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Reviews for Shadows Of The Past

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From apkblack on July 19, 2009
    So generally I like my Lucius to be dark, and fuzzy/sweet Lucius doesn't move me. But your story was lovely.

    And in re the things you write that he says in the midst of passion, how shall I put this ... let's just say that after reading them, well, my poor husband didn't know what hit him. Didn't stand a chance.

    "Ride me, Siren." Wow. I can just hear that voice ... 'scuse me, off to molest my husband again ...
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 17, 2009

    Chapter 19: Oh, oh. Jessa
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 17, 2009

    Chapter 18: Now that
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 17, 2009

    Chapter 17: Go get
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 17, 2009

    Chapter 16: Closer and closer. Hermione
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 17, 2009

    Chapter 15: Seeing life through a child
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  • From TheLadyMiya on July 11, 2009
    Hello! Oh, I really, really liked this story and when Elias was sick, I began to cry! Booo! And oh, I just loved Jessa, do you think I have a shot at her? She seems bisexual to me ;) I laughed my brains out when Elias saw that she had spanked Draco! Oh, I can just see it in front of me.... mehe! Lucius and Hermione was, as always so cute together! I wonder if what Hermione was about to say to him now at the end was that she was pregnant again... that wouldn't surprise me one bit! What a nice wedding gift too! Oh, and the smut was as always jummy, but I just have a tiny remark I feel like I need to tell, because your story is so wonderful otherwise and that is such a stupid mistake... but Nirvana doesn't mean what you, and many many other, think it means. In fact, it is the opposite of that. When you reach Nirvana in Buddhism, it's like blowing out a candle, your soul cease to exist so it can't be reincarnated. However, in Hinduism, when you stop being reincarnated, you move up to a higher plan and I expect you to feel all good and orgasmy, but that is called reaching Brahma. But as I said, a lot of people mix those two things and Nirvana is such a funny thing so say :P I just thought I could give you the heads up, even if it's such a small error. Otherwise, you write better than most people and it's a delight to read your way with the language! I'm eager to see your next fic!

    Have a nice day!

    Miya

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  • From Cyrielle on July 11, 2009
    Ooh, I think it's one of your best! It's definitely one of my favourites!
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 09, 2009

    Chapter 14: Wow, what was the hostess trying to do, get fired? Patrons must go to such an expensive restaurant all the time with trophy wives. I can
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 09, 2009

    Chapter 13: Ah, so Lucius slept only with the older hens, not the spring chickens. What an eye opener for Harry to see Lucius act the fond father to his little son. That Elias is so charming and cutely naughty. He
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 09, 2009

    Chapters 12: Christmas has arrived early for Hermione. And tonight, I suspect Christmas will come early for Lucius, too. At least he may get to unwrap his buffed and scented, feminine little date down to the lingerie (I hope).

    Ah, it is always a wench to let go and buy yourself something when you need to buy things for your child. But sometimes, it truly is necessary in order to have a more positive attitude toward the day-to-day life of a mother.

    Poor Lucius, dithering about Armani ties and tied up in knots about his first date in forever. It sounds like he
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  • From FemmeBono on July 09, 2009
    That was *perfect*. Completely original, well-written, and best of all, I love a story where Lucius has redemptive qualities and Snape was loved as he should have been. Fantastic.
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  • From KhloeBee on July 07, 2009
    this was an AWESOME story. you should totally make a sequel.
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  • From LaBibliographe on July 06, 2009

    Chapters 9-11: Lucius being a ppor sport at losing ground in a children
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  • From on July 05, 2009
    LOVED IT!!! But, what was that "yeah, about that..." part? Is there something we should know? May we please have another chapter? If anything, I'd like to see them "wrestle" on their honeymoon!
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