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Reviews for Back To You

By : lolawithlove
  • From margaritama on May 28, 2009
    oooohhh...what will happen??? where has she been for 4 months that she stopped visiting him. what's the deal with Viktor and it's so clear Draco had nothing to do with those deaths.
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  • From margaritama on May 26, 2009
    First - FABULOUS dress....a girl after my own heart.

    Now, I want to thank you for the very thorough intro. Despite all the liberties you're taking, I appreciate the upfront manner and presentation of your fic: an older Draco, a dark Krum, a dead Potter, an AU, a mystery, a love story, and no magic. I can't wait. Not many writers do that and its sometimes joltingly annoying to read it when not prepared.

    I like your story so far and love the set up. Viktor seems interesting and his "seer" qualities sound fascinating. Draco sounds freaking SMEXY and HOT! RAWR! I'm so intrigued as to how you'll set up all the other familiar faces we're so used too.

    PS: Some minor concrit, if it's ok?: can you separate your thoughts/graphs? It was a bit hard to read. Also, if you don't want to use a beta, that's cool (at least with me because you have a well-plotted out story so grammar doesn't bother me) but can you give it a quick proofread for spelling?

    Looking forward to more....it's feeling hot hot hot! And good good good.
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