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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From chickaboo on May 26, 2009
    Okay this is just freaking amazing. It's so original, as are all your stories. I love it and I can't wait for more!!
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  • From Gertie on May 26, 2009
    I love getting the first five chapters in a chunklet like this, but I am now so hooked I am twitching for more. As always, impeccable work. I am a little fuzzy on the Ron/Hermoine timeline- first he shoves her off and then he wants a relationship even though she's up the duff? No matter, your sad and angsty Lucius has captured my heart and I can't wait for a happy ending.
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  • From Snakekat on May 26, 2009
    Believable characters and the pacing is excellent and has allowed your readers time to accept that Lucius is now a changed man. You have not taken the easy option of being too sentimental about the struggling, teenage, single mum, coping against the odds.
    I.love everything about this story. Write faster, please.

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  • From crysta656 on May 26, 2009
    You MUST update this story. It's wonderful! I love your vivid descriptions and emotions. Very well done!
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  • From ANON - ZukoRocks30 on May 26, 2009
    I love the concept: a Lucius version of His Saving Grace. Elias is such a hoot! He's such a neat character? Is he patterned after one of your own kids--confusing words like that? I can't wait to see how the relationship between Lucius and Hermione will come about/heat up... ;-)
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  • From ANON - Annaleise on May 26, 2009
    Awesome story! Love your writingS!
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  • From margaritama on May 26, 2009
    This is so sad at times...it's rather heartwrenching. I don't know if it's little Elias that breaks my heart, Hermione's clear loneliness or Lucius' reformed soul. It's probably a combo. I do find this so touching, however. I read all 5 chapters straight through.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on May 26, 2009
    Brilliant, Brilliant beginning darling!! I feel so much for Lucius, and for Hermione. Being a parent, no matter how you go about it is not an easy job, but the rewards are plentiful! My poor Draco.....rightly upset, I'll gladly show him some comfort!!

    I adore Elias, so comical and reminds me of my own son! Out of the mouths of babes..Loo-she-us....parades, 'sag like rabbits' LMAO!! I cannot wait to read the rest of this story!!

    Love and hugs always.....

    Lady B*
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  • From KellyJCR on May 26, 2009
    Wow! Great start! I must say this wasn't what I was expecting the new story to be. That being said I have really sunk my teeth into this already. Lucius seems like a man forced to live a life he didn't want to buy into. With the realization that he has a new son he can taste the forgivness on his tongue. He desprestly want to atone for his sins however I feel he is unknowingly putting all that pressure on the shoulders of a innocent and witty four year old ( who by the way reminds me way to much of my just turned four year old). I think at first Hermione was acting in the best interest of her child but I can see the father and son running at breakneck speed to catch-up on missed time. This will cause her to try and wrangle some order into all of their now crazy lives. This is were I think the tention with the pair will come from. Its great to see Harry as a suporter of her life however, I think she is getting a bum deal from my two least favorite Weasleys. It was Ron who turned her away when she wanted to comfort him after all. Can't wait for more it seems like your last story was ages ago. Well done!
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  • From BillsBedroom on May 26, 2009
    Oh Thank God you are BACK!! Once again you have corrupted me with you fascinating stories. I am thoroughly hooked on this one, not hard to figure out why!! I don't know how you do it, but I get so enraptured in your stories. You do the Lucius and Hermione parings so well. He will always be a troubled soul, yet you always seem to find the way to redemption for him. He will never lose his arrogance, for which I love you for, but he always manages to find his heart and soul. I will of course be eagerly waiting for the rest of the story. I am so glad that I found this website and your beautiful stories.
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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on May 26, 2009
    Awww that is so adorable,. I love your explanation of Elias' conceiving., its so cute but very realistic., Looking forward to the next couple of chapters!
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  • From gtbioteach on May 26, 2009
    Wow! That was worth the wait. I, too, enjoyed Saving Grace. But, this one seems more mature.
    I'm looking forward to your next update.

    The line about the ridiculous conversations one has with children made me seriously LOL. Those boggle the mind!
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  • From jenlaranja on May 26, 2009
    I can't even begin to say how happy I am to see your newest story!
    The beginning was tough, imagining Lucius and Hermione on the night of the battle, but now with Elias it is just so cute! I imagine him running around and saying all those things!
    Just keep on the good work, and please, pretty please, try to update fast, cause I'm already dying here ;)
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  • From Sampdoria on May 26, 2009
    As I said in my review at GE, I am trilled to see another story written by you. I know that I am always in for a good time when you have done the writing. I was even more trilled when I found that there were five chapters submitted here, two more than at GE:-)
    A brilliant and captivating story, I am totally falling in love with little Elias and this last chapter was especially lovely:-))
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  • From mageemi on May 26, 2009
    Wow, I was just thinking the other day that I hadn't read a new story by SG in awhile and lo and behold, today I find a new story. Yay! It must be fate or something. LOL I am lovin it so far and like everyone else I simple adore Elias. Can't wait for more.
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