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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Robs on June 16, 2009
    Brilliant chapter! So they finally got down and dirty, to be interrupted by Elias. LOL. That kid knows way too much about life already. Look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 16, 2009
    Hell, yes, give him a parade! Just have the USC 'Trojan' marching band lead the way! Ok, I'm sick, I know it. Wonderful lemons, even if they weren't ripe.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on June 16, 2009
    I'm loving your story! I can't wait to read more. Why can't you just send me the rest? LOL!
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  • From ANON - Misery on June 16, 2009
    "Tears are words the heart can't express
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  • From alecto on June 15, 2009
    yum yum.

    i just wanted to let you know - your stories brighten my days. i am currently in the process of apartment hunting by myself for the first time in a brand new town halfway across the country... and coming back to the hotel room after a stressful day and reading a new chapter makes me smile. it's so scary to think of moving out to a new place on one's own for the first time ever - so alienated and so new and so independent - but when i think of the fact that lucius and hermione will be waiting, smiling for me at the end of any lonely days, it makes me feel stronger and braver about what i am about to do.

    so thank you, my dear. for giving me a little strength in trying times.
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  • From ANON - Linda on June 15, 2009
    I knew Elias wanted a daddy! I remember my daughter asking me to go to the store and buy her a daddy, before she figured out where daddies came from. Lucius is so sexy it hurts! I love the way you write, so I am going to have to see if I can find some more stuff you wrote!
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  • From ANON - Linda on June 14, 2009
    I love the way your characters are so life-like! And, thus, it follows, that the way they converse is very real,too. I love Elias--he is so much like my daughters and nieces and nephews when they were little! And Lucius is so sexy!
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  • From margaritama on June 14, 2009
    Cuervo??? Damn on the best for these two...where's my Silver Don Julio....neat please...

    Great chapter, very sweet, very touching and I'm glad Hermione gave those idiots the what for...really.

    Climax of the story? Hmmm, I think Hermione wants her own climax. LOL
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  • From ANON - Christine on June 14, 2009
    I cried. That doesn't happen to me often. I have read more fanfiction then is probably healthy and you are one of a very few who can be counted on to always write quality material that isn't so overdone in the fandom that it becomes pointless. That said, to date, you are the only one to EVER bring me to tears. It was wonderful. I could feel Lucius' anxiety and my chest tightened right along with Hermione's. I was right there with Lucius when he stood watching his little boy sleep after being called Daddy and I thank you for that wonderful chapter. I know you so I know there is more to come, and I can't wait.
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  • From jessirose85 on June 14, 2009
    I think you made Elias accept the news brillantly xxx

    He asked all the right questions...but you have to wonder how he knew all this information xx

    So this isn't the climax?? There's something bigger??

    Fantastic chapter and looking forward to the next one xx
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  • From BillsBedroom on June 14, 2009
    Knowing that you like to throw a couple of different surprises in your stories, I am of the same mind set as you. Elias finding out about Lucius somehow is NOT going to be the shock of this story. You have something up your sleeve and of course we are eagerly waiting to find them out!
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  • From ANON - Lana on June 14, 2009
    Another splendid chapter!! I loved what Hermione did to Ron and George, it had me rooting for her. And the part where Elias unbuttoned Lucius' sleeve and looked at the dark mark brought tears to me eyes. I hope to see more soon!!!
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  • From lilashannah on June 14, 2009
    Another wonderful chappy.I am so glad that Elias took the news so well.So, you finally got them in bed together again.You know she could have hurt Ron just a lil more.I Can't wait for the next chappy.Rated 10 out of 10.
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  • From chickaboo on June 14, 2009
    So so so so so good! That was perfectly written in my humble opinion. lol I can't wait for more!
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  • From Robs on June 14, 2009
    Lol, Ron and George are a bit tactless, bless them. I thought Elias would take it well. You wrote that scene beautifully. Plus the bonus that Lucius is staying. Even if there's still no smuttiness between them, it's a step in the right direction. So will Elias meet Draco now too? Look forward to the next chapter!
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