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Reviews for Care to Play?

By : ronsmistress
  • From Eilisbelle on May 28, 2009
    I sense an explosion is on its way... great chapter!!
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  • From goldiducks on May 28, 2009
    wow, you posted really quickly! appreciate it. this story is getting soooo good :)
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  • From caseyjarryn on May 28, 2009
    ooh whats she going to do??
    thank you for the quick updates!
    keep it up!
    xxx
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  • From goldiducks on May 27, 2009
    This story is fantastic! I love that you paint a picture of a smart independant hermoine who likes to take control, it's very unique to this site. I think the way you write it it's totally believable too. I like this a lot more than those stories where hermoine becomes submissive jelly as soon as draco shows any interest. So, update asap I think i'm addicted :)
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on May 27, 2009
    the games we play, now I am going to find someone to play chess with...lol
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on May 27, 2009
    This is absolutely one of the BEST versions of a push/pull story I have ever read! I am thoroughly enjoying their little game. I foresee it being a draw though. :-)

    Thank you!
    HG4eva
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  • From caseyjarryn on May 27, 2009
    haha, dracos getting flustered!! good game Hermione! :)
    keep it up!! I love it!
    You might want to think about a beta,
    there aren't a lot of mistakes, but it doesnt quite flow in a few places.

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  • From Eilisbelle on May 27, 2009
    A very nice simmering!!
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  • From chickaboo on May 27, 2009
    Hehehe. I love this story. It makes me smile. =D
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  • From on May 27, 2009
    Apparently, I didn't get the two words, because my review didn't post... So - LOVE IT! What a great build up & they only kissed! Hhhmmm, Draco seemed flustered. Lucky Hermione!!!
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  • From jaceni50 on May 27, 2009
    I really like this plot. It's interesting and can't wait to see how this story develops. :)
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  • From jubilant on May 27, 2009
    I looooooove this bold Hermione! She's a breath of fresh air compaired to "other" Hermiones. Keep up the writing!
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  • From margaritama on May 27, 2009
    I love how you have very little dialogue...nice fic.
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  • From LadyDisdain on May 27, 2009
    Interesting start,. I wonder where they both are going with these games. I think your story needs a little more conflict? Some resistance? And I think it would also be wise to start introduce secondary characters to keep it interesting :) I look forward to an update!
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  • From luciusmalfoy76 on May 27, 2009
    Good grief what a kiss.
    Lucky lucky girl.
    More please
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