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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From diamondhelen on May 31, 2009
    I'm enjoying this so much, Elias is adorable, i used to look after a little girl who would make the most inappropriate comments very loudly at the most embarassing moments. gotta love kids.
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  • From LadyofClunn on May 31, 2009
    I've been racking by brain about what Elias could mean by 'lobsters', but am drawing a blank. But then, not a native speaker here...
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  • From LadyofClunn on May 31, 2009
    Wonderful new story!

    Elias is a delightful child (my daughter has a way of asking questions about things like six and parades in crowded public places. Like the tube *blushes*) It is nice to see how Lucius wants to be a pat of his life and makes a genuine effort.

    And the sparks start flying! Great job, as always!
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  • From SeraphimeRising on May 31, 2009
    Great chapter. I can't wait for all the fun drama mixed with Elias' curiosity.
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  • From Citten on May 31, 2009
    okay i love that you have made the story based on so sort of readity it makes it fun and different and totally unique--which means i love it!!! :) i love that he had a Gerogei Armionie (sorry dont know how to spell his name) though totally not unecpected. ;) it is lucius after all! :) i love that you had lucius see how much hermione deals with, with that sweet little boy and i also love that he enjoyed it too! totally loved that they both agreed that elise should not have the wine, totally funny their reaction! i love that he was struck speachless when he saw her and that he had pick up her panties and could see her in them and only them. ;) that sly devil :) okay i am dying for more so dont be too long in updating! :)
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  • From ANON - ZukoRocks30 on May 30, 2009
    The tingling feelings that Hermione and Lucius keep feeling whenever they touch--is it their magic acting favorably to them becoming a couple? I'm curious if you will eventually explain this in the story...
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  • From ANON - Sygnus on May 30, 2009
    Dito! Babe! Six was great but the one I loved the most was Buried! I was freaking rolling with that one! I love have you take these epic characters and make them human!
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  • From Robs on May 30, 2009
    You've gotta love kids! Elias is so bold and upfront about everything, I can't imagine it will be long until he asks 'the question'. Lucius really is a gentleman, isn't he? I really like the way they're both so unsure around each other too. It's so real and it makes your story a pleasure to read! Off to re-read His Saving Grace now...Look forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From margaritama on May 30, 2009
    Dear lord, I was howling at the lobsters comment. I have a 4yr old and this just reminded me of what comes out of his mouth.

    I really felt Hermione's loss of innocence for some reason in this chapter. I don't think she's had a memorable sexual experience. I mean, of course that time with Lucius was memorable but for the wrong reasons...do I make any sense? Not saying she regrets it but its different when you have mutual, sweaty, hot, delicious sex. I also felt her single mother status keenly. It must have been wonderful to dress up and go out, albeit with a 4yr old in tow. These little 'family' moments must be breaking her heart or at least affecting it.

    I really liked this chapter. Lucius is clearly interested. Do either realize that he's wooing her?
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  • From ANON - ZukoRocks30 on May 29, 2009
    Elias just keeps getting better and better! I agree that Hermione needs to talk with her "boys"...Elias's ears hear way too much! :-) I wonder if Hermione picked up on what Elias said, though, about how Lucius was looking at her like he wanted to take her to bed... ;-)

    Hmm...which will come first: Lucius telling Elias he's his father, or Lucius kissing Hermione? I hope at least one of these comes soon! :-)
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  • From ANON - nightqueen on May 29, 2009
    OMG!! It is official I absolutely love Elias!! I don't think I've laughed so hard in a long time!!! The things that come out of that child's mouth are beyond priceless!!! That makes you a writer extraordinaire, every word you choose is perfectly placed to elicit the right emotions. That's why your stories are among my very favorites!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From jessirose85 on May 29, 2009
    Brillant chapter xxx

    Elias is such a little boy with his little quirks xxx

    Lucius made a fine father of Elias xx

    More soon please xx
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  • From BillsBedroom on May 29, 2009
    Thank you so much for this chapter!! I was having a pretty BAD day (fighting with one of my friends) So to come home to this, I laughed my head off! I really needed this, thank you! I am now in the process of REreading Remember and I am falling in love with it all over again. You should be VERY proud of this story. I agree with the time turner stories, but yours is one of my FEW (2) favorites. I am very much looking forward to the new Serverus/Hermione fic, dark or not. I feel that a light hearted, happy go lucky Severus just isn't him. I personally think that we all have a bit of darkness in us. Some more than others, but it is there none the less.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 29, 2009
    Hey Lady!

    "It means a lot that you accept my writing style, my
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  • From ANON - Star on May 29, 2009
    Have I told you you are one of my faviorite writers? Thank you for another chapter. I am looking forward to seeing this to the end!
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