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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From Robs on May 28, 2009
    Wow....just, wow. You are an author I admire, so whilst checking for updates to other LM/HG fics I am reading, I decided to give yours a go. I am very glad I did. It's brilliant! I love the way you have written Lucius. He is still a proud man by any stretch of the imagination, but he has a really endearing sense of vulnerability. I'm glad Draco is involved in the story too. Often writers kill off both he and Narcissa or just ignore him, which annoys me because although it's probably a challenge to really involve him in the plot, it makes for a more interesting read when he has to go through everything with his father.

    Isn't Elias just adorable? I love the way his intelligence comes through, and how he took authority from Lucius right from the word go. Almost as if he had some innate knowledge that he was his father. Lucius really is trying, bless him. I hope for his sake that Draco forgives him, even if he can't understand.

    Look forward to more!!!
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  • From wishyouwere on May 27, 2009
    I have to say that something that I often struggle with are stories where the 'transition' for Lucius from the wizarding world to the muggle world is just not believable some how. I have never thought that he was 'just interested' in the muggle world, or needed to know about it for 'investment purposes'. To me, a part of him will always carry that smug sense of superiority over the muggle world. That having been said, the way the you have written his interaction with the world is entirely believable. Great job, and I also think that the tension between Lucius and Draco, coupled with the tension between the Weasley clan (including Harry) and Lucius will play a powerful role in this story. I am also interested in seeing what this 'zing' of electricity that happens whenever Hermione and Lucius touch may actually mean. I am waiting eagerly for the next chapter (and if you wanted to reward your loyal readers with a new chapter a day early, that would be awesome!).
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  • From jessirose85 on May 27, 2009
    I read that your story is complete...how many chapters is it??

    You always write such great stories and please add more than one a day as I am addicted xxx

    Mwah Mwah

    Jessie
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 27, 2009
    Hello again! I can't believe I went away for a short while and missed all of this until now! I must say you are doing an incredible job of redeeming him and making it very believable that they are coming together. I loved their "date" even if they didn't know they were on one. And, I think their son is precious and about to show them just how smart he is. lol Please keep up the great work. I am really enjoying this. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From BillsBedroom on May 27, 2009
    First of all, you are very welcome!! Second, that Elias is one smart little boy!! I am of the mind set that he will figure it out before Hermione and Lucius get up the guts to tell him. Just my thoughts on this. I am thoroughly enjoying THIS story, but I do believe that I saw in your replies, that you are working on a Sev story, YEA !!! I think I have read "The Bond" three or four times!!! I LOVE that story. "Remember" is also one of my favorites! Sad but FANTASTIC! I can't wait for the next update!! I am off tomorrow, so I will have plenty of time to read it (HINT HINT)
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  • From Gertie on May 27, 2009
    Is it weird that I geeked out when you remembered me? Thanks for the clarification of the Ron situation. I love all your stuff. Remus may be my personal favorite, but the way you write, I
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  • From ANON - Sygnus on May 27, 2009
    Oh just perfection! I can't wait to read more...*sigh*
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  • From Snakekat on May 27, 2009
    I think I love you,no long waits between chapters, what a star.
    Already looking forward to see what you do next with Snape.
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on May 27, 2009
    I am loving this story already! Please, will Elias ask someone totally inappropriate, like Ron or Molly or Percy, about Lucius being his father? That would be so hilarious!
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  • From alecto on May 27, 2009
    ahh.... come from a day of work, fighting a yucky cold, and i have a chapter waiting for me. elias is a wonderful character. i cannot wait to see him develop. i like this anticipation. no rushing, here.
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  • From ANON - sassmacfru on May 27, 2009
    So glad to see this story up! I have been checking the site for some time now knowing that you had this one in the works. I am enjoying it so much and Elias is a doll! I love how he repeats everything but in his own style! lol. I also read your responses to the other reviews and see I have two more stories to look forward to!!! teeeee!!! ;)
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  • From ANON - Donavon on May 27, 2009

    Always read and enjoy your stories, they are brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!! however, have medic broblems, and the stroke caused problems
    with my speach, which meant i could not use speech soft ware.

    However, when it is for such a wonderful writer, somehow I seem to overcome my problems. Even when i might not give a review always know that I am reading and thoughly enjoying your stories.

    Best wishes, always,

    Donavon.
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  • From ANON - Jesse on May 27, 2009
    Love to see your new story up!! I am always so excited to see something from you because I know I can expect brilliant writing. Can't wait for more.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on May 27, 2009
    Chapter 6 was fab! I can't wait for more.
    And no, you weren't gone that long. But much like an impatient child, it felt like FOREVER to me. LOL!
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on May 27, 2009
    Loved this chapter, it was so sweet and very natural. And yes, if I had seen Lucius in muggles clothes at the zoo I would glare in envy as well!
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