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Reviews for In Love and War

By : crysta656
  • From ANON - NyssaM on August 26, 2009
    so this story is amazing! i love the progression of all the characters and now Lucius is in the picture... what happend next????? this is too good to abandon!!
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  • From ANON - NyssaM on July 30, 2009
    oh please update soon! i need to know!
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  • From evedarkheart on July 11, 2009
    Hermione is such an idiot why in the hell would any female put up with that. please keep going i love it.
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  • From Citten on July 10, 2009
    boy did you through me through a loop! i was totally not expecting to see this out come! i am also hoping that you will rective the problem. ;) i am also astonished at what happened on three things one: i CANNOT believe her friends!!!! two: i SERIOUSLY CANNOT believe ron (though a lot of fanfiction hermione lovers can-he is a dork.) three: what is with hermione has she forgotten who she is she is so much stronger than this. :) well i do hope that lucius a)gets his rear in gear b) whips hermione into her old self and c) knocks weasley on his 'ass' :) do update and soon!!!!
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  • From dragongirl on July 09, 2009
    Ok! Hermione doesn't need this treatment what she did was necessary and brave. I am with Bill here.. Her punishment had been to long, she needs a little happiness. Harry, Ron, the others setting aside Charlie, Bill and George deserve a little, no let me correct that a huge kick in the butt. They do not deserve her, she is to precious to be in the family and the way they treat her is so wrong. Please give her a divorce and quickly. Keep them coming.
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  • From margaritama on July 07, 2009
    This chapter was totally unexpected yet wonderful. My how her life has turned out. Not at all what she expected.

    My heart broke for her at nearly every word. She doesn't deserve this and I hope, pray that she will get revenge on those "friends" who have deserted her and her lousy git of a husband. I hope she finds herself again. I suspect it'll be with a vengeance...YAY!


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  • From HarryGinny4eva on July 06, 2009
    I am so sorry I haven't reviewed before now. Please forgive me. I have been reading this story since you first put it up and it is intriguing. As much as I can't stand what Lucius and Hermione's action have done to her life and her friendships, I hope she can ultimately find some happiness with him. I hate how much I abhor Ron for what he does to her and how much it saddens me that Harry would turn on her like that. And, Ginny... Sigh. For her one action to have lost her everything is just so unbelievably awful. I don't care about the wizarding world at large, but Bill had the right of it. How long before they break her completely? I know you have a plan, so I will sit back and wait and read, because the story is compelling and well-written. I just pray somehow, others come to their senses and we get a full, happy, mentally healthy Hermione back. This shattered shell is so sad.

    But, the story and writing are fantastic! So, please don't stop. :-)

    Thanks!
    HG4eva
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  • From ANON - VoraciousReader on July 06, 2009
    Wow, that really set the tone of the last ten years. I'd have probably knifed Ron as soon as I could. His treatment borders on abusive, certainly controlling. Grab the kids and run, Herms, there is more to the world than Britain, even wizarding britain. Nicely done. Crysta.
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  • From Obezyanka on June 23, 2009
    This isn't an Erotic novel. This is best featured at Fanfiction do net. Three stars for good writing. Minus Two for the content.
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  • From margaritama on June 23, 2009
    that was so powerful....I could taste Hermione's pain. Kingsley is rather harsh, isn't he? I have a hard time believing he'd put her in manacles - in war, there are extreme circumstances and this counts as one. I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on June 12, 2009
    Interesting story., Wonder where it's going., Keep up the good work! THough I'm appaled that you are saying you wished you could join the death eaters., really., how can you say that?
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  • From CoCoM on June 08, 2009
    I read this on FF.net and am thoroughly enjoying it. I cannot believe that someone told you it was crap; what a cow! Please continue!
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  • From drlincu on June 06, 2009
    Love the story! Keep working on it.
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  • From ANON - jacquie on June 05, 2009

    This is so good I love your story that beta is full of it thank you for sharing.
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  • From diamondhelen on June 05, 2009
    I'm enjoying your story, i don't think its crap and you should keep going, that was just the beta's opinion, not everyone will like every story, but i'm enjoying it, i think you write quite well and there are hardly any typing or grammar errors that i've noticed. don't give up!
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