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Reviews for Blood is thicker then water,

By : luciusmalfoy76
  • From lisasnape on July 01, 2009
    I loved chapter 12. I liked the way you showed us the memory before Hermione and Draco saw it. That was very inventive and also good story telling. I also loved how Narcissa eventually got her way with Lucius. Girl Power!! Great Job! Looking forward to see what you've got up your sleeve.

    Lisa
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  • From voraciousreader on June 27, 2009
    Chapter twelve was great! I thought you established the different relationships perfectly between Narcissa and Draco and Narcissa and Lucius. Loved it when she summoned his pruners and he chided her for it. Very nicely done.
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  • From dragongirl on June 25, 2009
    Bravo!!!!!!!!11
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  • From luciusmalfoy76 on June 25, 2009
    Hello kazfeist
    I am not going to answer that just yet but please DO stick with me all will be explained.
    Uliani
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  • From kazfeist on June 25, 2009
    I'm a bit confused...is Lucius with Severus, or with Narcissa, or both? :D
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  • From dragongirl on June 18, 2009
    Hey keep them coming after that howler this is getting better. So, Draco loves her!.. Also you need a beta, if you want I can help you out my email is ishtar2012@aol.com, See you in the next.
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  • From voraciousreader on June 18, 2009
    I loved the howler, very funny! Uliani, I am very flattered that you would ask me to be your beta, but sadly, my own grammar and punctuation leave much to be desired. That's why I suggested you find one, since I have many of the same problems. You should go to the message board and leave a request for a beta that has at least a few stories of their own out there, so you know they have experience. HOWEVER: If they tell you to stop writing or to abandon a story completely, get another beta. Don't let them control your writing, they are there to help you make it better. I have an old english textbook from high school that I consult for help, also.
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  • From lisasnape on June 18, 2009
    It's me again. I loved the memories. Now I understand why Lucius is being so kind to Hermione; first because his mother died the same way and second, because his son is in love with her! OOOH, good stuff! I liked the long look Hermione gave Draco after they took their heads out of the pensieve. The howler was great too! This was my favorite part: "I WILL HAVE YOUR BALLS FOR EARRINGS!" I laughed so hard imagining Mrs. Weasley shouting those words! Also, I liked the way you made Severus kind to the house elf; I always imagined that he would be. And now I find out that my darling Sev is a wonderful cook. If only he would invite me over for dinner....

    Looking forward to more, Lisa
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  • From lisasnape on June 18, 2009
    Becky, I just read chapters 8 & 9 and before I embarked on the next two, I just had to make one quick comment. You went ahead and made Lucius a Vegetarian! Ha Ha! I can't believe you found a way to fit that in there. Now on to the next two chapters so I can find out what fun you have planned for Hermione and her three gorgeous wizards! ;~)
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  • From voraciousreader on June 17, 2009
    I loved the memory scenes, they explain a great deal of the Malfoy's motivations: Lucius has sympathy and Draco has affection. This has a lot going for it.
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  • From Snakekat on June 17, 2009
    I love that you are keeping everyone guessing what the Malfoys are up to.
    I also like the Snape/Lucius bi twist.
    well done
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  • From dragongirl on June 17, 2009
    Absolutlty! This is a brilliant move!.So when do we expect a little bid more longer chapters. I hope very soon!
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  • From voraciousreader on June 17, 2009
    I just found this and I want to make it very clear that I like it so far! Please understand that this is NOT a flame, I just have a couple of technical issues and I hope some suggestions won't offend you? Your build-up of the mystery was nice, as was her recognition of Snape, but I think that perhaps you may need a beta to help you with things like some punctuation and flow. I noticed that some of the other reviewers mentioned how short your chapters are and perhaps a little more description could help with that. I think you are still discovering your own style, but things do seem a little choppy at points. I'm just trying to help, so please don't take this wrongly, ok? I very much like the story and will continue to read if you continue to write>
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  • From jessirose85 on June 17, 2009
    That was a fantastic update...not what I expected xxx

    Please update so I can find out what is going on....I hate cliffhangers as you can tell by my persitence xx
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  • From jessirose85 on June 16, 2009
    I cannot wait to hear their explanations xxx

    I have a feeling Hermione is going to love it there xx

    I am going to guess that maybe she is related to Snape ..that's just a twist I would see coming xx
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