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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From smmz79 on May 26, 2009
    oh wow that was a great chap i love reading lucius as a father... and i hope that draco comes around.... i love that lucius does not take hermione for granted he sees what she has done for his son.... and what she still does... omg i laughed soooo hard at the penis conversation and i love that he does not get the wording right like 'sag like rabbits' that was good or this was i think my fave 'itchy on her parade' ha ha ha that was great... i loved it ok so i am really excited to read more and see how this unfolds!!!!
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  • From smmz79 on May 26, 2009
    wow another great chap... i have to say that while i LOVED 'his saving grace' i love this a little more bc i think that you have shown hermione more in a single mom role and it is more indepth.... i love it so much because when you write her emotions i can feel them as my own.... i am not surprised about draco nor molly great job i am looking forward to seeing how everyone comes to terms with elias and lucius/hermione
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  • From Citten on May 26, 2009
    wow i love the story!!! i really hate that we didn't get to read about her pregnacy and to see a little bit more of the 'families' reaction, but hay there is always next time right! ;) well draco took that really bad. but as hermione suggested it was to be expected. though the situation reminds me of a part in the movie six days and seven nights, when towards the end the statement was mad after a furnal everbody has sex, well in this case it was that war did it. :) though look at the wonderful gift it brought! :) well things are about to get really interesting and i am so looking forward to it!!! i also love the length of the chapters and i do hope that that stay constant. ;) i so love the way you have done the characters!!! i am really looking forward for lots more and i do hope that you will be posting soon!
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  • From smmz79 on May 26, 2009
    oh my ... they both have very valid points hermione has every right to be upset her life was before her she could have done anything well she still can but you have to prioritize and i am sure she does not regret it at all but lucius is not the only one that got their life planned for them.... lucius should have been able to seen his son but with their backgrounds what was hermione to do... . i loved this chap
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  • From SeraphimeRising on May 26, 2009
    Lovely story. I can't wait until you update!
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  • From smmz79 on May 26, 2009
    chap 2... oh wow talk about a surprise for lucius... elias is sooo cute and very talkative... i love how you write children they always have their own personality which is exactly how it is in RL but some stories have them as a prop... i love how lucius is comanding he really knowsw i how to come across when with children... great chap i am looking forward to their talk
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  • From ANON - Donavon on May 26, 2009
    Its very early in the morning, I am drinking my first cup of coffee, when I realized you had started a new story.

    Its very strong, and moving, I had tears in my eyes when Lucius told Draco. I love Elias he's very sweet. Thank you for a special early morning read.

    Best wishes,
    Donavon
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  • From smmz79 on May 26, 2009
    oh wow the first chap is really heartbreaking but while 'grace' was sad in the first chap the sex encounter between hermione and draco was promising you could see where a relationship could form, in this he really dod not want her and she did not want him but i think that they will find a mutual interest in each other... the part at the end when they arrested him was sad great job as always SG now on to chap 2
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  • From ANON - Steph on May 26, 2009
    Yay, I'm so glad you're back SG. His Saving Grace is one of my favourite stories, and Im so glad that you've decided to re-approach the concept from this angle. The world needs more Lumione! Can't wait for the next chapter, they make for excellent distractions from my essays
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  • From smmz79 on May 26, 2009
    ok sooo before i read this i have to say YAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! do you know how long i have been waiting for another one of your stories!!!! not that it isn't worth the wait because HELL YEAH IT IS!!!!! yahhhh again ok so now i will start reading... :-)
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  • From MB3 on May 25, 2009
    I am so excited that you are posting a new story! It will help keep me occupied as I go through summer college hell. Elias sounds adorable. Green Eggs and Ham is one of my favorite books too! You can be sure that I will be avidly reading this, even though I might not comment again. Can't wait to read the rest!
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  • From triz on May 25, 2009
    love it!!! i must say i like it better than 'his saving grace.' the drama seems more complex, w/c i like.

    elias! oh, what a little cutie! smart and brillant kid. now everytime i think of rabbits, they will remind me of penis's. my mind will never be the same again. rofl!
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  • From OUFAN on May 25, 2009
    I love love love this story. Can't wait to see what's next.
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  • From ANON - nightqueen on May 25, 2009
    A story from you is always worth the wait!! This is terrific! Elias is fabulous!! He makes me laugh with almost everything that comes out of his mouth!! My favorite conversation was the last one about his penis, Harry, Ginny and sagging rabbits. I laughed so hard I had tears in my eyes. On another note war,grief, sadness and pain don't make for good decisions. What happened was somewhat tragic. It is how we deal with the situation after that makes us how we are! I can't wait to see how their story unfolds as they discover each other as well as Elias.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on May 25, 2009
    Yes! You're back!!!! Wow, I was going through withdrawl. Thanks for the new story. I love it so far. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the excellent work and I hope to be reading the update soon.
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