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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Robs on June 11, 2009
    Ok, so I had to go back and read chapter 13, but it was still brilliant! Going with chapter 13 first...Lucius has always struck me as someone who keeps his cards close to his chest, so it was great to have him opening up to Harry. I guess he and Harry are going to have to learn to get on....

    Chapter 15 (I'm pretty sure I already reviewed chapter 14) was also brilliant. It's so humanizing to have Lucius getting so involved in their little family. I love the way Hermione is around him too. It's kinda endearing. I wish he would hurry up and deal with his attraction already! xD Getting a little frustrated here, just like Hermione is!!! Dinner with the Weasley's next then? I can't wait to see how that goes! Look forward to the next chapter!

    On a little side note, vodka ALWAYS solves all of lifes problems xD Such a shame the feeling doesn't last longer!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 11, 2009
    Merlin, I simply love this story. Chapter 13 was great, but I honestly didn't feel the story was lacking, so no worries there. I like that Harry is protective, but supportive and open. Thanks for that. Chapter 15 was...ooh the wait is killing me, as much as the two of them. Man, I hope Hermione takes Jessa's advice. Lucius won't know what hit him. LMAO Lookging forward to more soon. Thanks again! HG4eva
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  • From liagiba84 on June 10, 2009
    I have to say that Jessa is really growing on me. I think she would be a good match with Draco, they both seem completely incorrigible. And when I saw your note I went back to ch.13 and Lucius is SO adorable with Elias!
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  • From alecto on June 10, 2009
    YUM. two extra chapters (albeit out of order... who cares!) after a very long long headachy day at work. bloody fantastic.
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  • From on June 10, 2009
    *snickers* Never underestimate a horny female... too damn funny, and true. We're all dying to get to the main attraction, but the tension is too yummy to pass up!

    Strawberry Vodka Punch - do you have a recipe? Sounds like the answer to my "the kids aren't in school blues" :)
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on June 10, 2009
    Lucius is going to get into another fight with Arthur, I think. Probably because when Hermione tells him how he makes her feel, they will get caught in Arthur's shed! LOL. Lovely chapter, as always.
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  • From margaritama on June 10, 2009
    yummy to the strawberry vodka punch....try writing drunk! LOL

    um, go Hermione....okay is it bad that I'd like to see what Jessa would do with Draco?


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  • From LadyofClunn on June 10, 2009
    It always makes my day when I come home from work an find that you have updated :)

    I can certainly see why Hermione is frustrated. There is such a thing as being too noble, Lucius!

    Great chapter!
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  • From KellyJCR on June 10, 2009
    Hot!Hot! Hot!!! You are killing me with all the waiting. Jessa has got to be a phone sex operator, sex therapist or a post op transvestite. I don't know why or how she knows so much about men but she is hysterical. You have me totally perplexed by her situation and I am searching my brain to make sense of her. Maybbe shes a witch on the lamb from the law like a hooker gone awry. (Its offical I have lost my mind.) Give a girl a break and let us in on Jessas story. You have a knack for making Lucius seem so real (stains on clothes popcorn in hair) its refreshing. Although regal and poper Lucius is fun and sexy a "real" Lucius is just plain delicious. I am waiting patiently for Hermione to break the news to Elias. I have a feeling he already knows and will shock us all with his response. I can't wait for the fallout at the Weasley house, I am a sucker for angst and drama. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!
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  • From smmz79 on June 10, 2009
    ok now that was a great chap... i love how human you make lucius in this.... also how sweet he sounds with elias... so we got some hot kissing and some petting nice we are getting there poor lucius and his blue balls.... you know the way that jessa and draco are both working on hermione and lucius seperately i can imagine them as a team deciding what they are going to say and do to help these to along.... jessa in her naughty way and draco in his sarcastic way.... i would not be surprised if we find out that they are secretly plotting together.... ok so hermione is going to be a little more forward you go girl.... and lucius is going with her to the weasleys wow this should be interesting do they know about her intimate relationship with lucius or is harry still the only one who knows... i am sure some choice words are going to be said by molly and if anyone upsets hermione or elias i would hate to see what lucius does... actually no i would not hate that i would love for him to stick up for her but i would hate to be the one he was telling off.... ok great job SG oh and that vodka drink sounds yummmm but i can not do vodka it f's me up QUICK!!!!
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  • From BillsBedroom on June 10, 2009
    All I can say is GO GET HIM, MIONE!!!!! We women are vicious when we are denied what we want!!!
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  • From jorms1978 on June 10, 2009
    I absolutely love all your stories. This one is rapidly becoming a favorite! Can't wait for your updates! I look forward to the progression of Lucius and Hermione's relationship. And I love the way you write Elias!
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  • From sophiebelle on June 10, 2009
    Oh come on. You're killing me here.
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  • From ANON - Sygnus on June 10, 2009
    Personally I love Jessa! Mhhh reminds me of a good friend I have.. that helped me find my own personal sex kitten! Loved chapter 13.. By the end of it.. you had me remembering that silly smile from the past... Talent! You got it.. All well here.. busy as all get out.. fixing to send off the younger three and get a girl in return.. There is nothing to do in this town...

    How you? Kids? and the rest? LOL Miss you tons as always!
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  • From ANON - Star on June 09, 2009
    Thank you for another chapter. I love the way you are progressing the story line, and I can't wait to see where Jessa goes. I know she's a witch, but I can see her hooking up with Draco at a later time.
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