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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From wendymalfoy on June 04, 2009
    I absolutely love this story!! I look forward to what's to come. Elias is the cutest thing ever & Lucius' newfound role as his father is adorable. Keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - sheedy on June 03, 2009
    Hmmm no update today... must have been a busy day. Looking forward to your next update (need my fix)
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  • From Madietta on June 03, 2009
    First and foremost, I love reading your stories. I can honestly say that there hasn't been one that I haven't liked. And I like this one a lot. So with that said, I hope you will not take this review as anything else than very friendly, hopefully constructive criticism. I have no problem with the fact that you take the canon as a loose framework to build upon and that your stories are very "real-life" and have little to do with Rowling's world of magic and its tribulations. However, even then I think it would be good to keep the protagonists somewhat in character, i.e. keep in mind that they are actually magical people. So I am convinced there is no way, for example, that we would see an accomplished witch like Hermione Granger constantly doing her laundry and other chores manually. I am sure she would have some nifty little charm that would do the work for her. After all, even the Weasleys, who are piss-poor, have the household chores done by magic - the dishes wash themselves, the food prepares itself, etc. I know what you've been trying to show with Hermione doing all these things for her son, without ever complaining, because that's what we mothers do, but I'm sure you would be ingenious enough to find another way of showing it, keeping Hermione a little bit more in character.

    Again, I love the story as such. The way you describe the relationship developing between Lucius and Hermione is utterly compelling. I will always look forward to more and sincerely hope you won't get offended by my little bit of nitpicking.

    Cheers, Madietta
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  • From lilashannah on June 03, 2009
    I read this story yesterday and didn't have time to review.So,first thing this morning I loaded it back it up,Just so I could.I love it.You just bring everybody to life.Please hurry with the next chappy.
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  • From smmz79 on June 03, 2009
    yeahhhhh i loved it and oohhh yeah hermione you definetely 'started' something with lucius... i love that he tried to explain his life being like the candyland game.... that was pretty interesting and i feel so bad for hermione with everything that her friends are doing and how they are making her feel i have a funny feeling that some interesting fireworks will go off when they find out about hermione and lucius' relationship.... ok so i can not wait to read more on elias he is sooo adorable and i can just imagine draco with his little brother that should definitely be cute.... just that little intimate moment with lucius and hermione was hot not because of all the content bc it is not like they were ripping each others clothes off but just the way he was kissing her hand and wrist etc that was very hot and very promising great job as always!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - nightqueen on June 02, 2009
    Absolutely loving this story! I stand by my comment on Elias being the funniest child ever! You have a clever way with words and I adore them when they come out of his mouth!! This chapter looks like it could be the start of something beautiful. I can't wait to watch their relationship unfold!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 02, 2009
    On this site there are a lot of very good, well-written, steamy stories with quite delicious bits of pure pleasure thrown in for good measure. But, I don't remember the last time I read "moment" as sweet, honest, and romantic as the end of that chapter. That was triple sigh worthy. Thank you. HG4eva
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on June 02, 2009
    Wonderful as always
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  • From jessirose85 on June 02, 2009
    Fantastic chapter xxx
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  • From TinaMaria12084 on June 02, 2009
    I love this story! I have not laughed so hard in a long time, you've really created an exciting situation for the characters. Please keep it up.

    Tina
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on June 02, 2009
    Oooh, I did enjoy it. I did.*hands over cookies* Now I can't wait for the next instalment!

    I have a sense that Lucius is a little different in this story than he is in some of your other Lumiones. (It's not a bad thing, just an interesting observation...) However, the main thing is I like the story and I can't wait for Elias to get more inquisitive. Will Draco make more of an appearance too, please?


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  • From gtbioteach on June 02, 2009
    That was a great chappie!! The thought of Lucius playing Candyland had me laughing.
    Oooooh - can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From KellyJCR on June 02, 2009
    Wow I have come back to two great chapters! Let me start by saying that Dracos acceptance of his fathers behavior was unexpected and I love that it worked out as it did. I dare say that Jessa and Draco might have a future together at least thats the impression I got from that bit of conversation. the way you got Lucisus and Hermione together was masterful. Sometimes there is nothing sexier than a fired-up woman, or so I am told. He seems the type to go for that sort of sassy woman. I can not stress enough the fact that I HATE Molly Weasly. As a matter of fact I am actually pissed off at the situation at hand when it comes to the entire Weasly acceptance where Lucius is concerned. It really is none of there buisiness and, who the hell are they to lay blame soley on Hermione. Okay I'm off my soapbox now. Can't wait for more I feel the heat of the pair starting already. Well done!!!
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  • From LadyofClunn on June 02, 2009
    Candyland. Is. Evil.

    And they love it so much they can play it 23 times in a row and still want more. *runs away*

    This is a beautiful beginning of their relationship. Very tentative and careful. Good forr them to take it slow and see where it ges. I think Hermione's friends will be very hard on her for this and this might also strain their relationship - or bing them even closer together.

    I admire you. I am currently alone in a foreign country working full time with one kid. Three would probably kill me. It is amazing that you find the energy to write and it makes you sharing your stories even more special for me. (I know I sometimes fall asleep on/near the laptop trying to write.)

    Thank you for this beautiful tale :)
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  • From Robs on June 02, 2009
    Great chapter! So they have confessed to each other then eh? I was wondering how long it would take for that to happen. Elias seems intelligent enough to be able to work things out on his own. I wonder if he will be able to do it before he gets told? I hope he's not going to have an adverse reaction to all the changes going on in his life....I'm guessing his fondness of Lucius will help. Look forward to the next chapter!
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