 18, 2009
    Nice one. You had me laughing and crying at the same time.
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  • From dragonsfae on June 18, 2009
    that was adorable! and jessas a pureblood huh? no wonder she didnt ask too many questions... but elias and draco were sooo cute!
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  • From jessirose85 on June 18, 2009
    Great chapter...oh please add a couple more I can not possibly wait another week before another chapter..please add more...please

    *begs* *gets down on knees*
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  • From smmz79 on June 17, 2009
    ok so i got back early and this is the first thing i checked for!!!!!!!!!!!! woo hoo... loved loved loved this chap... and come on it could not be perfect there is a young child in the house they always seem to have great timing... :-) ok so he didn't necessarily walk in on them but that was sooo funny i loved lucius reaction and when they told him and he said hermione was going to miss her parade.... ha ha ha that was great ok so i would have loved to be present when jessa was educating hermione on a blowjob that had to be funny... and i can not wait to see draco meet elias... and i really am looking forward to jessas role and finding out what the big climax is... i have a guess is jessa lucius' daughter????? i do not know but it is an idea maybe neither one knows???
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  • From alecto on June 17, 2009
    FREAKING YUM!
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on June 17, 2009
    ROFL @ coitus interruptus! I know just how Lucius feels... mid stride halt and about face! ROFL! Loving the story!
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  • From margaritama on June 16, 2009
    Draco and Elias....HOW FUN!!!!! And I'm hoping Jessa meets Draco....LOL, I think she take him to task! :-)
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  • From ANON - dbc132 on June 16, 2009
    I must say, I'm not a huge Het fanfiction reader, but I'm completely in love with this story!!! I LOVE Elias! One minute I'm laughing at his antics and the next I'm practically in tears because he's just so sweet (and no it's not near my "parade" lol). Lucius... well I mean do I have to say more? And I like your characterization of Hermione a lot. I'm not a huge fan of her character in the actual series, but I'm fond of her in this story; probably because she sorta resembles me (minus a child). Wow, I've never written so much for a review! Overall, LOVE it, and please, please update (preferably an update with sex ;P)! =)
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  • From BillsBedroom on June 16, 2009
    So after jumping my husband after this chapter (someone had to get some! =) I am back to review. I love that Lucius was a little nervous and not the Casanova he usually is, not to say that a smooth and slick Lucius isn't just as yummy!! But I think this is new territory for him, caring more about Hermione and Elias than himself, and is not quite sure what to do about it. Lovely story so far, and I can't wait for more!!
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  • From lilashannah on June 16, 2009
    I have no idea how to tell you how much I am loving this story.Can't wait for more.
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  • From KellyJCR on June 16, 2009
    Thank you, finally some action in the bedroom. Although I'm sure the real thing is around the corner and it will be grand as always. I am absolutely at a loss you mentioned that Elias finding out was a small climax in the story what could the rest be. I feel that Elias as incredible a child he is took the news way to well. I don't doubt that he half figured it out on his own but still there must be some repercussions coming. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
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